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A sample IELTS Essay scoring 5

A sample IELTS Essay scoring 5

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A sample IELTS essay from my IELTS class. This has an approximate IELTS score of 5. A good way to improve your writing is to read other essays and see how different mistakes can bring your score down. Then make sure you don't do the same thing in your essays!
A sample IELTS essay from my IELTS class. This has an approximate IELTS score of 5. A good way to improve your writing is to read other essays and see how different mistakes can bring your score down. Then make sure you don't do the same thing in your essays!

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Published by: my IELTS teacher on Aug 04, 2010
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