BALL OF SNAKES

By Jim LaVigne

PROLOGUE – Somewhere near Steamboat Springs, Colorado. The first week in October.
The small gravel parking spot at the trailhead was quiet and dusty with two cars, locked
up tight, sitting and baking in the atypical autumn heat. During peak times, the lot would
be full, but it was late in the season for hikers and campers, past the ideal conditions
offered by high summer and tending to cold at night. The place itself was unremarkable,
just another US Forest Service lot and trailhead, but the surrounding country was a
different story. Picturesque, wild and pristine, the wilderness unfolded around for
hundreds of miles of deep mountain valleys and soaring peaks and dense pine forests. If
there was such a thing as “typical” Rocky Mountain terrain, this was it, the postcard-shot
beauty of mountains in their primeval state.
Presently a late-model sports car pulled into the lot from the two-lane asphalt
highway and settled in a cloud of dust near the others. The car door opened and a man got
out, stretched and looked around. He went around to the back of his car and opened the
trunk. Bending in to look over his gear, he inventoried certain important items: Extra
boots, check. Duct tape, check. Four-inch lock-blade knife, check. Along with various
personal items and clothing, he tossed the things into a battered day-pack and slammed
the trunk.
Next he went over to the drop box that the rangers used to keep tabs on visiting
hikers, a sturdy wooden affair with a small writing platform and a wad of forms for
hikers to fill out detailing where they intended to camp and how long they would be
there. Should there be a fire or a killer storm, the rangers would be able to locate and, if
need be, evacuate any endangered visitors. It was also an honor system, with no one
required to register, and no lock on the box.
The man walked over, opened the container and pulled out two forms which he
studied closely, reading each one twice. Then he tore both forms into tiny pieces and,
whistling a merry tune, took up his pack and headed off into the woods, up the trail and
into the high valleys beyond.

CHAPTER ONE

An enormous osprey dove into a passing run over the glassy surface of the lake, cocking
its white head and perfect eyes at the water, searching, searching… then Bam! Its legs
shot out like pistons and talons like steel daggers darted into the water, coming up with a
fat wriggling trout that, trailing a thin stream of blood, died in midair.
From the shore, thirty feet away, Jack cheered inwardly and watched the raptor fly
off to the opposite shore to feast. Around him, the vast, primordial woods and mountains
of the Colorado Rockies unfolded for countless miles in all directions. To right and left
loomed 14,000 foot peaks, capped in snow even now in early fall. To front and back lay
the valley, a mix of dense pine woods and rocky slopes, broken by streams and lakes,
ridges and ravines. They’d camped beside the biggest lake, a stretch of icy, stream-fed
water some half-mile long and half as wide.
The campsite was ideal, close to water, central to their planned day-hikes, situated
in as pretty a stretch of nature as existed. Gentle cool breezes laden with the clean smell
of pine wafted through the camp, where their jaunty orange tent had been pitched in a
grove of conifers with a small firepit dug nearby.
Jack heard a shout from down the valley and rose to meet his brother Dan, who’d
trekked off an hour ago to scout a nearby trailhead. It was the fourth day of their eight-
day vacation, and they’d had a hard hike up into these heights. The way had looked easy
on the topographic maps, but there had been a crude rope bridge at one point that had
tried their abilities and resolve, but the worst had been avoided, neither had fallen, and,
after a few more hard scrabbles, they’d finally reached this valley, a seemingly untouched
gem among the jewels.
Every other year, when the two made these mountain hikes, they picked areas
more remote than the trip before, until finally, this year, they’d gotten far indeed from the
beaten path, off into the depths of one of the state’s National Wildlife Areas, twenty or
thirty trail-miles from the nearest civilization. The challenge was exciting and they both
loved the idea (if not the fact) that they were the first people to visit a given, far-flung
spot.
Both were able mountain campers and were likewise in good, which is not to say
great, physical condition. In appearance the Morrison siblings certainly looked like
brothers, both tall and square-shouldered, both brown-haired and handsome. There the
effects of age caused the similarities to end, as Jack had lost most of his hair and had
developed a pronounced gut. Try as he might, the round belly wouldn’t be exercised off
and Jack had begun to accept it as a sort of ill-favored buddy, a guilty pal that only he
would ever appreciate.
They’d packed typically heavy for their trip and carried plenty of freeze-dried
food and fuel, lots of extra clothes, matches, water filters, the works. One year, in the
Maroon Bells range, they’d nearly run out of food on the long hike back to the car and
had been seriously worried. They would surely have been more than worried if they
hadn’t been so weak and listless from hunger. The mountains were funny that way. No
fuel, no move. Simple, really.
There were, however, two things that they were not allowed to bring, by mutual
agreement: cell phones and watches. These two simple tools of modern society were
disallowed because the brothers agreed that they only served to detract from the whole
roughing-it ethic. Leave behind the tools, leave behind the modern world, and leave
behind your troubles. If possible.
Jack strode down the path, his thick hiking boots kicking up small rocks and
twigs, and thought about the trip so far. It was going well, he knew; they’d both had just
enough of adventure and relaxation, but he was still concerned about Dan. There was
something his younger brother wasn’t talking about, something that made him morose
and washed-out, even when he seemed happy or excited, that worried Jack, made him
want to goad Dan into talking. But that would just make him clam up more, Jack thought,
and so decided to let Dan bring it up in his own good time. Dan was often like that,
needing, apparently, to feel completely at ease in a situation in order to talk. Jack
understood and tried to put it out of his mind, but couldn’t help thinking.
Hell, he thought, who am I to offer advice? My own marriage went to hell
(although he could allow that the dissolution hadn’t been entirely his fault) and I’m the
prototypical mid-life crisis victim. Sure there’s the money, the house and all, but I’m so
goddamned, desperately lonely sometimes. Why should Dan, with everything in front of
him, listen to me or need my advice? Dan was newly married, some four months ago, and
had just been promoted to Senior VP. He could probably offer me some advice, Jack
thought dolefully.
He decided (again) to just forget all of that and enjoy himself. There was time
enough for life’s problems; why bring them on vacation? He was also aware that, with all
the time he’d spent with psychiatrists in the last few years, he’d become over-analytical.
Every human character quirk or foible had a cause, a cure, or at very least a fancy,
scientific name. But lately, he’d started to think that sometimes people were just…
different. One man’s sanity was often another man’s madness. Jack tried to shake these
thoughts from his head and concentrated on the beauty and grandeur through which he
walked. Don’t start with Helen, he thought. Not now.
“Hey buttface!” Dan called from somewhere just ahead. “Help me with this!”
Jack hurried ahead and, rounding a bend in the trail, came upon his brother
lugging a sizable dead tree up the trail.
“What the hell?” Jack asked as Dan dropped the thing.
“We need the wood,” Dan said, wiping his forehead. “Now c’mon, grab an end.”
“Hey, guess what?” Jack said, hoisting the narrower, upper half of the tree.
“Wha?” Dan grunted, laboring with the thick end.
“We’re not the only ones in this valley. I saw a campfire just now, from down by
the lake. Somebody’s camped up by the north end.”
“Oh well,” Dan said, both disappointment and resignation in his voice. “Had to
happen sooner or later. Always does.”
“Yeah,” Jack agreed. It was usually the case on these trips that they would set up
camp in what they thought was a quintessentially remote place, only to be joined within
days (or hours) by other campers. So much for trail-blazing.
Together they hauled the dead tree back to camp and chopped it up with hatchets,
ultimately rewarded with a nice-sized stack of firewood for the next night or two. Hot and
thirsty from the work, they took a rest under the shady pines, let the thin, dry, mountain
air cool them off, and sipped crystal-clean water from their bottles.
“Sweet,” Dan observed, looking about the valley. “So what’s for dinner?”
Jack eyed the horizon, as much as he could see with the encroaching peaks all
around. The visible sky was darkening, taking on that blue-black shade that slowly creeps
through the deep valleys, up over the peaks and into the sky like a reverse dusk that
moves up instead of down. It was the color one sees when looking up from a jetliner
window.
“Yeah, be dark in a couple hours,” Jack agreed, and went to set up the small gas
stove they used to boil water.
“Jack, wait,” Dan said. “How about fresh trout tonight? Instead of freeze-dried
whatever.”
“Sounds great,” Jack replied, wondering where this was going. “But how are we
gonna catch ‘em? Grab ‘em like bears in our teeth?”
“Nope. Ta da!” Dan brought out from his pack a miniature fishing rod, complete
with a normal-sized fly-casting reel. “And…” He produced a small clear plastic case of
flies.
“Shit man, get fishin’!” Jack enthused. “I’ll get a good bed of coals going. Fresh
Cutthroat trout… Mmm. Did you bring some lemon and butter too?”
Soon the two were standing on the lakeshore as Dan reeled in trout after trout.
Sometimes the fish got wily and the pair would have to move down the shore a few
dozen yards, but every new location added a couple more fish. They didn’t want to take
more than they needed, but they knew from experience that they could each eat at least
six of these things, so Dan kept casting as night began to fall.
After Dan caught a fish, Jack would snag it from the water and remove the hook.
Next he took the wriggling, cold, slimy thing to a nearby flat rock, where he used a very
sharp filleting knife to slice off its head. Then the belly, ripping all of the guts from the
cavity, usually with one slice. Finally, Jack washed the fish in the icy water and then laid
it in a pile of snow he’d gathered from the scattered pockets of white under the trees. He
kept up a running banter with his brother as they fished and they nattered happily away
about sports, politics, religion, art, wherever the conversation wandered.
Just as it was getting too dark to see, Dan hooked the thirteenth trout (one over
limit) and the two went to eat. Jack brought the cold trout from their snow-pack and laid
them on the grill he’d positioned just so over a bed of thick pine coals. They sizzled as he
laid them on the metal grate, letting off a wonderful aroma. Dan boiled some water over
the stove as the fish cooked and then mixed up some flakes into mashed potatoes to
accompany the meal.
“So this fire you saw…” Dan queried. “Big smoke, little smoke?”
“Little,” Jack answered. “Like a cook fire. Why?”
“No reason. Just curious.”
Jack knew why Dan had asked that. He was trying to determine the nature of the
other temporary resident of the valley. It was somehow galling to Dan that other mere
mortals would hike as far as they had. One time they’d watched in disgust as an old-
looking man and three skinny kids came blithely over a pass that had nearly exhausted
Jack and Dan. So now Dan was probably hoping that whoever was camped down the
valley was some sort of super-hiker, a man of granite that he, Dan, couldn’t begin to
match in stamina and strength.
Chuckling quietly enough that his brother couldn’t hear, Jack flipped the trout and
kept his mouth shut. Let him hope, he thought.

