Josef

To the commenter named "tricked on reddit": Thanks for the feedback. Sorry you didn't like it; I'm glad you didn't have to pay anything only to find it wasn't something you liked. There's a "Delete" link beside your comments (must be because they are comments on a document on scribd I own), but I think it's healthier to keep your comments; not everyone's going to like this novel, and your comments help to reinforce that. If you want to help out, here's my suggestion: apart from slagging me and the novel off, how about posting reading recommendations for other novels or books which you think are vastly superior? That way, anyone who happens across this page will at least have your suggestions if they end up sharing your opinion of my writing. JA