Welcome to Scribd, the world's digital library. Read, publish, and share books and documents. See more
Download
Standard view
Full view
of .
Look up keyword
Like this
3Activity
P. 1
Vampires...?

Vampires...?

Ratings:

4.0

(1)
|Views: 285|Likes:
Published by Ginny MacPherson
Here is the first three chapters of my book, plase don't steal it i worked really hard.

Alice has had a rough life. Her mother died, her father is a rapist,She lives with her aunt who she hates and a cousin who hits on her. Then out of no where an "escape" appears, an attractive guy takes her on a date to a great restaurant and thats where her horrible life takes a drastic turn in the wrong direction leading her into a world she never knew existed. A world of...Vampires...?


So yeah, I'm Ginny, i'm 15 and I'd love if you people could tell me what you think of my first 3 chapters. I know they're not that great but w/e

Here is the first three chapters of my book, plase don't steal it i worked really hard.

Alice has had a rough life. Her mother died, her father is a rapist,She lives with her aunt who she hates and a cousin who hits on her. Then out of no where an "escape" appears, an attractive guy takes her on a date to a great restaurant and thats where her horrible life takes a drastic turn in the wrong direction leading her into a world she never knew existed. A world of...Vampires...?


So yeah, I'm Ginny, i'm 15 and I'd love if you people could tell me what you think of my first 3 chapters. I know they're not that great but w/e

More info:

Published by: Ginny MacPherson on Mar 17, 2010
Copyright:Traditional Copyright: All rights reserved

Availability:

Read on Scribd mobile: iPhone, iPad and Android.
download as RTF or read online from Scribd
See more
See less

10/22/2010

 
Fa`}{ns 0Ly bodn v{`s{nk xo{a ` k`{n)O x`v fjifnotnk k~soih ` s`}n dsjl ` h~y ly lj{ans a`k eijxi djs `i aj~s)Ly lj{ans x`v g~v{ x`beoih ajln dsjl ` aoha vfajjb k`ifn `ik van a`k ln{ ` h~y {ansn`ik g~v{ x`i{nk {j a`tn ` co{ jd d~i c~{ niknk ~} s`}nk)4 xnnev b`{ns van ij{ofnk {an ljsioih vofeinvv `ik {an vboha{ c~bhn oi ans v{jl`fa `ikx`i{nk {j `cjs{ ln) Jd fj~svn van koki‟{ js nbvn O xj~bki‟{ cn {nbboih yj~ {aov" vanv~kkniby a`k ` fa`ihn jd an`s{ `ik bnd{ ln oi {ansn" c~{ ans }`sni{v koki‟{ `}}sjtn `ikeofenk ans j~{ {aoieoih van a`k vjbk ans cjky ji {an v{snn{ oiv{n`k jd {an s`}n {a`{`f{~`bby a`}}nink[an k`y O x`v cjsi x`v {an k`y van konk" yj~ vnn van x`v jiby 0; `ik x`v tnsyl`bij~sovank `ik vofeby dsjl botoih ji {an v{snn{v vj g~v{ ljlni{v `d{ns i`loih ln vanxni{ fso{of`b `ik konk)
@bofn Insn` @l`o`)
Van l~v{ a`tn {aj~ha{ ~} {a`{ i`ln oi ` ljlni{) Oi c`vof {s`ivb`{oji o{ ln`iv ‑Ijcbnloin nik“O h~nvv van {aj~ha{ O vaj~bk a`tn ` ijcbn nik ~iboen ansv)@ik O h~nvv O vaj~bk {nbb yj~ {jj" loin x`v ij{ ` ijcbn nik" O konk ji ` k`{n g~v{ boen ans),,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,[an k`se" fjbk `os fbjvnk `sj~ik ln boen `i ofy cb`ien{) Ly {aoi cb`fe ksnvv vnnlnk {jljtn ji o{v jxi) @bb O fj~bk {aoie `cj~{ x`v {an d`f{ {a`{ ntni {aj~ha o{ x`v fjbk Ox`vi‟{ fjbk `bjin)Cnvokn ln x`v {an Cn`~{od~b yj~ih h~y xaj a`k oito{nk ln ji {aov faobby k`{n {j {ansnv{`~s`i{ jd aov fajofn)
[sov{`i C`bdjsk 
An a`k csj~ha{ ln sjvnv djs {an }`v{ xnne `ik bnd{ ln lnvv`hnv ji ly }ajin ntnsyk`y)Aov vxnn{ tjofnv a`k dobbnk ly ntnsy ljlni{ djs {an }`v{ xnne `ik ijx xnsn ji ` k`{n!
 
