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N.Mott who are you giving # ratings to postings on scribd? Self-appointed literary critic? I liked the story and Trip's fairy tale that you commented it - he wrote it when he was 8.
love,
self-appointed defender of being nice on scribd
Hi,
I thought the illustrations were wonderful but the text was poor. My golden rule of writing children's fiction is: do not understimate your readers, nor your characters, just because they are children.
Number Two is: the grammar and syntax must be 100% correct.
Rule 3: Something exciting needs to happen. A hole for a rododendron bush was a let down. And a child would have no idea what type of plant that is.
I have rated it 3, but that is an average of 5 for the drawings and 1 for the text.