Raul Aqua Replied: that's it EXACTLY - thanks for reading SoraRyu 12 / 19 / 2009

SoraRyu Replied: ^^ :D 2 days ago

Raul Aqua Replied: i will probably work on it again at some point - it is a somewhat wobbly construct but i like it - where do you think it might go? 11 / 20 / 2009

Fre2Bme Replied: You never really know, but I can definately say I enjoyed the piece and I wasn't ready for it to end. It was like being captured and just dropped, you know like some relationships do, but anyway, I liked it and would like to read more of your work. Great job! Fre 11 / 20 / 2009

Raul Aqua Replied: thanks Fre - i think to some degree this poem is meant to drop you off at the curb - ugly, isn't it? 11 / 20 / 2009

Fre2Bme Replied: The poem no, the concept of how life can be, Yes! 11 / 20 / 2009

Raul Aqua Replied: we're not going there! :) 11 / 14 / 2009

Raul Aqua Replied: hi max - i have no idea what poetry is but i write it anyway! thanks! 11 / 06 / 2009

maxiegomez Replied: and that's what makes it real! 11 / 06 / 2009

Kenosis23 Replied: I spent my whole college career avoiding anything that could be construed as an English class and so when I started writing it was with no idea of what I was doing. I agree with you Raul, so what you do. 11 / 06 / 2009

Kenosis23 Replied: "do what you do" (the evil specter of editing grins again!) 11 / 06 / 2009

Raul Aqua Replied: Thanks Rose 11 / 05 / 2009

Raul Aqua Replied: Thank you Thomas. I was in love when I wrote it. 11 / 04 / 2009

thomaswingfield Replied: well that goes without saying! If I'm honest, I wish I wrote it, with similar poems of my own saying the same thing but nowhere near as succinctly as you did... 11 / 04 / 2009

Raul Aqua Replied: most kind of you thomas 11 / 04 / 2009

Kenosis23 Replied: :) 11 / 04 / 2009

Raul Aqua Replied: Perfect! Thanks K! 11 / 04 / 2009

Adventure Gal MiMi Replied: The secret that you have multi talents, you can write! But, can you walk and chew gum at the same time? How about listen to me whine and hike Maiden Pools? 11 / 02 / 2009

Raul Aqua Replied: thank you Sarita. that bit of writing makes me happy. I'm glad it made you smile! 10 / 31 / 2009

Raul Aqua Replied: What secret do you mean? And thanks! 10 / 30 / 2009