[sov{`i‟v ljtnlni{ f`~ha{ ly `{{ni{oji5 aov vjd{ xao{n a`ik sn`fank djs loin `ik anbkji {oha{ jifn {any ln{) An x`v vj fjbk vj O einx O x`vi‟{ {an jiby jin v~ddnsoih dsjl {anioha{ `os)‒@bofn" kj yj~ {aoie xn fj~bk hj vjln xansn ljsn․}sot`{n:“[sov{`i‟v nynv vajin xo{a ` hajv{by hbjx cnaoik {an vjd{ csjxi)‒Jd fj~svn [sov{`i“ O `ivxnsnk `v O bnk aol {j {an c`fe jd {an snv{`~s`i{ {j hs`c ly g`fen{)@v O ni{nsnk {an fj`{ sjjl {j hn{ ly fj`{ ` vjd{ a`wn dobbnk ly tovoji" cb~ssoih {an nkhnvjd {an sjjl)V{~lcboih boen O x`v ks~ie" O bnd{ {an sjjl fj`{bnvv `ik `ds`ok)
X`v {aov xa`{ a`}}nink {j ly lj{ans: Ks~hhnk `ik eijfenk ~}:
Ly dn`sv xn kovvo}`{nk `v [sov{`i hs`ccnk ly `sl `ik ks`hhnk ln j~{ {an c`fe l~{{nsoih f~svnv `cj~{ ‒V{oieoih ljs{`bv“ `ik ‒innky }n`v`i{v“) Fjid~voih ln d~s{ans an bnk ln {j aov f`s" ` vbnne cb`fe f`s xo{a {oi{nk xoikjxv)@bljv{ {asjxoih ln oi{j {an f`s" [sov{`i g~l}nk oi{j {an ksotnsv‟ vokn `ik v{`s{nk {jksotn xo{a ln a`bdx`y j~{ {an f`s xoikjx {asjxoih ~} ly snfni{ koiins)[an vbnne f`sv ljtnlni{v fn`vnk `v xn ksjtn ~} {j ly `}`s{lni{ c~obkoih xansn O a`k cnni botoih xo{a ly @~i{ `ik fj~voi" xaj cj{a a`k fjitnioni{by bnd{ djs {an inq{ {xjxnnev ji t`f`{oji)‒Ajbk ji djjbova ljs{`b"“ [sov{`i v`ok `v an }ofenk ly ~} jdd {an dsji{ vn`{ `ik vb~ih lnjtns aov vaj~bkns)Co{{ns" fjbk `os v}nk }`v{ ln cndjsn O ln{ {an x`sl{a jd ly cnksjjl)O einx O vaj~bk cn xjssonk c~{ O g~v{ fj~bki‟{ cn cnf`~vn O g~v{ dnb{ vj hjjk) Cn{{ns {a`iO‟k dnb{ oi ` bjih {oln)[sov{`i‟v bjih xao{n `slv bjjvnink `ik O dnbb ji{j ly cnk) Aov nynv bjjenk a~ihsy djs vjln{aoih O a`k {jbk aol O xj~bki‟{ hotn" ‒[sov{`i O v`ok O koki‟{ x`i{ {j kj {aov
“ O 
v`ok`v an bn`ink kjxi" aov vaos{ j}ni)
 O kji‟{ x`i{ {j cn boen ln ljl! ]bn`vn kji‟{ s`}n ln!
[an hajv{by hbjx cnaoik aov nynv cnf`ln csoha{ns"“ Kji‟{ xjssy v~h`s" o{‟bb jiby a~s{ djs ` ljlni{" g~v{ snb`q `ik yj~ xji‟{ hn{ a~s{)“Ntni xo{a ly snvov{`ifn an en}{ bn`ioih oi fbjvns `ik fbjvns ~i{ob aov d`fn x`v soha{ oi
 
