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Okay, this is my version of what happens after Breaking Dawn.

This is my first
time writing a story so if you review, please feel free to tell the truth.I warn you, It
is short. This is my version of Bella and Edward four years after Breaking Dawn.
It was nearly eight A.M. when I heard a faint moan. Edward didn’t seem to notice
though, he was too busy playing. “Edward, stop. Did you hear that moan?” I asked
quietly. “Yes, but I thought it was you.”he said. “Well, it wasn’t me. Get dressed,
I’m gonna go check on Renesmee.” I said, and sprung up from the bed to the closet
to get my clothes. I went to Renesmee’s room, but she wasn’t in her bed. Edward
came up behind me and said: “Let’s go. Maybe she’s with Rosalie.” and we raced
to Carlisle’s. “Rose? Alice? Esme?” I called. They came two seconds later. “Yes
Bells?” Alice asked. “Have you seen Nessie? She wasn’t in her bed, so I thought
she’d be here.” I said. “No, we haven’t seen her since this morning.” Esme told
me. “Well, keep an eye out for her will ya? I’m gonna go check at, uh, Jacob’s.” I
said. “Okay.” Rosalie said. Edward growled and said: “Fine, I’m coming with
you.” I shrugged. “Whatever.”
We were almost at Jacob’s when I remebered something very important. I grabbed
Edward’s arm and haulted us to a stop. “What?” Edward asked. “I have to go alone
from here.” I explained. He raised an eyebrow at me. “Why?” I rolled my eyes. “I
just do sweetheart. Now I’ll be right back.” I pecked him on the lips and was about
to run off, when he grabbed my arm and said: “That wasn’t a kiss, now come
here.” He kissed mepassionatly for a few moments, then let me go. “You are such
a man.” I said, rolling my eyes. I ran off before he had a chance to answer. When I
got to Jacob’s house, I stopped right at the door. I heard two racing heartbeats, the
sound a human’s makes after running for a long period of time. I also heard ragged
breathing, like mine and Edward’s when we’re having—anyway that’s what I
heard.
Billy’s truck wasn’t there, so he was probably with Charlie, watching a baseball
game or fishing. I tapped on the door a few times with my knuckle and heard Jacob
say: “No! Come back! They’ll come back later!We’re not done yet!” Excuse me?
What were they doing? I heard rapid footsteps come to the door and when it
opened I gasped. There was Renesmee, covered in only a sheet, mouth hanging
open just like mine.

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