CHAPTER TWO

Jack was on his fourth fish when they heard a scream. Not a normal scream, if there is
such a thing. This was a scream like a rabbit being killed, a fingernails-on-the chalkboard
sort of thing, high-pitched and nerve-shredding. It was at once animal and unnatural,
welling up from a screech into a wail into the imperceptible range of the ultra-sonic. Then
it stopped, having lasted no more than four seconds. Normal sounds of the valley
resumed, the sigh of the pines in the wind and an occasional chirp of some tiny critter.
“Holy shit!” Dan whispered, instantly and instinctively hunch-shouldered and
tense. “What was that? What the fuck was that?”
“Shhh,” Jim waved. “I don’t know…”
The two sat, stricken, for a good few minutes. Their trout cooled, congealed,
forgotten, as they looked about in the gloom and listened. Nothing but the wind.
Jack thought to himself. What could have made that noise? A cougar? No, not cat-
like at all. A bear then? Nope, too high-pitched. An owl, a bird of some kind? Maybe. But
whatever it had been, it had been killed. Of that he was reasonably sure. No creature he
could imagine would make that noise for any other reason. Finally Jack broke the silence,
whispering.
“I think it was a bird. Like an osprey or an owl.”
 “My ass!” Dan hissed. “After dark? And no bird would make that noise, you
know that.”
“No, I don’t know that,” Jack persisted. “It could’ve been a bird getting, well,
killed by something. Maybe a bobcat or a cougar on the hunt.”
“Maybe…” Dan certainly wanted to believe this explanation for the horrible
scream, but was obviously doubtful. “But you’re right about one thing. Whatever it was,
it was definitely not having fun. Fucker sounded like a banshee or something. Damn!”
“Yeah, I know,” Jack said, consciously speaking aloud instead of whispering.
“Gave me the creeps.”
“Well,” Dan relaxed somewhat. “Whatever it was, it’s quiet now. And we wasted
half our trout worrying about it.”
They salvaged what they could of the coagulated trout and potatoes, then cleaned
up with water from the lake, finally securing the food and cooking gear up in the trees, on
a line they’d earlier rigged between two aspens. Couldn’t be too careful about bears, after
all. The trout heads, guts, and skins were burned in the fire.
It was true dark now, and the brothers lay back on a wide flat boulder and stared
up at the night sky, a sky unlike any in the world, and simply soaked it in.
It was almost as if there was more white than black up there, there were just so
many stars. The Milky Way made a thick, almost uninterrupted band of blue-white, the
tiny lights so numerous that they blended together. Seen this way, it was possible to
realize that they were watching the spiral arm of the galaxy rolling ponderously overhead.
The idea was humbling, and they both felt that common human feeling of insignificance
when faced with such a mighty example of uncaring nature.
Soon they also felt a little cold, and went back to the fire and stoked it up, adding
enough wood for another hour or so of warmth and light. Both were tired from the day’s
hiking and exploration, but also enjoyed these moments of primitive relaxation, huddled
by the fire like uncounted generations of humans had, helpless without heat and
illumination but secure anyway in their vainglorious mastery of the elements.
They discussed the scream some more and it seemed to worsen with recollection,
becoming even scarier in their memories, until they finally quit the topic and spoke of
lighter things. Tomorrow’s hike, for example, as they decided to go have a look at
Crosscreek Pass, the southern end of the valley.
After a while the fire petered out and so did they. Jack rose and scooped dirt onto
the coals, extinguishing most of them and effectively killing the fire. Both of them
wandered a few yards into the gloom and pissed into the trees.
Dan went into the tent first and got settled, then Jack took off his clothes and
crawled into his bag. The air was getting cold, an early fall, mountain cold that was thin
and biting, but they were toasty in no time, only their noses and mouths poking out of the
zippered bags. The air in the tent was faintly tinged with pine smoke, but a night wind
blew through the tent flaps and periodically chased the musty odor away.
“Night, Jack,” Dan said drowsily.
“Good night, Dan,” Jack said. He made sure to sound confident, but he was
actually thinking of that damnable scream and what it could mean. Some hours before
dawn he finally dozed off.

CHAPTER THREE
He felt good, walking down the path, the rolling valley stretching out before him. In fact,
he hadn’t felt this good in years. Oh, the voice was still there, but it felt natural,
somehow, like the cries of the birds or the wind in the trees. It was always this way when
he hunted. And now he had the best set-up yet. Better than that time in Yellowstone,
better even than the one in Denali. He grinned, because he knew it would be good.
To the wide world of walking skin-bags, he was the picture of normality, Joe
Citizen. Inside, only he knew the raging hurricane of hatred and paranoia that dogged his
cunning, shattered mind. It was his secret, the power he could call on whenever he
needed to, the power he thought of as the Animal. The Animal was fearless, strong, and
smart, a perfect hunting organism. The Animal was his best friend, worst enemy, and
secret confidante. And now the Animal couldn’t be placated anymore. No amount of
violent imagery or cathartic release was going to satisfy the it. Only blood, blood and
death. The Animal growled in his head. “Stab ‘em. Strangle ‘em. Chop ‘em to pieces and
chew on their steaming guts. Kill ‘em all.”
He normally had to quell the Animal when it got this loud, this insistent. He’d put
it back to sleep with the meds or work out so excessively that the voice finally got
exhausted and shut up. But now it was loose, free to show him the deep Secret, the riddle
of blood and brains and organs and skin. Free to kill. He grinned again. Sure was a
beautiful day. And the first one had been so easy. Yeah, it was going to be… glorious.

CHAPTER FOUR

The next morning came up cool and cloudy, unusual for the time of year, but Jack and
Dan were up at dawn anyway, making coffee and freeze-dried eggs and dried fruit. By the
time they’d eaten and cleaned up, the clouds had fled and the sun was rising over the
peaks and so they decided to go for a splash in the lake. This was a decision not lightly
taken, as the water in the lake was frigid cold, made up of run-off from the pockets of
snow and ice that lingered in the valley. Dan usually hung back from this icy brand of
ablution, but today he felt like washing off some of the soot and sweat he’d accumulated
in the past few days.
Unlike his brother, Jack was always up for one of these breath-stealing dips, and
led the way down to the shore. Here they both stripped and, huffing in anticipation of the
cold, waded very quickly into the icy lake. The rocky bottom was slippery and Dan
almost went down but then regained his footing and forged in up to his waist.
“Jesus Christ!” Dan gasped. “This is fuckin’ crazy!”
“It’s good… for you,” Jack managed through clenched, chattering teeth.
Whooping and gasping and cursing, they splashed themselves all over and
scrubbed their hair with environmentally-safe soap. This took about a minute and a half
and then they were out, stepping quickly but carefully over to a big flat rock on shore.
They stretched out naked on the rock, gratefully soaking up the rising sun, pulling in the
warmth like lizards and letting the breeze blow them dry. Both drowsed a little as their
shivering ceased and they began to feel fresh and ready for another day. But not just yet,
the sun was so nice…
“Well, shit,” said a southern-drawl voice, a female voice. “Howdy, boys! Didn’t
mean to interrupt or nothin’…”
 Instantly both men jerked up into a sitting position, then into a sort of awkward
fetal position, and then dove behind the rock they’d been lying on. They pushed each
other, jockeying for room, cover from this interloper, and were only partly successful.
Before them stood a woman, dressed in worn hiking attire, of about forty years of
age. She wasn’t pretty and she didn’t have a particularly great body, as far as the men
could tell, but her presence was nonetheless… disconcerting. She stood, arms akimbo,
her head cocked to one side, with a dopey grin on her tanned and lined face. Wisps of
gray-brown hair floated in the breeze from where they’d come loose from her ponytail.
“We were, uh…” Jack stammered, blushing like a schoolgirl. “Bathing. Washing
up, you know?”
“Yeah,” Dan added lamely. “Washing.”
“Whatever,” the woman shrugged. “Name’s Ethel. Pleased to meetcha.” To the
men’s dismay, she began walking over to their rock, one rough hand out in greeting.
Jack faltered. He could run for the tent, he could tell the woman not to come any
closer, he could try to shove Dan over and get more of the rock for cover… But
ultimately he just smiled, crouched like a palsied pink ape behind the rock, and shook
Ethel’s hand, gratified that her eyes never for an instant left their faces.
“Jack,” he said. “Jack Morrison. This is my brother Dan.”
“Like I said, Ethel. Ethel Flowers,” The woman had a firm, dry grip and her
accent was Deep South, Georgia or Mississippi perhaps. “Pleased to meetcha.”
She turned then and walked slowly away, down to the lakeshore, where she lit up
a cigarette and sat down on a rock, her broad back to the men’s camp. Dan and Jack
looked at each other. What the hell? Then they figured out that their visitor was giving
them a chance to get dressed and scampered back to their clothes and then to the tent.
“What’s with her?” Dan asked, pulling on jeans and a sweatshirt. “Some kind of
backwoods voyeur?”
“How should I know?” Jack shot back. “But look, she seems harmless enough.
After all, she had us in about as vulnerable a position as a man can be in. If she meant us
any harm she already missed her chance.”
“Yeah, I guess you’re right…” Dan finished dressing and made to leave the tent.
“You coming?”
“Yeah,” Jack was slow in dressing. “Be out in a second.”
In fact, Jack was stalling and now used the time to dig into the side pocket of his
pack and pull out the .38 revolver he always brought into the deep mountains. It was in a
plastic bag, lightly oiled, along with four cartridges in a separate bag, little packets of
death with their lead-nosed tips. The gun, a snub-nosed chunk of blued steel and plastic,
was a Colt Detective Special, small but very heavy in his hands. He’d bought it some
years ago, never telling anyone about it, for this exact purpose; self-defense in the
wilderness.
The Colt wasn’t terribly impressive, visually, but it was small and relatively light,
good for camping, and Jack had picked it for those reasons, never seriously believing
he’d ever use the thing. Now, holding it, it looked puny, like a toy cap pistol he’d had as a
kid. Ah well, thought Jack, maybe he would like to have a big-ass Dirty Harry gun, but
this was the one he had right now and what was the sense in worrying about it?
Carefully, as he’d been taught in the class on handguns, he wiped it down and
opened the cylinder. He put two cartridges into the cylinder, hesitated, and then put in
two more. With a click, he pushed the cylinder back into place and rotated it so that the
hammer rested on an empty chamber.
“You comin’ or what?” Dan said from just outside the tent.
Making sure the safety was on , Jack stuck the pistol into his puffy down vest,
into an inner pocket where he hoped it wouldn’t show.
“Coming!” he called, trying to sound cheery. With a last look around the interior,
he crawled out the flap and zipped up the tent.
Their visitor, Ethel, was now still sitting down by the lake and, with a collective
shrug, the brothers walked down to join her.
“Uh, Ethel, is it?” Jack said to her back. The weather-beaten woman turned and
smiled, looking them up and down.
“Well!” she said. “I think maybe I liked y’all better before…” Then she broke out
laughing, a goofy, high-pitched utterance that couldn’t help but put the brothers at ease.
“Yeah, well…” Dan shuffled his feet.
“So,” Jack said. “What can we do for you, Ethel? Unless you’re just paying us a
visit? We were planning on a day-hike today…”
“Well now,” Ethel nodded. “Get right to the point dontcha? I like that. No, I ain’t
just visitin’. Reason I’m here is… Well, did either of you boys hear somethin’ last
evening? About an hour after sunset? Kinda like a, I dunno, like a scream or somethin’?”
The brothers looked at each other, hesitating. Jack spoke up.
“We did. It was horrible. Scared the hell out of us. Do you know what it could
have been?”
“No, no,” answered Ethel thoughtfully. “Like nothin’ I ever heard in my life. And
you’re right. It was horrible. Huh.” She considered for a moment while the men shuffled
and looked at each other again.
“Listen fellas,” she said earnestly. “I’m gonna be honest with ya. I don’t like it. I
been up in these mountains on and off for almost ten years, and I ain’t never heard a
sound like that. I think we should team up and have us a damn good look-see around this
valley. If there’s somethin’ up here that shouldn’t be, I wanna know and I wanna get the
hell out.”
“Something that shouldn’t be here?” Dan frowned. “Like what?”
“Oh, like a rabid cougar,” she said. “Maybe a wounded eagle, who knows? Worst
case? It’s not somethin’, it’s some one, know what I mean?”
“Yeah,” Jack said quietly. “I thought of that already.”
“Some one?” Dan asked incredulously. “What do you mean? Like an escaped
lunatic, some clichéd shit like that? Come on…”
“Easy, Dan,” Jack cautioned. “I think all Ethel here is trying to say is that we
should be prepared to discover a human cause for the scream. Not an animal at all,
right?” He looked at the woman.
“Zackly,” Ethel agreed. “There are all kinds a folks in the wide world and this
here place is no more safe from the bad ones than Central Park or Hollywood Boulevard.
And it’s happened before that bad folks on the run have ended up in these high valleys.”
“And what about us?” Dan asked, a little put out by the lecture. “How come you
trust us if you’re so worried about “bad folks”?”
“Aw, hell,” she grinned. “You’re not bad guys, anybody with a brain in his fool
head can see that. Naw, I figure you two to be vacationers, out for some back-to-nature
type recreation, right? Normally you work in cities, maybe even behind desks. Am I
right?”
“You’re right,” Jack said without hesitation. There was something about this
rough woman that he liked already. “That’s… pretty much the case.”
“OK, fine,” Dan said, outnumbered. “So what do you want us to do?”
“Well,” Ethel squinted at him. “I figure we three stick together and make us a
search of the whole valley. Shouldn’t take but a day.”
“A day?” Dan said. “Jack, we’ve only got four days left…”
“Hmm…” Jack considered. He regarded Ethel earnestly. “You really think it’s that
important?”
“Yup,” she replied, nodding once.
“All right,” Jack decided. Dan sighed disgustedly, tossing up his hands. “We’ll
help you look. But what are we going to be looking for?”
“Dunno,” Ethel said. “Guess we’ll know when we find it.”

