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Five Paragraph Essay

Five Paragraph Essay

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Published by Mubarak Abdessalami
Stick to the norms of writing formal five paragraph essay
Stick to the norms of writing formal five paragraph essay

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Published by: Mubarak Abdessalami on Dec 26, 2009
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Cell phones nowadays are astonishing. They become extremelysophisticated as they have incredibly improved in terms of size, options andconnectivity.Unlike the old cell phone generation, the new cell phone is different inshape. It has become smaller, thinner and lighter. For instance, you can slip it inyour shirt pocket and nobody could even notice it's there. Another remarkablething about it is that no antenna is needed anymore. Despite its small size, it hasa huge storing capacity. You can add extra memory cards to store large files likephotos, music or videos.As for options and functions, the new cell phone offers a multitude of facilities like sending and receiving short messages besides making multi-callswherever you are and whenever you want. You can associate every call numberwith a different sound or alert. Furthermore you can make it vibrate instead of ringing. The power of this tiny device is its ability to allow you to chat, to listento music, to play games and to take photos. You can even use it as an alarmclock.Connectivity, on the other hand, makes this generation of mobilephones quite special. It makes accessibility to Internet easy. Moreover, you canconnect it to various devices (with or without a cable), like to a computer forexample so as to upload or download photos, wallpapers, screen-servers, videos,games, themes, melodies, ring tones, mp3 files and so on. Most importantly, youcan use infra-red or Bluetooth functions for the same reasons. Bluetooth andinfrared are two wireless protocols capable of connecting cell phones to a laptopor other mobile phones.All in all, mobile phones are still under rigorous ameliorations andtheir future utilities will surely be promising and more surprising. The nextgeneration of cell phones will certainly be exceptional and will amaze usgreatly.
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As you can see the assay is well-built. It respects the formal frame of good writings.* Thesis Statement* Supporting paragraphs* ConclusionAll these elements are employed so well to maintain cohesion and coherence and sothe unity of the essay.Thesis StatementOr the introductory paragraph has concisely introduced the topic the essay intends totalk about notably the astonishing nature of the new mobile phone generation and the qualitieswhich make it so. The essay directly states the three main features which will be developedlater in the core or the body of the writing. As there are only three characteristics which,according to it, characterizes the new generation of mobile phones, it’ll stick to that but it’llelucidate each of them in a separate paragraph.1. size,2. options,3. connectivity.Supporting DetailsEach of these items are supported through arguments and examples showing exactlyhow the new mobile phone is different in shape and as soon as the ideas concerning thisspecific point have completed, the essay directly shifts to the next paragraph which will tacklethe next point and nothing else. Once the writer thought everything is said about the options,he closes the second paragraph to start the next which will talk specifically aboutconnectivity. As the three paragraphs have covered the three stated points in the thesisstatement, the writer has to close the essay.ConclusionIn this stage he prefers to close with a sort of anticipating idea that the progress andevolvement of the mobile phone will go on and new things are to appear in the near future.This sort of conclusion allows the possibility of reviewing the essay in few years time to talk about the novelties in the mobile phone industry. Thus, the essay bears the seeds of continuity.
Diction
The essay never ceases to remind us of the Topic of the essay by repeating somewords from time to time. This repetition is mild and even healthy. It is beneficial for both thewriter in order to stick to the point and for the reader to be repetitively reminded of what is thetopic about. The writer also uses almost the right reinforcing jargon to show his mastery of thesubject and the reader will be confident that the writer knows exactly what he is talking about.Besides this, he uses the same category of adjectives to sustain the topic and keep connectedto the subject. For instance the word "astonishing" mentioned in the thesis statement is echoedby "promising", "surprising", "exceptional" and "amaze" in the concluding paragraph to makethe circle full. In a word, the vocabulary used is appropriate to the subject. Let alonepunctuation which is used appropriately, too.
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