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Concrete Angel
BPOV
I stepped backstage as I prepared for my turn to go on. Currently my friend
Erica was onstage singing her heart out at our annual fundraiser at the
orphanage. Every year all of the older kids would gather and put on a talent
show to 1. Try to raise money and 2. Put on all the teenagers that needed to
be adopted.
The song I was singing was Concrete Angel by Martina McBride. It was my
I heard the applause and that was my signal to get ready. Erica stepped
“You’re on,” She told me walking past me “Good luck there are a lot of
people out there tonight we have a good chance.” She quickly hugged me
I went onto the stage and instantly was hit the worst stage fright I have ever
had. Not to mention I can’t walk across a flat surface without tripping. I
looked around and saw all the people gathered in the small cafeteria staring
I sat down on the stool started strumming my guitar and started singing:
Concrete Angel
Concrete Angel
Ohhhhh
Concrete Angel
As I strummed the last chord I looked up and noticed the entire audiences
faces were tear streaked. I realized that I myself was also crying. That song
always touched me and it made me cry at how real it was. The audience
started applauding and I noticed two girls that were cheering the loudest.
One was a short pixie like girl and the other was a blonde model. I wondered
AN: Duh duh Dunnnnn. The end of chapter has arrived. Okay so im starting
to put questions at the end of each chapter and whoever answers correctly
first gets a preview of the next chapter when I write it. Okay so here is the
question for this chapter. “Who are the two gorgeous girls that are
awesomest beta ever! But of course she did not beta this chapter because it
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