CHAPTER FIVE

The valley was not all that big, maybe four miles wide by eight miles long, but it was
typical of some of the roughest terrain on earth, a mad jumble of rocks, fallen logs, brush,
ridges, streams, lakes, and pine trees. Lots and lots of pine trees, in all shapes, sizes and
species. Shaped like a rough oval with pinched ends, the place was bound on all sides by
steep glacial cliffs and it was only at the ends that there was access. On the north end,
from whence Jack and Dan had come, this access consisted of a narrow cleft in the rock,
reachable only via a spidery rope bridge that spanned a series of falls and rapids, an
unnamed mountain stream that pounded and jumped down through the rocks on its way
to the great rivers beyond. To the south was Crosscreek Pass, which the brothers had yet
to see, a wickedly steep, scree-ridden notch between two 14,000 foot mountain peaks.
Luckily for the human visitor, trails, both animal and human, had been beaten down over
the years, following the paths of least resistance, generally lengthwise, through the valley.
It was about noon, and they’d covered most of the western side of the valley,
where the scream had seemed to originate, and Jack was tired and a little winded. Ethel
set a steady pace, chatting away happily about this and that, life in Texas (where she was
from) and various features of the landscape about them. She showed Jack the differences
between various fir trees, the burrows of animals, interesting rock formations, all sorts of
forest minutiae. Jack felt a little bad that he’d brought the gun. What was the world
coming to?
Jack also learned that Ethel’s camp was down the valley and that it must have
been her fire that he’d spotted the day before. It seemed that she always hiked and
camped alone, but there was, to Jack’s mind, some underlying reason for her being in this
particular valley that she was loathe to talk about. She mentioned someone named Otis
that she used to camp with, but then changed the subject. Jack was going to press her on
the issue when their conversation was interrupted.
Dan had moved fast and was some hundred yards ahead of the others when Jack
heard him running back towards them, his heavy boots thunking down the trail. As the
younger brother rounded a turn in the trail, Jack saw that he was scared, eyes wide, and
that he kept looking back over his shoulder, back down the path at his back.
 “There’s…” Dan gasped, skidding to a stop. “Something… down there. Big.”
“Big how?” asked Ethel. “Big like a bear, or big like a dog?”
“Like a bear,” Dan said. “It was brown, anyway. I didn’t see it very well, there’s
trees all over…”
“OK, steady, fellas,” Ethel patted the air with her hands. “Let’s not get excited.
Let’s just walk up there, slow and quiet, and see what’s what. OK?”
Jack was torn. Should he pull out his silly little gun? He suspected Ethel might
just laugh at it, but he did it anyway, removing the Colt from his vest with deliberate
slowness. As they walked slowly down the rocky path, he inspected the cylinder again
and then clicked it one over, putting a shell under the hammer with three more in line.
The noise caught Ethel’s attention and she stopped and looked back at Jack. Dan
too stopped and then moved over to hover around his brother, eyeing the revolver
excitedly.
“Well, well,” she raised her eyebrows at Jack. “Didn’t know you was packin’.”
“It’s nothing, really…” Jack wished he hadn’t said that. “I mean, it just for, you
know, self-defense.”
“Yeah,” Ethel said. “Well, here’s your chance to defend yourself with it. If that’s a
bear up there and if it decides to charge us, I advise ya’ll try to shoot him in the head with
as many bullets as that thing’s got in it…”
“Ooo-kay…” Jack said. “Uh, yeah, I’ll… do that.”
“Let me have it, Jack,” urged Dan. “I’ll shoot it!”
“No way,” Jack insisted, swallowing. “Not a chance in hell. I got it.”
“Tell ya what,” Ethel drawled reasonably. “You don’t shoot diddly until I say
shoot, OK? And if I do say shoot, you wait, get a good shot, and then put every bullet into
the critter’s brains. Thata way, we won’t get hurt by stray lead, you won’t start shootin’
up the place for nothin’ and you won’t begin a new career as a poacher when you blast a
mule deer. How’s that sound?”
“That… sounds fine, Ethel,” Jack said, sweating. “I won’t fire unless you say so.”
“Don’t forget,” she admonished. “In the head. If you shoot a bear in the body
you’ll just piss him off.”
“Got it,” Jack said, moving off down the trail, now in the lead. Behind him, Ethel
and then Dan slowly followed, trying hard not to make too much noise.
The trio walked another couple hundred yards down the shady trail and then Dan
pointed over Jack’s shoulder into a thick, overgrown stand of pines. Very little light
filtered into the dense copse, but almost immediately Jack caught a glimpse of movement
amongst the undergrowth and involuntarily gasped and jumped back a few feet. Mouth
dry and heart racing, he recovered and took another few steps forward, the gun now
locked in a two-handed firing grip, pointed into the gloom. The valley seemed to have
gone very quiet. Jack fingered the gun’s safety to off.
“Shoot!” Dan whispered fiercely. “Jack, shoot it!”
“Wait,” Ethel said quietly yet firmly. She shaded her eyes with one hand and
looked closely into the pines. Then, against all reason or expectation, she relaxed and
walked straight into the bramble-choked trees, chuckling.
“Ethel!” Jack hissed. “Wait! What are you…”
“Take it easy, fellas!” she called back. “It ain’t a bear after all. Lessen ya’ll know
of a bear that’ll wear a saddle…”
 “Huh?” Dan looked at his brother, who shrugged by way of response.
From the trees the brothers heard a kind of jingling noise, then a sort of snort, and
out of the brush came Ethel, leading a sturdy, red-brown riding horse.
The brothers sagged and gave a collective “Phew!” as she led the animal up onto
the trail and looked it over. Jack lowered the Colt, flipped the safety back to the on
position and stuffed it back in his pocket.
Besides a few scratches on its flanks and face, the horse seemed fine. A finely-
tooled saddle and blanket lay across its back and there was a set of saddlebags draped
over its rump. The bit and gear were still in its mouth, and the reins jangled as the horse
tossed its head and let out a loud whinny.
“He’s hungry,” Ethel scratched its head. “Aren’t you boy?”
“But…” Jack was puzzled. “What’s he doing out here? Where’s his rider?”
“Dunno,” Ethel said, expertly removing the bit from the animal’s mouth.
“Somewheres around, that’s for sure. This is a ranger’s horse. See the emblem on the
saddle?”
“A ranger?” Dan asked. “Like a park ranger?”
“Yeah,” Ethel replied. “They patrol out here, look after the trails and make sure no
one’s up to any shenanigans. Good folks, mostly.”
“So where,” Jack asked, looking all around, “is this ranger?”
“Hmm,” Ethel scratched her chin, also casting about. “And what kinda ranger
turns his horse out to graze with the bit in his mouth?”
She and Jack went cursorily through the saddlebags, finding only clothes, food,
and personal items that spoke nothing of their owner.
“Hey!” Dan called loudly into the woods. “Ranger! Helloooo!”
Jack and Ethel left the ranger’s effects and joined Dan, yelling into the woods, but
nothing, just the wind in the pines and the chatter of a red squirrel. The horse clopped off
and began hungrily mowing down a stand of grass near the trail. It seemed to have gotten
colder, the sun obscured behind banks of gray cloud that had blown in overhead.
“Huh,” Ethel said, once they’d stopped yelling. “This is weird. Let’s look around.
This way.”
She walked over and tied the horse to a tree where it could get to the grass, and
then ambled off down the path. Somewhat nonplussed, the brothers followed.
They walked along for another two hundred yards or so, carefully inspecting the
trail and the woods on either side, till they came to a fork in the path. One trail led off to
the southwest toward the cliff walls of the valley, the other to the southeast, toward the
center.
“Jack?” Ethel said, indicating the left hand route. “You head thataway. Me and
Dan here will head thisaway.”
Jack thought about it and then nodded.
“Meet back here after we each go half a mile,” he said. “OK?”
“Gotcha,” Ethel agreed. “And keep your eyes open.”
He wished he’d brought his coat. It was definitely getting colder, and his short-
sleeved T shirt felt terribly thin, the down vest only covering his torso. Jack hadn’t gone
fifty yards when he noticed something strange. A huge cloud of blackflies was hovering
and swarming over a spot in the trail ahead. These annoying bugs were always around,
but never in these numbers, unless… Cautiously he walked forward, peering curiously at
the trail.
Then he saw what had attracted the flies, what always attracted flies. In the
middle of the path was a puddle of some blackish stuff that the insects were feasting on,
thousands and thousands of them sucking hungrily at the congealing fluid. A waft of
something just barely rotten hit Jack’s nose and he stepped back a few paces. Blood? He
thought. Ranger’s blood? Oh shit…
Wildly, he turned and bolted back toward the fork in the trail, calling at the top of
his lungs for help.

