Page 1

No particular setting.

Panel 1

Splash page. A pin-up shot of Kinetic. He is dramaticand slightly brooding.

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Kinetic: Adj. 1. Of, relating to, or produced bymotion.

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Newton's First Law of Motion: An object in motiontends to stay in motion....

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(bold) an object at rest tends to stay at restunless acted upon by an outside force.

Page 2

Kinetic drops the other shoe.

Panel 1

Shot of Kinetic's face, he is looking vaguely upward,he is trying to decide what to say and how to say it.

Panel 2

Pull back a little bit and we can see that he isindoors, he is at Annemarie's apartment. He is makinga serious, slightly pained expression.

Panel 3

Pull back a little further and we can see that he andAnnemarie's are standing in her kitchen, no he islooking at her, almost sad.

Panel 4

Similar shot, we still see her, now he is lookingback at himself, down at his hands.KINETICI.....

Panel 5

He is in the foreground, and this shot is lookingmostly at Annemarie who is trying really hard to bepatient with him.ANNEMARIEOk. Just say it.

Panel 6

Opposite shot, from behind her, looking toward him ashe mans up and looks right at her very seriously.KINETICI want...we...we need to spend some time apart.

Page 3

Interlude with Daryl.

Panel 1

Close up on a computer screen, a Google window isopen.

Panel 2

Daryl's fingers clicking away at the keys.

Panel 3

Back to the window. He has typed "How to be a s" andGoogle is offering "spy, serial killer, scene kid"too tight to see what else it is offering.

Panel 4

Daryl's face, looking surprised.

His hand on the mouse.

Panel 6

Back on the screen, a close shot of what he isclicking on. How to be a superhero" is on thedropdown list.

Panel 7

The search results are on the screen, we can see thatmost of them have XXX in the titles. Daryl has hiselbows resting on either side of the keyboard and isholding his head in his hands, looking down.

Page 4

Kinetic on the town.

Panel 1

Shot of the city skyline in late afternoon. Allthrough these next scenes with Kinetic, we get thereplay of his conversation with Annemarie. It isimportant for the letterer to show that this is notpart of the action of the scene.KINETIC(vo)We need to spend some time apart.

Panel 2

Kinetic's eyes, he is looking out over the spreadfrom the previous panel.ANNEMARIE(vo)What are you talking about?

Panel 3

Pull back to a larger panel of him looking down froma rooftop. His gauntlets have a small, ambient, glowgoing on.KINETICOk.

Panel 4

Similar shot, but he is clapping his gauntletstogether and causing a big power glow.KINETIC(vo)I've been thinking a lot about this. I just needsome time. Right now I need to focus on me andgetting my life to where I want it.

Panel 5

Another similar shot, but now with the gauntlets allpowered up.KINETICHere we go.

Panel 6

Large panel of him leaping off of the roof. His powersignature is streaking behind him.KINETIC(vo)

I just don't think that I can give you what youneed while I am doing that. I don't think it'sfair to you.

Page 5

Kinetic out there.

Panel 1

It is early afternoon. The sky is just starting todarken. Kinetic is riding on top of a city bus.ANNEMARIE(vo)Why are you saying this?

Panel 2

A passenger getting on looks up and sees him.KINETIC(vo)I want to let you know where I'm at right now.

Panel 3

Looking down from behind kinetic at the surprisedpassenger. Kinetic is waving at him.ANNEMARIE(vo)Oh, fuck you.KINETIC(vo)Anne...Annie...Please. Listen to what I'm saying.

Panel 4

Kinetic leaps, projecting an energy field downward tostop his fall.KINETIC(vo)You're great. You're amazing.

Panel 5

He bounces off through and over traffic.KINETIC(vo)You're, like, the best girl I've ever met. This isnot about you.

Page 6

Kinetic is talking with Monkey

Panel 1

It is getting later. Closer to evening. Thestreetlights are on. Kinetic and Monkey are on pointygabled roof. A far away shot establishing where theyare.

Panel 2

Closer on them as they talk.KINETICWhat do you do if nothing happens?MONKEY