This Is NOT Poetry

 
 
 
 
 
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SoraRyu

lol humor and sincerity all rolled into one

12 / 19 / 2009
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Raul Aqua Replied: that's it EXACTLY - thanks for reading SoraRyu 12 / 19 / 2009

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SoraRyu Replied: ^^ :D 2 days ago

Fre2Bme

Great work, have you thought about continuing the piece?

11 / 20 / 2009
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Raul Aqua Replied: i will probably work on it again at some point - it is a somewhat wobbly construct but i like it - where do you think it might go? 11 / 20 / 2009

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Fre2Bme Replied: You never really know, but I can definately say I enjoyed the piece and I wasn't ready for it to end. It was like being captured and just dropped, you know like some relationships do, but anyway, I liked it and would like to read more of your work. Great job! Fre 11 / 20 / 2009

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Raul Aqua Replied: thanks Fre - i think to some degree this poem is meant to drop you off at the curb - ugly, isn't it? 11 / 20 / 2009

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Fre2Bme Replied: The poem no, the concept of how life can be, Yes! 11 / 20 / 2009

dollyc19

WOW...if this is not, then what is!!!

11 / 14 / 2009
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Raul Aqua Replied: we're not going there! :) 11 / 14 / 2009

Raul Aqua

thanks brandonfan - you got my feelings on the whole thing exactly - sarky w/ a side o' love and admiration!

11 / 11 / 2009

brandonfan

Sarcasm mixed with love and admiration, I love it!

11 / 10 / 2009

maxiegomez

You are right, Raul. This is maybe too gritty to be POETRY. So, what is poetry? Please more of this!

11 / 06 / 2009
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Raul Aqua Replied: hi max - i have no idea what poetry is but i write it anyway! thanks! 11 / 06 / 2009

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maxiegomez Replied: and that's what makes it real! 11 / 06 / 2009

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Kenosis23 Replied: I spent my whole college career avoiding anything that could be construed as an English class and so when I started writing it was with no idea of what I was doing. I agree with you Raul, so what you do. 11 / 06 / 2009

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Kenosis23 Replied: "do what you do" (the evil specter of editing grins again!) 11 / 06 / 2009

RoseDQ2878

Hey, I like your style. Keep writing.

11 / 05 / 2009
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Raul Aqua Replied: Thanks Rose 11 / 05 / 2009

thomaswingfield

witty and touching, nice mix! really enjoyed it!

11 / 04 / 2009
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Raul Aqua Replied: Thank you Thomas. I was in love when I wrote it. 11 / 04 / 2009

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thomaswingfield Replied: well that goes without saying! If I'm honest, I wish I wrote it, with similar poems of my own saying the same thing but nowhere near as succinctly as you did... 11 / 04 / 2009

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Raul Aqua Replied: most kind of you thomas 11 / 04 / 2009

Kenosis23

This is not a comment because if it were I would tell you how much I enjoyed this, and I'm not going to say THAT.

11 / 04 / 2009
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Kenosis23 Replied: :) 11 / 04 / 2009

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Raul Aqua Replied: Perfect! Thanks K! 11 / 04 / 2009

Raul Aqua

What secret is that dear MiMi? And thank you very much for your kind words.

11 / 02 / 2009
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Adventure Gal MiMi Replied: The secret that you have multi talents, you can write! But, can you walk and chew gum at the same time? How about listen to me whine and hike Maiden Pools? 11 / 02 / 2009

Raul Aqua

Thank you Sarita - I'm glad you enjoyed this. It made me happy to write it.

11 / 02 / 2009

sarita brown

i like this a lot. it made me smile. and man, it should work too!!. :)

10 / 31 / 2009
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Raul Aqua Replied: thank you Sarita. that bit of writing makes me happy. I'm glad it made you smile! 10 / 31 / 2009

Adventure Gal MiMi

So, looks like you've been hiding a secret! This is great!

10 / 30 / 2009
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Raul Aqua Replied: What secret do you mean? And thanks! 10 / 30 / 2009