CHAPTER SIX

The first thing Ethel did was to get rid of the flies. With quick, economical movements,
she made a small fire in the trail, about fifty feet from the stinking black puddle, and then
threw some green leaves and grass on the blaze. Instantly, a billowing cloud of smoke
rose from the fire and puffed out down the trail, enveloping the flies in a thick, roiling
cloud. After about ten minutes, she kicked the fire out and scooped some rocks onto the
spot. The flies were almost all gone, just a few hundred left.
“Have to do, I guess,” Ethel said and then led the way over to the puddle. Very
carefully, her arms out to prevent the brothers’ progress, she paced up to the black stain
and scanned the area around it with her sharp blue eyes.
“Is that…” Dan asked, holding his nose. “What I think it is?”
“Yup,” Ethel said, still examining the area minutely. She stooped and, swatting at
the flies, peered closely at the drying liquid. Then she stood and, stepping deliberately,
walked around the site in an-ever widening circle, again with eyes fastened to the ground.
Jack and Dan stood and waited, looking warily into the dense pines and up and down the
trail. Finally Ethel came back, stepped over the blood, where more hundreds of flies had
already regrouped, and walked up to the brothers.
“This ain’t good, boys,” she said gravely, dusting her palms together.
“No shit,” Dan muttered. Jack shushed his brother and stepped forward.
“What happened, Ethel?”
“Well, I can’t say for sure,” she said and scratched her head, looking Jack in the
eye. “But, here’s what the ground had to tell me. The ranger was comin’ along the trail,
on horseback. He gets to this spot here, and someone jumps him. Probably jumps outta
that big fir there. And this second party, whoever he is, kills the ranger.”
“What?” Dan said plaintively. “How do you know that? Maybe he just got… cut.
A lot… You know. Hurt…” He dwindled off.
“Nobody,” Ethel advised, “can lose that much blood and live.”
“But,” Jack asked. “Couldn’t it have been an animal? Like an elk that got injured
and then staggered away, something like that?”
“Coulda been,” Ethel shook her head. “But just so happens it wasn’t. Looka here.”
She led the men down the trail, near where the cloyingly-sweet decay smell was
very strong, where the flies had taken back control. Here she pointed to the ground and
led the way as she spoke.
“See here? Here’s Mr. Ranger, come cloppin’ along. Then boom! His horse takes
off thataway. OK, over here now. This here is a man’s boot print. It’s the ranger’s print,
matter of fact. Made less than a day ago. Now this here? This here is a man’s boot, but
not the ranger. See? It’s a pair of name-brand hiking boots, smaller size. Prints made the
same time as the others. OK. Now. See over here? This is where somethin’ big crashed
into the underbrush. See all the busted twigs and that scuff mark? All the scrabblin’
marks? And in the middle of it, there’s both sets of boot prints. Only the smaller prints are
behind the ranger prints, like whoever it was was standin’ right close, facin’ the ranger’s
back. Now, over here… If you look real close in the puddle there, you can see, well you
could see, if it weren’t for the flies, the place where the ranger fella fell over and let out
all that blood. Next we see a trail of name-brand prints headin’ thisaway, with drops of
blood every few feet for as far as I cared to follow. Looks pretty plain to me…”
“So this… second party,” Jack mused. “The guy in hiking boots. He knocked the
ranger from his horse and what, shot him? No, we would’ve heard that…”
“Cut his throat, most likely,” Ethel said grimly.
“Uh, yeah,” Jack struggled with a mounting sense of dread but his mind was still
curious. “And after Hiking Boots kills the ranger, he takes the body… where?”
“Dunno,” Ethel shrugged. “North, far as I could tell.”
“We’ll have to look again tomorrow,” Jack said, shivering.
“Yeah,” Ethel agreed. She turned her head to look up at the lowering clouds.
“Weather’s changin’. Gonna storm, most likely.”
“Wait a minute,” Dan said crossly. “Hold on. Are you saying somebody murdered
a ranger here and then made off with the body?”
“Yup,” Ethel picked her teeth with a pine needle. “Most likely…”
“That’s absurd!” Dan blurted. “Why? Why kill some harmless ranger? Who the
fuck would do that?”
“Dan…” Jack said softly.
“No, Jack!” Dan turned to his brother. “This is nuts. And you! I can’t believe you!
You just met this woman this morning, for God’s sake! And one other thing, Ethel. What
about the scream? You haven’t explained that yet. Are you going to tell us that a big,
tough ranger made that scream?”
“Hold on now…” Jack tried to intervene, to give words to the strange sense of
trust he’d developed with Ethel, but stumbled over the actual utterance. Ethel waved him
down and stared Dan in the eye till he looked away.
“I figure,” she said slowly. “That the scream we heard was made by the killer.”
That shut Dan up and there was silence between them, the wind now rushing
through the trees overhead. A few thick drops of rain splatted on the trail and a wave of
cold air came rolling down through the valley. Both brothers shuddered and suddenly felt
as if they were being watched. Jack shook his head.
“Good God,” he muttered, remembering the eerie wail. He tried to link it to a
human face and came up utterly empty.
“Yeah,” Ethel said. “Like I said, not good. Now come on, we gotta get movin’.”

CHAPTER SEVEN

The Animal wanted them, howled for their Secrets, for the fun to begin, but he couldn’t.
Not so many. Too risky. So he waited and watched. He hadn’t reckoned on the weather
turning this bad, but it didn’t matter, there was always a way when you had the Animal as
your best friend. He tried to shout down the Animal, to tell It to wait, be quiet, but it
wasn’t easy. Now that the fun had started, he found that one was not enough for It, not
this time. But he’d have to wait till one of them was alone. Then It would be appeased, It
would show him the Secret anew.
For right now he retreated in his mind to what most people would think of as
memories. To him, though, the concept was unique and peculiar. Over many years of
degradation and abuse, his mind had developed, seemingly on its own, the ability to see
memories in exceeding clarity and detail. This was, however, balanced out by the
medium that the mind used to retrieve these memories for him. It was if his memory was
a series of different jigsaw puzzles, each one, when properly assembled, showing him
some episode or series of moments from his past.
Out of necessity, they normally stayed jumbled up in their boxes,
incomprehensible, but he could select any one at any time and, given a few minutes,
quickly assemble the pieces and view not just a flat picture, not just an assembled photo,
but a three dimensional simulacrum of the actual happening, a virtual reality that no
computer could ever hope to create.
While this left gaps in his memories--serious gaps at that--it also showed him
these particular and important times in uncanny perfection. While most people remember
that some event actually happened in their past, they can’t always remember the specific
details. At our wedding, was Uncle What’s-his-name there? Who knows? He, on the other
hand, could remember what color Uncle What’s-his-name’s tie had been that day, every
word that Uncle had said that day, details that no “normal” brain could dredge up.
This came in especially handy when the Animal was over-insistent. Like now.
And so he sat back against a big tree, out of the weather, and remembered. The pieces of
this particular puzzle were a little tattered from use, for the recollection was an old one,
from his childhood. But they went together just fine and the colors and smells and sights
washed over him.
The apartment, his and Mother’s. A crappy little two-room place, bug-ridden and
shabby. He was seven, eight years old. Nothing on TV. Mother busy in her room with one
of her friends. She’d said: “Don’t never come into my room when I’m busy. Not never.”
But he was bored, curious, scared…
The door wasn’t locked. Mother and her friend were all… tangled up on the
yellowed mattress. They had no clothes on. They looked like they were wrestling, in pain.
Then the man saw him standing there in the doorway. He got mad. Mother got mad. Then
the man told him to do things. Made him do things. And Mother watched. And helped.
Later, after the man left, Mother explained it all to him. How this was special, a
secret, and that only Mother knew what was best for him. That Mother loved him and
would never hurt him. That it was good to do those things.
The recollection ended as they sat down to a nice bowl of ice cream; loving
mother, devoted and happy son.