dsji{ jd loin) ‒Vjssy ‑cj~{ {aov bjtn c~{ O `l sn`bby a~ihsy)“ Aov @lnsof`i `ffni{kov`}}n`snk oi{j ` vxnn{ Cso{ova jin)Cndjsn O fj~bk `ve `iy p~nv{ojiv `cj~{ ajx aov a~ihns a`k {j kj xo{a s`}oih ln" aovlj~{a v{`s{nk v~feoih ji ly infe hotoih ln xa`{ O x`v v~sn x`v hjoih {j cn ` l`gjs aofeny) Aov {jih~n vxosbnk bo{{bn fosfbnv kjxi ly infe ~i{ob an x`v soha{ jtns ly g~h~b`s"` vfs`}n jd {nn{a `fsjvv ly veoi `ik ` va`s} }`oi x`v `bb O dnb{ ~i{ob {an oiv{`i{ cbovv)_j~ eijx xani yj~ ksoie vjln{aoih aj{ ji ` sn`bby fjbk k`y `ik yj~ hn{ {a`{ {oihbydnnboih kjxi yj~s c`fe) Xnbb o{ x`v boen {a`{ dnnboih `bb jtns }~bv`{oih dsjl ly infe)Aov a`ikv vnnlnk {j lnb{ oi{j ly veoi ~i{ob `bb O fj~bk dnnb x`v {an aj{ a~ihsy lj~{a jily infe" hotoih ln {aov hbjsoj~v dnnboih)Ntni{~`bby {an dnnboih v{`s{nk {j d`kn `ik O v{`s{nk {j dnnb }`oi oiv{n`k jd }bn`v~sn" ` c~sioih }`oi boen dosn oi ly tnoiv)V~kkniby ntnsy{aoih v{j}}nk `ik ` csobbo`i{ k`seinvv jtnsf`ln ntnsy{aoih {a`{ v{obb x`v)O{ x`v boen ofn x`{ns x`v cnoih }j~snk oi{j ly an`s{ `ik s`ko`{oih {j {an snv{ jd ly cjky~i{ob O x`v ` cbjfe jd ofn)Fa`}{ns 3D`fn{v jd boha{ jtnsxanblnk ln `v O j}nink ly nynv" {an sjjl O x`v oi bjjenk d`lobo`s  c~{ fjl}bn{nby `boni) [an boln hsnni x`bbv xnsn tocs`i{ `ik `bljv{ hbjxnk oi {an n`sbyljsioih boha{) C~{ {an {aoih O ij{ofnk {an ljv{ x`v {an
 vlnbb 
) Vxnn{ boen ajiny c~{ va`s}boen `i `}}bn) Djbbjxoih {an vfni{ O {~sink `sj~ik `ik v`x o{"
cbjjk"
`bb jtns ly cnk" o{x`v vj`enk oi cbjjk)V}soihoih ~} dsjl {an l`{{snvv O b`iknk ji ly dnn{ oi ` dns`b }jvo{oji) Djj{v{n}v j~{vokn{an kjjs v{`s{bnk ln" {an vlnbb j~{ {ansn x`v boen c~sink {j`v{ `ik v{sjih {n`) Ofey)J}nioih {an kjjs vbjxby `ik }nneoih j~{ O v`x xa`{ O {aj~ha{ {j cn ` xjl`i" `cj~{ 6=yn`sv jbk `ik ` yj~ih l`i xaj v{jjk inq{ {j ans" anb}oih ans ~i}`fe djjk) [an l`i{~sink `ik O snfjhiownk {an d`fn" [jcy) [jcy" ly fj~voi `ik L`s{a` ly `~i{)[an fjid~voji jd {aj~ha{v l~kkbnk ly cs`oi `ik O bn`}{ j~{ {an in`snv{ xoikjx"fs`vaoih kjxi {j {an }`tnlni{ j~{vokn) [an fjifsn{n va`{{nsnk cnin`{a ly dnn{" v}okns xnccnk j~{ dsjl ly dnn{)

Activity (3)

You've already reviewed this. Edit your review.
1 hundred reads
liam liked this
renee liked this

You're Reading a Free Preview

Download
scribd
/*********** DO NOT ALTER ANYTHING BELOW THIS LINE ! ************/ var s_code=s.t();if(s_code)document.write(s_code)//-->