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Vampires...?

Vampires...?

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Published by Ginny MacPherson
Here is the first 4 chapters of my book, plase don't steal it i worked really hard. The last chapter is not finished i'm working on the details still and the ending of the chapter :)

Alice has had a rough life. Her mother died, her father is a rapist,She lives with her aunt who she hates and a cousin who hits on her. Then out of no where an "escape" appears, an attractive guy takes her on a date to a great restaurant and thats where her horrible life takes a drastic turn in the wrong direction leading her into a world she never knew existed. A world of...Vampires...?


So yeah, I'm Ginny, i'm 15 and I'd love if you people could tell me what you think of my first 3 chapters. I know they're not that great but w/e
Please comment if you like the cover, give suggestions on what you would like better, this is a just a draft for the cover, i would like one of a girl with long black curly hair in the middle of a foggy forest :)
Here is the first 4 chapters of my book, plase don't steal it i worked really hard. The last chapter is not finished i'm working on the details still and the ending of the chapter :)

Alice has had a rough life. Her mother died, her father is a rapist,She lives with her aunt who she hates and a cousin who hits on her. Then out of no where an "escape" appears, an attractive guy takes her on a date to a great restaurant and thats where her horrible life takes a drastic turn in the wrong direction leading her into a world she never knew existed. A world of...Vampires...?


So yeah, I'm Ginny, i'm 15 and I'd love if you people could tell me what you think of my first 3 chapters. I know they're not that great but w/e
Please comment if you like the cover, give suggestions on what you would like better, this is a just a draft for the cover, i would like one of a girl with long black curly hair in the middle of a foggy forest :)

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Published by: Ginny MacPherson on Jun 08, 2010
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