CHAPTER EIGHT

As they hustled down the path towards camp (and warmth), the trio agreed that Ethel
would go back to her own camp, pack up, and reset her camp up at the brothers’ spot on
the big lake. The Morrisons would meanwhile hightail it back to their tent and get out of
the burgeoning storm.
 By the time Ethel left them, the ranger’s horse in tow, the brothers were fighting
strong, icy-cold headwinds and a spitting rain that was rapidly soaking them through. It
was only another few hundred yards, Jack thought, no risk of hypothermia… The word
sort of bounced around in his head, sounding ugly and cold and stupid. Hypothermia. No
even half-assed camper should ever get hypothermia.
He looked over at Dan and saw him similarly distressed, his lips tinged blue,
wracked with shivers. Jack bent his head to the cold rain and began to jog, his belly
bouncing, watching the trail closely for tripping roots and loose rocks. He noticed
absently that he could see his breath, Dan’s too, for that matter. It must have dropped
twenty degrees in the last few hours, he thought. This could get ugly…
Finally there came into sight the welcome bright tent and their food cache
hanging nearby. They ran full-out the last hundred yards or so and then, warmed a little
from the exertion but terribly winded and light-headed, they skidded to a stop before the
tent.
A man, who jumped up as the brothers approached, was huddled in the doorflap
of their tent. Maybe forty years old, of medium height, thin, with small designer glasses
and a narrow, sour-looking face. He was incongruously dressed in a pair of light running
shorts and a sweatshirt, with a fanny-pack cinched around his waist. On his feet were
expensive-looking running shoes. Obviously chilled to the bone, shivering violently, the
man shuffled around near the tent and clutched himself as he spoke.
“Is this your guys’ tent?” he asked. “’Cause I’m in big trouble here. I think I got
hypothermia. Can you help me? Please?”
The fellow quivered, his eyes wide with fear. Jack pushed Dan into the tent and
then turned on the newcomer. His mind whirled with concern and mistrust. Could he trust
this guy? With a murderer on the loose? The guy didn’t look like a killer, that’s for sure…
After eyeing the man and thinking for a while, with the rain now really beginning to pour,
he decided. It was the shoes that did it. Running shoes, not name-brand hiking boots.
“All right,” Jack told the man. “Come on in, then.”
“Thank God,” the man said, stooping into the tent flap.
Dan moved over to make room and the three of them piled into the tent and
covered up with the brothers’ sleeping bags. The brothers were, needless to say,
uncomfortable with this stranger crammed in there with them and their stuff, but the guy
was obviously in bad shape, so they huddled together on one side and gave the newcomer
half of the tent. Soon, with the rain pelting down on the fly overhead, the three had
recovered enough for conversation. Jack spoke first.
“So,” he said awkwardly. “Cozy, huh? Uh, I guess I should ask your name…”
“Oh,” said the man. “Sorry about that. It’s Marsh. Jerry Marsh. I really appreciate
this you guys. Thanks a lot.”
“It’s OK,” Jack assured him. “I’m Jack and this is Dan. But what, may I ask,
where you doing up here? I mean, your clothes aren’t exactly suited for hiking…”
“I was running,” Jerry replied, blinking. “I run a lot. I’d never been up to this
valley, and decided to make a try for it. Came out of Steamboat. Well, near there, anyway.
I didn’t count on the storm and all. And with that rope ladder out, I guess we’re all stuck.
Unless we want to go over Crosscreek pass…”
“What’s that?” Dan spoke up, an edge of fear in his voice. “The bridge is out? The
rope bridge?”
 “That’s right,” Jerry said gravely. “I’d been up here about three hours and went to
head down when I found it like that. It was sort of dangling there, on the far side of the
stream. Totally impassable.”
“Huh,” Jack said, inwardly alarmed. “Did it look like it had been cut or was it
like, washed out?”
“How should I know?” Jerry shrugged. “I’m an attorney, not an engineer. All I
knew was that I couldn’t get down. I’d seen your camp here on my run and it looked like
the only shelter around, so… I hope you don’t mind too much. As soon as I can, I’ll head
down, get out of your hair.”
“Oh, it’s alright…” Jack said. “But, hey, isn’t Steamboat Springs a pretty far ways
from here? Like twenty miles or so?”
“Yeah.” Jerry answered, removing and wiping his glasses. He had small dark eyes
that peered rodent-like at Jack. “But I drove from there to the trailhead, probably where
you guys set out. We’re only about ten miles from there.”
“Oh,” Jack thought that sounded reasonable. “Well, Jerry, I guess you are stuck.
You’re welcome to food and shelter. I guess we can figure some way of making our stuff
stretch to cover three people…”
“Maybe,” Dan put in. “Ethel’s got some extra stuff.”
“Ethel?” Jerry asked.
“Yeah,” Dan said. “She’s… with us. It’s kind of hard to explain.”
“Just another camper,” Jack said dismissively, earning a look from Dan. “We met
her this morning and she’s decided to camp here, near us.”
“Why?” Jerry asked. “I thought you camper types liked your solitude.”
“Just…” Jack wasn’t used to prevarication. “Being sociable, I guess…”
“Huh,” Jerry grunted. “Whatever. Listen, guys, I’m famished. Anything you could
spare to eat would be really, you know, great…”
With that they set to work in the cramped space to make some food. Dan dashed
out for the stove from his pack and Jack went out for a few packets of freeze-dried from
the cache. He had to lower it, rummage around for something decent in the pack and then
hoist the whole thing back up into the air. By the time he got back he was cold and wet
again, but Dan had water on to boil and the air had warmed in the tent to an almost
tolerable level. Jerry was still wrapped in Jack’s bag, zippered up to the eyeballs. The
three sat mostly in silence, the rain loud on the thin fabric of the tent over their heads,
occasionally making some innocuous comment.
Jack and Dan were both contemplating the prospect of their having to climb the
pass. Additionally, Jack couldn’t help but think about the ramifications of finding the
ranger’s horse and… remains. There were the authorities to contact, the questions to be
answered, depositions to be given, the whole ball of red tape to be wound. But what
really concerned him was the immediate future. If this guy, Jerry, was right, then they
were stranded, at least temporarily, in the valley with a murderer. This was hard for him
to grasp in any serious way. The incongruity of gruesome death in this eminently peaceful
valley, perhaps, or the sense of disjointed unreality that he felt. There was also the simple
existence of Jerry here in their tent to be worried about.
His mind focused on the problem like it did when he read a mystery novel. OK,
who are the suspects? So far, just good old Jerry, the jogging attorney. And Ethel, of
course… But that was absurd. Wasn’t it? He frowned. Could it have been Ethel? He
fulminated, deep in thought. Jerry’s unexpected question made him start.
“So you guys…” Jerry said, muffled. “Are you brothers?”
“That’s right,” Dan replied, occupied with dinner. “How’d you know?”
“You look alike,” Jerry said reasonably. “In my line of work, you develop a knack
for things like that.”
“You’re an attorney?” Jack queried. “Can’t be a lot of work in Steamboat…”
“Man, you got that right,” Jerry sighed. “But it’s not so bad. I made a bundle in
the market a while back, so now I mostly just take cases that interest me.”
“It that right?” Jack said. “Like what, for instance?”
“Oh, whatever,” Jerry answered. “Mainly environmental causes.”
Dan had the water boiling by now and carefully poured water into each of the
three pan plates he’d laid out, then added equal portions of Salisbury Steak, instant
mashed potatoes, and green beans. Salt, pepper, utensils, and napkins were laid out, along
with cups of hot tea. The three chatted a bit as they ate but the storm was distracting and
they found themselves listening to it more than to each other.
They were all but done eating and were feeling much more comfortable when the
flap parted and Ethel’s wide head, dripping wet, popped into the tent. Jack was
disconcerted that he hadn’t heard the woman approach their camp but, despite his
speculative, amateur-sleuth pondering, he was glad to see her.
“Howdy, boys. It’s…” she stopped short when she saw Jerry. “Oh, I see ya’ll got
company.” She gave Jack a sort of funny look. “Say, uh, Jack. Can I, uh, see you, you
know, outside?”
“Ethel,” Jack pleaded. “It’s pouring rain and cold out there.”
“I strung a tarp,” she said firmly. “Dry as toast.”
“Oh all right…” Jack grumbled, reaching for his boots.

CHAPTER NINE

Out under the tarp, Ethel lit a damp Marlboro and eyed Jack through the smoke. She’d
put on a heavy wool coat and a red wool stocking cap. The rain was still coming down
but seemed heavier somehow, more dense, as if the drops had gotten bigger. A chilling
wind blew down from the pass, swept over the camp and the lake and roared overhead in
the pines. The tarp flapped violently but held to its moorings. Jack waved his arms and
stomped his feet, working to get his circulation going. He looked around for the bulk of
the ranger’s horse but saw nothing.
“Where’s the horse?” he asked.
“Gone,” Ethel answered curtly through the smoke. “Broke its leg in a crevasse.
Damn shame, too, ‘cause it was a fine animal.”
“Oh…” said Jack, startled but more than a bit numb to such unexpected mishaps.
Not wanting to ask (or know) what she’d done with the poor creature, at least not right
then, he changed the subject. “So… what did you want to talk to me about?”
“What’s the idea?” Ethel asked Jack, jerking her head at the tent.
“What do you mean?” Jack responded, uneasy with his thoughts and the woman’s
confrontational manner. “Jerry? What about him?”
“Did it occur to ya’ll that he might be…”
“The killer?” Jack finished. “Yes, it did occur to me, and I ruled it out. He’s got
the wrong kind of shoes, for one thing, and, well, just look at him. He seems pretty
damned harmless to me. Besides, what was I supposed to do? Just let him freeze to death,
right outside my tent?” He was almost shouting by the time he finished, waved to silence
by Ethel.
“Now, now,” she said quietly. “I suppose you’re right, nothing much you coulda
done. You know, though, he coulda changed his shoes…”
She fell silent, smoking pensively, while Jack paced around a little and then
leaned against a tree. He was afraid, tired, cold, and irritated and wanted nothing but to
get into his bag (except of course Jerry was in it) and sleep for a week.
“Look, Ethel…” he said, exasperated. “I’m tired and cold. I need some sleep. If
you’ve got a point, make it.”
She smiled her leathery grin at him. “Fair enough,” she said. “I guess we got no
choice but to trust the fella. But what about tonight? What if there’s someone else in this
valley, besides us four? For all we know, there could be another dozen people camped
around here. I for one don’t wanna get my throat cut while I’m sleepin’.”
That unpleasant reality brought Jack up short; he hadn’t thought of that…
“You’re right,” he said. “We should post watches. I guess I could manage a few
more hours…”
“Naw,” Ethel shook her head. “I got it. I’ll wake ya’ll up in about three hours.
Meantime, I bet ya’ll are gonna need a bag? I got an extra…”
“Now that you mention it…”
Jack gratefully accepted the older yet quite serviceable sleeping bag and went
back to their tent, where Dan and Jerry were already asleep, both snoring softly, zipped
up tight. It was a struggle to undress so he settled for taking off his boots. He squirmed a
space for himself between the sleepers, spread out the bag, half-on, half-off the pads lain
there for warmth and dryness, and crawled in.
He had planned to mull things over before he went to sleep, to try to make some
sense of what was happening, but his body had other ideas and within five minutes he
was deeply asleep. Outside the tent, as the rain fell and the wind howled, Ethel sat before
a small fire built under the tarp and slowly smoked the better part of a pack of cigarettes.

