Alter Me Change My Ways Make Me More Polished Make

 
 
 
 
 
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about peole wanting to change you and my pet hate self help books (sorry if anyone likes them )

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11/13/2009

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enkidukid

Missed this little beauty earlier - it's got lots of punch up front but still tender at heart - lovely.

11 / 14 / 2009
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Linglang Replied: thank you ,and I will check out the poem you mentioned and get back to you ,As for Rilke "requiem for a friend"makes my heart burst ,I can read it again and again ,which is why your poems remind me of him ,I keep re-reading yours,they just get to me :) 11 / 14 / 2009

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enkidukid Replied: I appreciate your kind words - if pushed for my favourite bit of Rilke I might just have to say 7th Duino Elegy from line 10 and on for the next 20 lines or so, the sheer ecstasy of this is unsurpassed. 11 / 14 / 2009

brandonfan

I always felt like the ones that needed self help books really weren't capable of helping themselves in the first place right? : )

11 / 13 / 2009
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Linglang Replied: agree ,although since I have arrived on scribd ,I am thinking of writing a selfhelp book ... lol -thanks for the comments :) 11 / 13 / 2009

thomaswingfield

just brilliant! *checks down comment to make sure the adjective's unique...*

11 / 13 / 2009
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Linglang Replied: thank you so much ,appreciate your comments :) 11 / 13 / 2009

nir37

:)).. make me a social bore-make me less original.. haha perfect...

11 / 13 / 2009
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Linglang Replied: :) 11 / 13 / 2009

sarita brown

my very favourite poem you have written to date. yes yes and yes. brava. both for form and content, ling!

11 / 13 / 2009
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Linglang Replied: thankyou Sarita ,its weird really because I don't really like it that much,yet I like why I wrote it ,if that makes sense x 11 / 13 / 2009

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sarita brown Replied: yeah but the format is great!! i liked it alot!~! 11 / 13 / 2009

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Linglang Replied: :) I shall bow to your wisdom 11 / 13 / 2009