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A sample IELTS Essay scoring 7

A sample IELTS Essay scoring 7

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A sample IELTS essay from my IELTS class - this one scores a 7. Read it and see where the student answers the question well, and where this student makes mistakes. Take this opportunity to learn from others.
A sample IELTS essay from my IELTS class - this one scores a 7. Read it and see where the student answers the question well, and where this student makes mistakes. Take this opportunity to learn from others.

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Published by: my IELTS teacher on Aug 04, 2010
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