TammyBubbles

My GOD! It's night time here. I wish I read this story in the day time.Dear auhtor,your story tok my sleep away.I'm totally spooked.

andrea_pattinson4869

this is a very amuzing and frieghting story. if you like thrillers you will love this story. the character is a bit crazy but arent we all a bit crazy? dont we all get thoose sick urges to...well lets just leave it at that its an awsome story so you should read it.

philip_carter8915

Amazing! this way of writing beats everything! The story abounds in impressing and fascinating phrases and ideas.

rebecca_guthrie9307

This Story Was Well Written I Thouqht. I Aqree With What Someone Said About Readinq It Twice. It Makes Alot More Sense Once You Read It A Second Time. I Love This Story.

christopher_ward501

I'm not a fan of short stories. Authors have a tendency to focus so much on the story build-up, that they forget about grammar. However, I was very drawn to this one in particular.

cheryl_logan-summers1257

i thought it was a brilliant story, but it was a bit obvious. i would certainly read it again.

m_bhatia8072

it is a well written story,a very intesting story to read on

paul_graham6698

That was good! I liked it. It wasn't extremely engaging at times, but it still had a kind of eerie, spooky air to it! I do have to say I have never read a story quite like it though, so I found it interesting

mark_renwick2658

Nice! a very good story. really easy to understand and i like the way its written.

lynne_watts2752

I really enjoyed this story--more than so many that I've read on this website! It was very easily read, had interesting content, and was just over all a great short story.

tim_collins8581

This story was very interesting; it takes a basic horror plot and gives it a twist of the supernatural. The author really succeeded in having his readers pay more attention to the story and really get into it and analyze it. He gets people thinking and holds their interest. He also makes the story seem confusing so that the readers actually stay in tune and think about the story more; he gets them to re-read some parts and think about it in depth more than other readers. He gets everybody hooked and involved.

michael_foody8824

the story was quite suspenseful and very interesting to read. the description was just right and the amount of detail really painted a picture in my mind. The ending kind of left me hanging but i believe that was the purpose of it, to instill wonder in the readers mind.

janet_mcallister9181

This story was very interesting! I loved how the horror was mixed up with some supernatural details. The story was somewhat confusing but it kept me intrigue. I loved how the story has horror in it but mixes a little jealousy in the mix. The author did a wonderful job keeping it creepy but entertaining.

carol_bonner3077

I really enjoyed this story and it made the reader feel as if they were there, on the scene. The discriptive detail was excellent!

camilla_hopper4641

Oh, my God. Just, wow. "We could buy our way to Paradise." WOW. What I wouldn't give to write like this!