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ZOOM - PilotByDavid PolkDavid Polk176 Dusty Rose CourtSimi Valley, CA 93065805.428.5775dpolk@mac.com
 
FADE IN:INT. FACES NIGHTCLUB - NIGHTTECHNO DANCE MUSIC thumps. The place is jammed withfashionable twenty-somethings on the prowl. At the bar,clubbers line up two-deep.Carly (25), a bartender, mixes an OLD FASHIONED. She’sgorgeous - long dark hair, violet eyes and a 5-alarm body.She puts the cocktail in front of ANDRE (28), agood-looking, smooth-talking player in a silk suit. He dropsa $20.ANDREKeep it, beautiful.CARLY(a noncommittal smile)Thanks.GUS (30s) steps up behind Carly.GUSSorry I’m late, Carly. I can takeit from here.CARLY(a genuine smile)Thanks, Gus.Andre takes a sip of his Old Fashioned and admires Carly asshe leaves the bar.INT. STAFF ROOM - NIGHTCarly clocks out, says ’good night’ to a few club EMPLOYEES.From the rapport between them, it’s obvious she’swell-liked.INT. FACES NIGHTCLUB - NIGHTAs Carly makes her way to the exit she looks up to findAndre standing in front of her.ANDRE(his ’sexy’ smile)I’m Andre.(CONTINUED)
 
CONTINUED: (2) 2.CARLYHi, Andre. I’m late.ANDREIt’s two in the morning. What couldyou possibly be late for? It’sCarly, right?Carly’s seen this movie, doesn’t want a ticket.CARLYLook, Andre. I’ve got a boyfriend.He hands her a BUSINESS CARD. A phone number is written onthe back.ANDREIn case your boyfriend forgets whatan incredible lady he’s got.CARLY(a blow off smile)I won’t let him forget.She pockets the card and moves past him into the crowd.Andre shrugs and eyes a FINE EBONY SISTER at he bar.EXT. FACES NIGHTCLUB - NIGHTCarly exits the club, says ’good night’ to a BOUNCER, whochecks her out as she walks down the street.EXT. ACROSS THE STREET - NIGHTIn the shadows, an unseen STALKER is checking Carly out too.He follows her at a distance as she walks down DiversyStreet, past other clubs and bars. She crosses the streetand enters a train station. The sign above the double doorreads: "Armitage".INT. ARMITAGE STATION - NIGHTThe station is empty. Carly swipes a PLASTIC CARD, goesthrough the turn-style and up the stairs. Moments later,the still unidentified stalker does the same.
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