CHAPTER TEN

He was having a little trouble. Granted, tomorrow was another day and the Animal would
be unleashed again, but it was so loud, so insistent. Now the growling voice never quit,
never ceased its terrible, wonderful litany of mayhem and blood. In his head it grunted, it
screamed , it wailed and gibbered. They couldn’t hear it, of course. He’d know if they
could hear it. They’d be afraid.
“Kill them. NOW! Kill them all and bath in their sticky, delicious blood! Tear off
their skin with your teeth and chew out their guts! Feel their eyeballs pop under your
thumbs... KILL THEM!”
It never stopped, no matter how hard he tried to block it out, and the Animal was
inventive, never advocating the same violence twice. He was starting to think that if the
Animal got any louder, they would hear it. It would come rumbling from the deep dark
places where it lived and crack his head open and shout its gory presence to the world. Or
it would take control of him, his mouth and tongue, and give voice to the litany of blood
and death. That would be bad, he decided. Too soon, too risky. He would wait. But it was
hard. The Animal was strong, it was angry, and it was hungry.
In response to the stress, he went to the shelf in his mind and pulled out another of
the jigsaw puzzle memories, this time one that he particularly liked, one from his teen
years. This one took a while to put together, but it finally came into shape and he drifted
off into a perfect recreation of an event from his past.
He’s seventeen and he and Mother have moved into a bigger apartment. He and
Mother come in the door, followed by a disreputable-looking fellow who is obviously
drunk. He goes to one of the bedrooms and closes the door behind, then goes back and
watches through the one-way peephole on his side. Mother uses the drugs and the man
drinks them, unsuspecting. He comes out of the bedroom with a ball bat. He smashes the
man’s kneecaps and then the man’s hands. The man yells but is out after the second
whack. Mother goes through the man’s things and finds the drugs and money that they’d
hoped for. He gets rid of the man, taking him to a landfill he knows.
Later, very high on the drugs. Drained after the intensity of their fierce sexual
coupling, he and Mother laugh at their good fortune. They plan on how to spend the
money, when to work this way again. After all, they have each other and the world is their
oyster. Mother is pretty and smart, son is strong and brave.

CHAPTER ELEVEN

There she was, beautiful, graceful, happy. Helen in better days, when they’d been dating,
when she was… OK. They were on a beach somewhere, white breakers and white sand
under an orange sky. She was walking towards him, legs long and smooth, her head
down, masked by falling blond hair. He rose from the blanket and went to meet her. But
he didn’t want to, he was afraid. Helen? he said. Is it you? She looked up and then he
was really afraid. Mortally terrified. He tried to turn, to run, but he was a block of
cement with eyes. Her face looked like it had the last time he’d seen her. Her eyes rolled
wildly, unfocused and glaringly insane. Her mouth writhed with a life of it’s own, tongue
lolling and lashing. He cringed but could not move. Her mouth never formed the words
but he heard them all the same: “You did this, Jack. You made me this way. What kind of
husband do you call yourself? What about me, Jack? What about me?!”
Jack jerked awake, terrified and pouring sweat. Mercifully, his mind let the dream
float away and he focused on reality. He was in the tent with Dan. And Jerry. And they
were in some kind of trouble… And Ethel was shaking his foot.
Full consciousness flooded in and Jack, the dream now banished, groaned and
made to get up and take his turn at watch. He noticed that, judging from the sound of it,
the rain had finally stopped; now it was more of a light hiss than the previous incessant
pattering.
“Well that’s good, anyway…” he muttered, struggling with his wet boots.
“What’s that?” whispered Ethel.
“Rain stopped.”
“Uh, Jack?”
Ethel threw back the tent flap. Outside, the air was white with heavy flakes of wet
snow, blown nearly sideways by the cold wind that now fluttered through the tent. From
what he could see in the dark, a thin crust had already developed on the ground and more
snow was piling up as he watched. Ethel looked him gravely.
“We got us a whole new ballgame.”
“Christ!” Jack swore, joining Ethel under the tarp. “As if we didn’t have enough
problems…”
“Yeah,” Ethel yawned. “Well, nothin’ stirrin’ so far. Keep your eyes peeled,
though. I cut up some wood for the fire there, but don’t stoke it too big or you’ll melt the
tarp. ‘Night, Jack.”
She went over to her own, one-person pup tent and crawled in, expertly shedding
her boots as she went, leaving them just outside, under the rain-fly. Jack paced around
under the tarp and looked up into the swirling snow, then went over and crouched by the
fire, adding a few twigs to give himself something to do. If someone is out there, he
thought, they’re freezing their balls off.
He paced some more, fighting a deep fatigue, and then was suddenly seized with a
thought. Ethel’s boots. There they were, just sitting there… No, he thought, don’t start
thinking like that. It couldn’t be Ethel. But he couldn’t help himself and guiltily sidled
over to Ethel’s tent. He stooped and picked up one boot, turning the sole to the firelight
for a better view. It was flat, almost worn smooth from use. Greatly relieved and feeling
fairly sheepish, he gingerly replaced the boot and turned back to the fire.
Alternately pacing and minding the small fire, he passed an hour. The snow
continued, swirling under the tarp until a rough circle was outlined around the fire. Jack
watched it fall and worried, willing it to stop. Cut it out! he thought. It’s not even October
yet! Of all the places where you could drop an early blizzard, why does it have to be
here? But the weather was as inscrutable as ever, caring not a bit for whatever foolish
creatures were in its way, and kept right on snowing.
Jack paced and worried, paced and looked up at the cursed snow, paced and
flapped his arms. He was tired but he was now riding a jittery wave of fear-energy, his
adrenal glands pumping to give him an edgy alertness that kept him pacing and worrying
long past the three hours he was supposed to cover in their rotation of watches.
Mind awhirl but unfocused, like a rat in an endless maze, he barely noticed when
the sky started to lighten just a little, the black giving way very slowly to a dark, dark
gray. The snow never let up for a second. It fell and fell, piling up all around the tarp,
covering the tents, covering everything in a blanket of crystal white. What if it doesn’t
stop? he thought. What if we’re in the middle of some sort of freak, early-season blizzard
that was just going to keep going and going for days? Used as he was to being involved
in situations in which he was powerless, Jack felt a sort of angry dread creeping in, the
feeling that they hadn’t seen the worst of this.
Finally he realized that he’d been wool-gathering, shook off the daze into which
he’d fallen, and went to rouse the others, surprised at how light out it had become. He
realized he was hungry and thirsty and had to pee really bad. How long had he been
pacing and worrying, he wondered? A look at the sky told him that he’d fretted away the
rest of the night; it was already dawn.
Shaking his head again, Jack looked around the campsite. The tents were
completely covered in new snow, the ground all about them was at least hip-deep, and the
sad little fire under the tarp had long since burned itself out. Covered in snow and frost
like cake frosting, the surrounding trees bent low under the weight, branches drooping
like tired old men. And still the snow fell and the wind blew.
 “Hey, sleepy-heads!” he called to the tents, his voice sounding small and muffled
in the wind and the new blanket of white. “Time to get up!”
He was rewarded by a very Dan-like groan and some mumbling and thrashing
noises from both tents. Feeling tough and capable somehow, maybe since he’d let them
all sleep and stayed up all night, he went to rekindle the fire.

CHAPTER TWELVE

Within a few minutes Ethel shook her way out of her tent, clearing a small space in the
snow where she could stand and lace up her boots. Then she made paths from each tent to
the clearing beneath the tarp, stamping down the snow to form narrow paths that ended
up looking like trenches.
“What the hell, Jack?” she said as she worked. “You been up all night?”
“Yeah,” he said, poking the small, growing fire before him. “I wasn’t sleepy.
More… worried, I guess.”
Ethel paused, looked around her in wonder at the snow, and whistled.
“Shee-it!” she drawled, hands on hips. “This here is a bona fide storm, no doubt
about that. Damnation.”
“What the fuck?”
This was Dan, getting a face full of snow as he opened the tent flap and looked
out. He shook the cold wet clumps from his head and momentarily withdrew back into
the tent. A few unintelligible yet vehement words could be heard from within and then
Dan emerged, pushing small drifts aside to let himself out.
“Morning,” Jack greeted his brother cheerlessly. “It, uh, snowed last night.”
“No!” Dan groaned in sarcasm. “Is that what it is?” He bent back down and spoke
into the tent. “Might want to stay put for a while, Jerry,” he said to their guest. “It’s a
little cold. And snowy. And windy…”
A grunt from Jerry was plenty of answer, and Dan re-zipped the tent flap and
joined Jack and Ethel beneath the tarp, on the only dry ground to be seen. All of them had
put on their warmest clothes and none of them were particularly uncomfortable, but it
was cold, Jack would guess ten degrees or so, and the wind gusted through the campsite
like a thief, grabbing at hair and clothing and turning their exposed faces numb. The three
huddled by the fire and talked.
“What are we going to do?” Dan asked in a dawning sense of alarm.
“Have breakfast,” Ethel answered evenly.
“No, I mean,” Dan pursued. “What about getting out of here? We can’t hang
around here, not after yesterday. We have to get down and tell somebody about this. The
authorities…”
“Will have to wait,” Jack finished for him. “We’re just going to have to wait.
There’s nothing else we can do.”
“Shit!” Dan spat. “This sucks.”
“Yup,” Ethel nodded. “But Jack’s right. We’d break our necks tryin’ to go up the
pass in conditions like these. And the rope bridge? Forget it. Besides, this is a freak
storm. It’ll most likely melt off in a day or two. Once it stops, that is…”
“Oh yeah,” something had occurred to Jack. “I forgot to tell you. Jerry says the
bridge is out.” Ethel greeted this bit of news with a grunt and shook her head.
 “Shit,” she said. “Hadn’t figured on that.” The three sat for a while in silence,
glaring at the falling whiteness and trying to keep near the fire without getting singed.
Jack eventually sighed and stood up.
‘Well,” he said. “Better see about some chow…”

