Feedback 1 Strongest image and why:
In the 4
I like the strong deep blue colours and how the clothing compliments the blue walls, the simple position of the model, the composition and the atmospheric lighting. On the 6
I like the sepia brown tones that make the picture look older and classical. I like the composition and the models position. I like the bright lighting and how there is a subtle spotlight on the focal point of the model.
Weakest image and why:
, just b
ecause of the composition, I don’t think this in combination with the
mixed tones of lighting was as successful
I really like the strong tones of the colours and the lighting, which is flattering on the models and surroundings.
Areas for improvement:
Experiment with different kinds of lighting and different settings to make the set of pictures more dynamic and different from each other, so there is a wider range of images.
Any other comments:
The magazine covers look really affective and professional.
Feedback 2 Strongest image and why:
I think that the strongest image is the 6
image. The photograph itself looks really professional. The model is stood in a natural/casual/un-structured way which is probably the best bit of the photograph. The angle is also really good, the model is stood around three quarters of the way across which is good, she is not to close up to the camera and has a good amount of space around her.
Weakest image and why
I’d say the weakest image is the third one
as I feel as if it is to under-toned. Also, the model is in the middle which gives it a bit of a cliché feel, this could always be improved by cropping either the left or the right side of the photo so the model is maybe a little out of being straight in the middle.