One Touch

SweetxFidelityleft a comment

Thanks guys, this totally got more reads then what I excepted. :D @ phillipjonesin, thanks for the comment, it was a speedy kind of thing because I tend to lose the creativity after awhile. I'll read it over and hopefully republish it. @ duponthumanite Thank you so much.

duponthumaniteleft a comment

The one touch does mean the world. Enjoyed how the last stanza connected with the first. The dialogue is very ... scripted, though sincere. The words are "shriek" and "whisper".

phillipjonesinleft a comment

Very well done. practice reading over it a few times before posting for typos. It detracts from your obvious wonderful creativity as a writer to find you have not proofread your own work. No offense.

Orwell_1984left a comment

“Every artist dips his brush in his own soul, and paints his own nature into his pictures.”~~ Henry Ward Beecher .....Excellent write!