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Analiria 8 months ago

I kind of like the idea of the story, but the writing could be better improved. There are grammatical mistakes which are easily breezed over, but it is these mistakes that should be taken noticed of. i, for example, should be capital I. Look for a beta reader, or better yet, improve on your writing.

Write more, and be better! Practice makes perfect. ^^

~Lia