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FriXionXleft a comment

This is amazing, makes me want to write like that.

jojothemoleft a comment

uh should you really put this on the internet? people are going to plagiarize you

Dan Foy replied:

lol doesn't bother me, I finished my GCSEs 4 years ago :P Although with almost 700 downloads and over 40,000 views to date, you would have to be pretty naive to imagine that the exam boards' anti-plagirization software won't pick it up.
03 / 27 / 2010

liam-self-3503left a comment

Very impressive, I'm glad I saw this as my writing is the first chapter to a story, but it seems that this is not recommended as it is hard to establish characters or situations, but I think it's preferable to writing a whole -beginning-middle-end story in three pages. Well done, a great story :)