CHAPTER THIRTEEN

It was a cold meal that morning, one of oatmeal and dried fruit and tea, eaten hunched
near the fire. Except for Jerry, that is. He’d taken one look out the tent flap, cursed like a
sailor and zipped himself back in. Ethel brought him a pan of food, which he thanked her
for and greedily accepted. Returning to the fire, Ethel hunkered down and eyed the
brothers.
“You really trust that guy?” she asked, indicating the tent.
“No,” Jack said firmly. He’d been thinking about this. “I don’t.”
“Wha?” Dan spluttered. “And you let me sleep in the same tent with him? Thanks
a lot! Man!”
“Relax,” Jack assured. “Let me explain. I don’t trust him, but I don’t think he
killed the ranger, either. I think there’s at least one other person in the valley, maybe
more, that are… responsible.”
Across the fire, Ethel sighed heavily and shook her head.
“What is it, Ethel?” Jack inquired.
“Aw, hell,” she said after a pause. “I was hopin’ this wouldn’t come up, but now I
guess I gotta tell ya’ll the truth.” She looked up at them. “Fact is, I’m not just here to
camp and hike. You see, there’s this man, my brother, and he, well… lives here. In the
valley. Has for about a year now.”
The brothers eyes slowly dilated to full-open and their mouths widened to Os.
Dan shook his head in disbelief.
“Jesus, Ethel!” Jack forced himself to keep his voice low enough that Jerry, over
in the tent, wouldn’t overhear. “What the hell? I don’t believe this!”
“Put the gun on her, Jack!” urged Dan, pushing his brother on the shoulder. “She’s
the killer’s sister, man!”
“You take it easy!” Jack rounded on his brother. “And keep your voice down…”
He turned back to Ethel. “I suppose now you’re going to tell us he’s a homicidal
schizophrenic. Ted Bundy with fangs. And he escaped from the asylum and has a steel
hook. What is this shit, Ethel? Huh?”
The woman bowed her head, speaking into the fire. As she did, Jack felt a sort of
pressure building inside of his chest and he developed goosebumps, but not from the
cold. To him, the story hit close to home.
“No, he’s not homicidal. But he is insane. Crazy as a bat in a whirlwind. His
name’s Otis. We always knew Otis was different, but it was in his teens that things got
rough. He used to sorta just… withdraw. Just kinda zone out and not respond to nothin’.
Wouldn’t eat, wouldn’t sleep, go to the shitter, nothin’. This’d last for a few days, then a
couple of weeks, then months and years. Keep in mind, this is West Texas, ignorant and
poor. Dirt fuckin’ poor. Pardon my Greek.”
“But that ain’t no excuse. My mom and pop shoulda found a way to get Otis
better care. Where they sent him? More like a prison, like a warehouse, than a hospital. I
mean, hospitals are supposed to cure people, right, make ‘em better? I was just a kid, I
didn’t know no better. Not then, anyway…”
“Well, finally, when I was fifteen, Otis got let out. I guess they figured he was
better, but they was wrong. Oh sure, he was, you know, aware, he could eat and watch
TV and take care of himself in a real simple way, but he wasn’t better. He still couldn’t
talk. He was just kind of a… veg, I guess. I didn’t pay him no mind, I was young and
wild and more interested in cruisin’ with the local boys than carin’ for my weird crazy
brother. Typical kid, I ‘spose.”
“Well, one night somethin’ inside Otis musta just snapped. He up and vanished,
just walked off into the night. I was moved outta the house by then, but I helped with the
search parties and the fliers and all. But nothin’. No Otis. Poof. After a month they quit
lookin’. After a year they declared him dead.”
“I was goin’ through what crappy little bit of stuff he had that spring, after he
disappeared, as a favor to mom. Otis had some toys and books and crayons and shit, and
it was then that I really started to feel bad about Otis and how we’d, well, let him down,
you know? I mean, here was this pathetic little pile of junk that nobody would give a shit
about, but it was all this guy had ever owned. A growed man, a big, ugly growed man,
matter of fact.”
“Well, I cried. Cried and cried. My mom told me it couldn’t have been helped,
Otis was just crazy and no one could help him and all this shit, but I knew. I knew we
coulda done better by him. Got him better doctors, for one thing.”
“Well, time passed and I got on with my life. Went into nursin’. Seemed the thing
to do… But even the patients we got in the ER didn’t hurt like what’d been done to Otis.”
“So this kinda keeps gnawin’ at me, you know? I can’t stop thinkin’ about it, it’s
drivin’ me nuts. I thought I was gonna go crazy, too. Then it hit me. What if Otis wasn’t
dead? What if he’d just… escaped? What if he’d busted outta the shell he’d been in and
lit out on his own? Well, one way or another, I had to know. It wasn’t never gonna let go
of me ‘till I found out. That was eight years ago.”
“I quit my job and spent the first few years spinnin’ my wheels, but finally I
caught a hint of Otis in St Louis, a guy that recognized Otis’ picture. He was positive.
The guy said he’d worked at the same assembly plant with Otis a year ago. Didn’t know
what had happened to him, just up and left one day, looked like. Then there was the guy
in Phoenix, at the Burger King. That led to California, then Oregon, finally Denver and
now… here.
“I was always a few months behind him, but I started to get a picture of Otis, a
sorta impression. He was doin’ all right, mostly. Held down a menial job for a few
months, lived in public shelters, saved up some cash and then moved on. I talked to
hobos, winos, hookers, truck-drivers, waitresses, God, all kinds of characters. Everybody
that knew Otis seemed to like him, in a vague sorta way… They all figured he was just
kinda slow.”
“So, after a lot of lookin’ and talkin’, I finally traced Otis here. Seemed he’d
become quite the outdoorsman in his stay in Denver. Just loved the campin’ and hikin’.
Spent all his free time up in the mountains. He saved up some money again, but this time
he didn’t move on to another city. He moved away, as far away from people as he could
get.”
“’Course, when I heard that, I worried. That poor crazy bastard out here in these
mountains? He’d be dead in a week. But, turned out, I was dead wrong. Otis is a born,
natural woodsman. He can live off the land better than most animals and he’s got a
thicker coat. Like one of them, whattaya call it? Gifted Savants? Damnedest thing I ever
heard tell…”
“So, anyway, I tracked him for about another year until I finally found him. He
wasn’t mad I’d come or nothin’, just kinda confused. Why come all this way? I couldn’t
believe it when I first saw him. Here was this guy I’d always known as a vegetable,
talkin’ and smilin’… Well, it was a shock.”
“I stayed with him for a few days, saw he was doin’ just fine, and left. It seemed
like the best possible thing. Otis was happy and free and the rest of the world wouldn’t
have to deal with another crazy person. Why not? It was a load and a half off my mind,
tell ya what… So now I visit him sometimes. He lives down yonder, up a hidden box
canyon by the bridge.”
Finally she looked up at Jack, tears glinting in the corners of her eyes.
“But Otis’d never hurt nobody, Jack. You gotta believe me! If he was, you know,
dangerous, I’da told you. I swear. And… I’m sorry I didn’t tell you sooner.”
The brothers were silent. Around them the wind howled and, completely
unnoticed, the snow began to slacken. Dan pressed his lips together and looked at Jack,
then back into the fire.
To Jack the whole speech had been one of all too familiar concepts. Her brother
had undergone a change that was, to Jack, intimate, first-hand knowledge. It sounded a
lot like Helen.

