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A Critique on "Story of Stuff: The Critique"
This is a critique on the "Story of Stuff", an educational documentary of materials economyand its environmental effects, put in layman's terms, and the accompanying "Story of Stuff: TheCritique". The "Story of Stuff" is a video by Annie Leonard, a former employee of Greenpeace.The video critique was done by Lee Doren, codenamed "HowTheWorldWorks". He seems to be a popular "disagreer" on YouTube, and already has many video rebuttals to his name. It would seemquite a few have a high regard of him - but I will focus only on this particular critique. I will refer to the critic as "he" or "him", and the Story of Stuff as "SOS".Since this is a text critique of a video, it certainly wouldn't be as methodically effective asthe subject (which is a video critique of another video). So before reading on, you'll have to watchthe 5 videos yourself. See links below for the videos.
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 Note: I realized just before finishing Part I that the whole critique is just too long, and thenumber of statements I want to react to just too many, so I will just skim through parts 2 to 4. Ican’t have this critique take all of my time after all.Part I~~~ "It has caused 9-year-olds to fear that buying Legos will destroy the Earth." ~~~So what? The thing is, he's manipulating his words to turn a fact in his favor. Here's theREAL article:"... And many children who watch it take it to heart: riding in the car one day with his parents in Tacoma, Wash., Rafael de la Torre Batker, 9, was worried about whether it would be bad for the planet if he got a new set of Legos... When driving by a big-box store, you could seehe was struggling with it,” his father, David Batker, said. But then Rafael said, “It’s O.K. if Ihave Legos because I’m going to keep them for a very long time,” Mr. Batker recalled."
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A 9-year-old, already caring for the environment? I'd say Rafael's a better man than manyothers out there. It's amazing how he (Mr. Critic) has turned something so applaudable intosomething the world should somehow avoid.~~~ “The fact of the matter is the Earth is compacted with tons of tons of resources we don’teven know how to use yet.” ~~~What is he trying to say? He might have meant no harm, but no matter how I look at thestatement and at how it was molded into an argument, a single unmistakable meaning comes out – 
“We should just enjoy our lives as we always did. After all, there are still “tons and tons of resources” we can take advantage of from this Earth.”
Enjoy our lives, as in consume andconsume from the environment and give nothing back? So we should just sit back and wait for those tons and tons to be somehow depleted, and only
then
take action? That’s a lot of rubbish!Actually, I personally don’t understand why that whole “Efficiency vs. Prices” argument was evenmentioned here. Or maybe it was just explained the wrong way – stated inefficiently, so to speak.~~~ “More than 50% of tax $ according to who?” ~~~I have nothing much to say about this since I know little of tax pie charts as used in thevideo. All I can say is that if SOS used only a single source, and probably a biased one* since it isfrom an anti-military activist group, Annie should not have mentioned that part about tax.
* No offense, but it is a popular notion that activists are biased one way or another 
~~~ “I was curious where on earth she got the idea that it was the government’s job to take careof us, well, it turns out that it was a misreading of the Constitution.” ~~~I ask you, what is the target audience of SOS? Isn’t it school children, elementary to highschool? So for these younger ones, would you include in a video documentary quotations from the
 
Preamble of the U.S. Constitution and the U.S. Declaration of Independence? No, I doubt you’deven use the phrase “promote the general welfare” to describe the government’s “job”. “Take careof us” certainly is the closest thing you could get to translating “promote the general welfare” intolayman’s terms.Imagine, if a kid asks you, “what does she mean by “promoting our general welfare”?”Would you go into detail about the creation of the Constitution? Say, maybe, “James Madison, theFather of the Constitution, said that the words “general welfare” could be misinterpreted inunlimited ways that the creators were not able to contemplate.” Let’s assume that for some bigchance, the child understood you. Wouldn’t that just mean that the Preamble is erroneous? And if the Preamble is erroneous, what would that make the Constitution? What would that make thecivilization that was built on this Constitution? I believe it’s just safer to give the children thatinterpretation that the government is there to “take care of us”. Let them build on that theory asthey grow up.~~~ “So what, the fact of the matter is that this is based on sales that means the corporations are providing goods and services that the people need to survive, and it is a meaningless statistic.”~~~Preceding this statement, he admits that “country GDPs include some corporations’ sales”.This means that the SOS statistic, “Of the top 100 economies in the world, 51 are corporations,only 49 are countries” may be even worse. If we were able to separate the country GDPs from thecorporate sales, the ratio might turn out to be higher in favor of corporations.Is this really such “a meaningless statistic”? I wonder, why then did he not support hisstatement as to how come it is, for him, a meaningless statistic? I think SOS was just trying to saythat corporations are now more influential in terms of human welfare than the governmentsthemselves. This just feels wrong to me. Yes, corporations provide goods and services for the people. But “goods and services that the people need to survive”? I disagree. Needless to say, thecorporation is not the only form of business that can provide goods and services. My view of  business corporations is that of a humanoid devoid of conscience, which is probably also its bestadvantage from the perspective of entrepreneurs. Corporations are run by a select circle of people,with a moderator to mediate which decisions are best for the business. And what is best for the business is what generates the