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you plotted our brains’ encoding of information on staff paper it would even look like music,with each note able to trigger the beginning of billions of other pieces of music.
3. There's a pervading loneliness to "Hum" that music seems to fill, becoming an actualperson of sorts by the end. Was this always a central theme of the story for you, for Morristo create beauty from what has been broken? Or did it evolve as you wrote?
Stories begin very patchworky for me. I don’t know what they are, I just observe and make notesand throw it all on a page, and then pick out chunks that seem to go together. Once I’ve got these puzzle pieces, I can start to see what story they might form. I encourage this process – which Iknow is not the same for everyone – and have taught it in some children’s workshops at 826Valencia in San Francisco. It should encourage people who think they’re not creative that all ittakes is curiosity, tenacity, and patience that the process will yield what it yields.“Hum” started with two scenes that seemed to fit together: Morris knocking over and replacinghis wife’s horn (though originally it was a bassoon because, well, I love the bassoon), and thetechnology swamp at the fleamarket. There was a strange sort of sadness to Morris’s action, likean awkward lament. I wondered how to push it out of him more, so I took away his livelihood,leaving him with idle hands that would inevitably start tinkering, and then threw more unwantedinstruments at him. This seemed to fit great with the fleamarket, so you can see how theconnection between the two started forming, and how the brokenness of things grew out of that.The plot details and the interconnectivity changed with every draft, as did his relationship withthe old woman, but the emotional undercurrent of loss and fear stuck around. All the writinghappens in these dissociated parallels until they finally click and I sit back and say “oh, that’s
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