Instead:
Dr. Professor X,
Would you please send me my current grade in the class?

Jared Diamond does not adequately support
his argument that agriculture is a mistake. He does
not account for the development of agriculture in
ways that diversify crops and reduce the risk of
failure and famine. He is also inconsistent in the time
frames he uses to compare hunter/gatherer and
agricultural societies. Finally, he does not account
for why people in industrialized societies today live
much longer than hunter/gatherer societies.

1. He does not account for the development of
agriculture in ways that diversify crops and reduce the risk
of failure and famine.

3. Does not account for why people in industrialized
societies today live much longer than hunter/gatherer
societies.