Your facts are mostly accurate, some of your spelling is off but considering your grade level most individuals who study martial will understand what you're saying. Double check your dates and maybe expand on some of the info, such as Tae-Kwon-Do, most people even those who do study don't know there are two styles, Padawan and Kukkiwon, Tae-Kwon Do. Also the Father of the art is General Choi, addi
Overall the work is very good. There are a few options I would disagree with.
And the age of Japanese arts is off, the first sumo match was around 23 bc and kyu-jitus goes back even further. Depending on the references used the dates vary slightly.
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MrHornik Scribbled:
Your facts are mostly accurate, some of your spelling is off but considering your grade level most individuals who study martial will understand what you're saying. Double check your dates and maybe expand on some of the info, such as Tae-Kwon-Do, most people even those who do study don't know there are two styles, Padawan and Kukkiwon, Tae-Kwon Do. Also the Father of the art is General Choi, addi
annika235 Scribbled:
nice......... pretty accurate, and thats saying something when u get this from a third dan black belt in taekwondo!
pollinikrys Scribbled:
Very objective! A nice guideline for martial arts!
Sensei J Scribbled:
Overall the work is very good. There are a few options I would disagree with. And the age of Japanese arts is off, the first sumo match was around 23 bc and kyu-jitus goes back even further. Depending on the references used the dates vary slightly.
Aaron. Scribbled:
Very Good
pbigio Scribbled:
I have added you to the Mixed Martial Arts group. Nice work!
flor_de_oro Scribbled:
www.soobahkdo.com the real practice of Soo Bahk Do¡ Founder Hwang Kee.
thacker Scribbled:
Good post +1 from me.