most profit. These decisions might not have been possible had it been in the hands of a single person as it would weigh greatly on his conscience (as compared towhen the weight of the matter is borne by several). In this way, governments and corporationsdiffer. Again, from my own outlook, governments are “of the people, by the people, and for the people”. It exists for “the general welfare”, and here I agree that there are differences between this phrase and “taking care of us”. Corporations sell goods and services to “take care of us”, becausewe are customers and we are the source of profit. But who is this “us”, and who is this “we”? It isonly for those with the capability – yes, money – to avail of those goods and services. Thus, it isnot for the “general welfare”, but only for “the welfare of the moneyed ones”. Therefore, it is NOTmeaningless to inform people of the current state of the top 100 economies. It is simply not rightthat the corporation has the upper hand over the government when it is the latter that really does“care” about its people.~~~ “Unions… Environmental Organizations… Trial Lawyers…” ~~~As stated before, what sets SOS apart from counterpart documentaries is that it is in“layman’s terms” – designed to be the most straightforward, yet simple and easy to understand.How can you include unions and trial lawyers and still expect it to be easily understood? I, myself,don’t even know how these work, but I know for sure that corporations have the largest influenceon governments, even among these. Why? Unions work to provide security and acquire better working conditions for its members. Wouldn’t these work more directly on the corporations thanthe governments? And maybe I’ve been reading too much (this is an honest question), but aren’ttrial lawyers in this case “owned” by the powerful corporations? And the most distressing,
 
“Environmental Organizations… that are having everybody buy wind plants and solar plants, andall this other nonsense.”
 Nonsense
, he says! Building energy plants based on renewable resourceslike wind and solar energy, cutting down dependence on non-renewable resources like coal and oil,and in the process, reducing waste and pollution output; where is the “nonsense” in that? From aspendthrift’s point of view, the nonsense would be the cost of building these plants relative to theenergy output. But let’s face it; we’re in an “environmental age”. People would not just stand downwhile their planet is being “trashed” (as Annie said) just to increase profits. It might even be better for countries to switch to renewable energy than find more oil sources, since we’re running out of oil, after all.~~~ “Yes, we cut down trees and replant them to make life possible for most of the people onthis planet… Waters have been cleaner than they’ve ever been in the last couple decades. And yes, people who eat meat do it to increase their standard of living and also to make life possible for  people on this planet.” ~~~He’s been saying that Annie’s words can be easily misinterpreted. He should have beenmore careful about his own words then. “We cut down trees
to make life possible for this planet 
”?And again, “we eat meat also
to make life possible for this planet 
”? He seems to have some sort of twisted perception that “life” refers only to “human life”. First, yes, we once needed, and for theless developed countries, still need, trees for wood to build our homes with. But just saying “we cutdown trees” takes for granted the sheer 
magnitude
of the logging industry. He even added “andreplant them”, yet we can never replant enough to counterbalance the staggering amount of treescut down around the globe in a year. Just to share some facts,From 1990 to 2000, the net forest loss was 8.9 million hectares per year.
From 2000 to 2005, the net forest loss was 7.3 million hectares per year - an area the
 size of Sierra Leone or Panama and equivalent to 200 km
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per day.
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Experts
 
estimates that we are losing 137 plant, animal and insect species every singleday due to rainforest deforestation. That equates to 50,000 species a year.
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Though the net rate has decreased in recent years, 200 square kilometers
 per day
is just waytoo much! It’s much too much indeed just to make “human life possible” in the demise of theinferior, unimportant, “non-human” species.~~~ “As resources become more and more scarce, the supply of those resources decreases, andthen the price of those resources increases. That makes people naturally not buy those resourcesand look for alternative resources that are cheaper. That is what’s going to happen once we startrunning out of resources, and nothing needs to be done about it.” ~~~ Now this is the right time for this argument to come onstage. It really doesn’t mean much inthe context of the earlier part. I understand his point, but I still think something’s wrong. WhenSOS said “we’re running out of resources”, it doesn’t necessarily mean that we will completely runout of particular resources. In fact, I also believe we would never run out of any non-biologicalresource. But when we say that a certain resource has become so scarce that it becomes so difficultto extract, and in turn becomes too expensive, wouldn’t we consider it much the same as when it iscompletely depleted? Next is the part about “nothing needs to be done about it.” Bringing back the critic’s modelof an “unscratched Earth, with tons and tons of natural resources”, how are we ever going to extractthose? He said that resources are not resources until we know how to use them. Yes, we know theEarth’s core’s composition, and we know that we can use it. But in this case, wouldn’t thedefinition of “resources” include “extractability”, or whatever term it is to describe any possibilityof acquiring the said resources? The resources we are dealing with here are resources up to only acertain depth into the Earth’s crust. Why? Because it is only up to this point that we have know-how of resource extraction
with a net cost lower than the resource’s worth.
And because we’redealing with a finite area of feasible resource extraction, we may just one day “run out of 
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