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dimasangka_3@scribd

I love reading short stories but this one is not so interesting because the plot is somehow similar to other commonly read plots in short stories, movies and novels. I find it so very immoral and too lusty.

reply11 / 16 / 2009

uploaded a new revision for this document (#3)

11 / 09 / 2009
TA NED

I love the picture on the front cover wish I could draw like that!

reply10 / 29 / 2009
TA NED

Love the picture on the front cover wish i could dra like that!

reply10 / 29 / 2009
dimasangka_3@scribd

what do you think about the different devices used in the story are they effectively used?

11 / 16 / 2009
anandawolf

Thanks so much for your great comments. Ananda

reply10 / 23 / 2009
miss mai

amazing u rock! I loved it u r so talented girl

reply10 / 18 / 2009
anandawolf

Thanks Miss Mai, I really appreciate the nice feedback. I shoulld mention though that Ananda, in this case, is a man (Ananda was the Buddha's personal attendant for twenty-five years), although it is also a female name these days, especially in India. Again, thanks so much. Ananda

10 / 18 / 2009
Mark Grinage

1 word wow a great read peace wmmelvin

reply10 / 16 / 2009
anandawolf

Thanks much for your nice comment. Metta, Ananda

10 / 16 / 2009
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