CHAPTER FOURTEEN

Helen Morrison had gone away, just like Otis. No one, not the neurologists, not the
psychiatrists, not the physiologists, no one could ever really tell Jack why. Why had she
been a perfectly happy, well-adjusted, well-loved human being and then have changed
over the course of only two years into a wild dervish of fractured, paranoid madness? It
was a brain tumor. Nope, biopsy negative. It was a chemical imbalance. Wrong, the drugs
only made it worse. It was her childhood. Uh-uh, raised in perfect bliss. So what was it?
No one could ever say, and, in the end, Jack had had to accept that. But he would never
get over it.
They’d been the happiest couple around, up-and-coming, ambitious, good-
looking, intellectual, and gregarious. They’d aggressively pursued their respective careers
and planned on kids. But they’d only been married for about a year when the first of what
Jack came to think of as “episodes” had occurred.
While having dinner at a very nice restaurant one night, Helen just sort of came
unglued. Jack had noticed that she’d been touchy lately, prone to anger and accusation,
but he’d shrugged it off, citing work pressures, PMS, who knew? The dinner was, in fact,
a chance to relax and enjoy themselves, a break in their busy schedules.
Helen had been keeping a close eye on their waiter all night, an innocuous little
Hispanic guy who’d rendered excellent service. Jack asked her what was wrong, what’s
with the waiter?
“He should stop it,” she’d said conspiratorially, her voice strange, child-like. “It’s
not nice.”
 “Stop what?”
“Listening to my thoughts. The fucker.”
Helen had almost never cursed and this had shocked Jack. Helen wasn’t drunk,
she wasn’t cranky, she was just plain acting crazy. He’d been confused, embarrassed.
Helen’s face had taken on an almost sinister cast and her eyes had darted here and there
under half-slitted, suspicious eyes, never losing sight of the waiter when he wasn’t in the
kitchen. The people at tables near them had stared obliquely at her, politely ignoring the
minor faux-pas. What’s happening? He’d thought.
“Honey, that’s…” Jack had begun, then stopped. “He’s not doing any such thing...
Are you OK? Should we get going?”
“Oh, I’m fine…” she’d drawn out the words. “But he’s a fucker and he’s gonna
get it…”
“Oookay…” Jack had made to go. They’d already paid their check and had been
having coffee when this had started. Suddenly she’d leapt up like a frightened deer and
bolted for the waiter, screaming a feral threat as she went. The whole place had erupted,
people jumping up, waiters and staff rushing over, a small-scale pandemonium. Jack had
corralled his wife through no small effort, kicking and screaming. Jack had never really
considered that phrase before but he was a believer that night.
She’d calmed down about halfway home, in the car, just sort of sighed and looked
over at Jack and smiled. She didn’t remember any of it. Or at least that’s what she’d said.
Jack was torn in half. What was going on here? He’d tried to tell her about it, had asked
her what was wrong, all the normal things one might say in such a situation, but she’d
claimed that he was nuts, nothing like that had happened. She’d had a very nice night.
Finally Jack gave up and had tried to forget about it. But it happened again, at an
art museum. Then again at a friend’s party. Jack had put his foot down after the third time
and, with the help of her family, had made her go to the doctors. And so it had begun, the
“Age of Medicine” as Jack thought of it, a never-ending cavalcade of psychiatrists and
neurologists and specialists of kinds that Jack never did understand. And Helen just got
worse, the examinations and tests feeding her fear, her raging, unbreakable paranoia. It
didn’t happen over night, like a switch being flipped, but it did happen quickly, so fast
that one day Jack had come home from work and found Helen gone, checked out of the
house and into a hospital by her family.
He had been there for Helen every minute, but she began to fear even him and
then to accuse him of handing her over to “Them”, meaning the hospital and staff. His
heart finally broke when she did that, and Jack had known that she was lost. But he’d
kept visiting, every day, always checking with her specialist-du-jour about any progress.
The weeks turned into months and years and Helen just got worse, the brief periods of
semi-lucidity coming at greater and greater intervals and finally, not at all. Her family,
patrician money, had reluctantly concurred that there was no other choice, and Helen was
put under full-time care. Lockup Ward in a very well-respected hospital.
Jack had wrapped his grief and misery in a show of courage throughout the
ordeal, always up-beat, always hopeful, but once she was really gone and he was alone
with the house and all of their things, he’d hit bottom, plumbed the depths. He’d taken a
sabbatical/hardship leave from his career and had nothing to do. He’d pushed away
anyone who tried to help and then proceeded to try to drink himself to death. A quart of
vodka, twice a day, was his prescription, and he was doing a rather good job of it when,
after two months, Dan and Mr. Herb Morrison, their dad, had come over and hauled him
away to rehab. He’d gone willingly, too weak to put up a fight. And he’d dried out and
learned how to deal with Helen’s illness. But it had been hard, so hard. So much anger
and resentment and guilt.
That was all three years past, but Jack had never really, fully recovered.
Emotionally raw, he made it from day to day, then week to week, slowly rebuilding
interests, friendships, slowly moving forward in putting the pieces of life back together.
Dan had been, of course, great, and the younger brothers’ recent wedding had been a time
of genuine joy for Jack, one that he’d scarcely known how to enjoy anymore.
And the camping vacations. Those had helped immensely, showing Jack the
somehow heartening fact that the mountains and all they stood for were absolutely
indifferent to Jack and his pain and guilt. They’d be there long after Jack and all of his
troubles weren’t even memories, and that allowed him to put things in a semblance of
perspective. Yes, the mountains had held all good memories… Until now.

CHAPTER FIFTEEN

Jack didn’t think all these things, he didn’t dredge up all the memories of Helen and her
illness. They were part of him, like scar tissue, and he flashed through the whole ugly
time in a few seconds. Then he was back, squatting before the fire, under the tarp, in the
mountains, with Dan and Ethel, the wind whistling past and the snow now lightening to
flurries. He wiped his eyes quickly with the back of his hand and looked at Ethel.
“I believe you,” he said firmly. “About your brother. I don’t know why, I don’t
have any reason to, but… I believe you. I have some… personal experience with mental
illness.”
Ethel slumped a little in relief and sighed. Dan looked expectantly back and forth
at the two of them.
“Thanks, Jack,” Ethel said quietly. “But, if ya’ll don’t mind my askin’… who?”
“My wife,” Jack said evenly, knowing exactly what she meant.
“Ah,” Ethel nodded sadly. “I’m sorry.”
The three were quiet for a few moments, then Dan stood and paced around,
flapping his arms for warmth. Around them the valley, so recently an idyllic place of
natural beauty, had been transformed overnight into a harsh wilderness, cold and
forbidding and dangerous.
“OK, so…” Dan demanded. “Now what? So we know there’s someone else up
here, so what? Does that change anything? I mean, the bridge is still out, it’s still cold as
shit, and we’re still camping in the same valley with a fucking murderer. Am I wrong?”
His voice had risen to a shout, and the last word, “wrong” came reverberating down off
the valley walls before being absorbed by the snow and wind.
“Take it easy, Dan,” Jack went over to his brother. “We’re going to be fine. We
just need to wait this out…”
“Yeah, well…” Ethel contradicted gently. “Here’s the deal with that. I’m gonna
have to go see that Otis is OK, snow or no snow. He’s my brother. Plus, while I’m down
there, I can check on the bridge.”
“Hmm…” Jack tried to focus on the here and now. “Yeah, I can see that you’d
want to check on him. And the bridge. But don’t you think it’s a little dangerous? I mean,
you can’t even see the trails anymore, you could fall into a crevasse…”
They discussed their options for some time, going over the various pros and cons
of different courses of action. Inaction was, of course, another option; they could just sit
tight and wait for the snow to melt. With the addition of Ethel’s provisions they had
enough food for another week if need be, even with the unexpected addition of Jerry. But
the idea of huddling in the tents was somehow repugnant and they put that at the bottom
of their list of possibilities.
Finally they agreed on a plan. Ethel and Jack would go down the valley and see
Otis and check on the bridge, while Dan held down the fort here with Jerry. They’d
decided there was a fair chance that local Search-and-Rescue teams might be out and
about, in planes or choppers perhaps, and that the tents and fire made the best attention-
getters around. Jack and Ethel would try to be back by nightfall, but they were taking
bags and food just in case.
As far as self-defense went, Jack would take the Colt, reasoning that the killer,
whoever he was, hadn’t jumped a campsite, instead attacking a single victim. In other
words, Safety in Numbers. Dan wasn’t unarmed, either, as he would have their cooking
utensil, a huge Bowie-knife thing that served as spatula, tongs, and cutlery, about a foot
of forged steel, razor sharp. And Jerry even agreed to take his turn at watch that night, if
need be. Once decided, Jack and Ethel went and packed a light bag each and made ready
to go. The weather seemed to be mellowing in intensity and had settled in as just plain
cold and windy.
Jack drew Dan aside before they left, noticing the anxious look on his brother’s
face, and put an arm around his shoulder.
“It’s going to be OK,” Jack said firmly. “We’re going to be fine. All of us. OK?”
“OK…” Dan answered doubtfully. “If you say so…”
“I do,” Jack said. “But, uh, while we’re gone? Keep an eye on Jerry. Right?”
“Right. Like a hawk. But, you know… why? You think he’s… dangerous?”
“Naw, of course not. I wouldn’t leave if I did. It’s just, I don’t know. Just keep an
eye on him, OK?”
“Yeah. Come back quick, Jack, all right?” It seemed like there was more that Dan
wanted to say but he kept quiet.
“Hey, we’ll be back by dark,” Jack said in his best big-brotherly way. “Don’t
worry.”
From over by the tents, Ethel shouted over at Jack to hurry up. She was already
wearing her pack and had cut each of them a stout, seven-foot long stick to probe the
treacherous rocky paths for cracks and drop-offs. Even Jerry poked his head from the tent
to wish them luck. Jack patted Dan on the back one more time and went to join her.

CHAPTER SIXTEEN

The Animal raged. It burbled and spat. It wanted out. But he couldn’t, not here, not now.
He’d be caught, maybe hurt, or, worst of all, Locked Up. So he held It down with all his
might, managing a smile on his face and a warm word now again on his tongue. But It
was so angry, so hungry. When it made any sense at all it shouted and screamed and
bellowed the words to him, the words that described the Secret, the thing that he and the
Animal shared so intimately. The Secret was inside of all skin-bags, tucked away in all of
them and they didn’t even know it. It was a mystery that the Aztecs had known, that the
remote peoples of New Guinea knew. He smiled now, just thinking about it. Yes, they all
had the Secret. And all you had to do was open them up and let it out. In his fondest
fantasies he bathed in a river of it.
But now he needed solace and so it was back to the puzzles, his version of
memories. He chose this time a more recent event in his life to relive, one that was sad,
knowing that a sad memory usually calmed the Animal more than a happy one.
He relaxed and put the little tiles together, fitting the odd curvy pieces into each
other until they formed a whole and then blossomed into full-color, all-senses
recollection.
Mother dies. The Bug gets her. AIDS.
The world ends. There’s the funeral and all, but they had no friends, no relatives,
only each other. He is devastated, bereft, alone. He can’t do their old work anymore, his
and Mother’s, he has to work at a “normal” job. It’s hell. The people drive him crazy and
he’s so lonely. Then he gets a pet, a hamster. One night it bites him and he crushes it to
death in his hand. And comes in his pants at the same time. A lesson is learned.
There are more animals. Dogs, cats, rabbits. But after a while they just don’t…
satisfy. Then he knows, and the Animal is born. Plans are made, research is conducted.
He’s not stupid, he knows that it’s risky. So he plans and waits and watches.
The memory ends and the puzzle pieces detach and scatter with him watching his
first skin-bag, sitting in his car for days on end. Studying the habits of his prey.

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN

It was cold at first, away from the campfire, but after about forty minutes, Jack was warm
from the exertion of slogging through the deep drifts and keeping up with Ethel. The
clouds above, while still gray and low, had quit snowing altogether and now it was only
the wind that caused any discomfort.
The valley was different now, very different under its fresh blanket of white, but
Jack thought that, if anything, it was even prettier. The shapes made by the vagaries of
how the snow had fallen and been whipped by the wind were endless and amazing, all
manner of bizarre shapes. Spires, waves, hummocks, spheres, perfectly sculpted dunes,
and everything in between. The human mind couldn’t help but anthropomorphize the
shapes into monsters and familiar animals and buildings. The lesser pines were bent
double, their tops either drooping down like trunks or actually laying in the snow, and
some of them bore remarkable resemblance to very old women, their backs bent with age.
The bigger trees were too thick to droop over, but their branches were flattened and bent
low under the accreted snow. Needless to say, Jack sometimes had a hard time staying
focused on his footing.
They’d been hiking wordlessly for about an hour, making it about ten AM, when
Jack realized he was enjoying this, the feel of the cold air in his lungs, the way his body
felt strong and vital, the perfect beauty of the landscape, the trees and mountains.
Instantly, he felt guilty, but then thought about it and tried hard not to. Sure there were
things that he didn’t like, such as being stranded in a blizzard with a murderer in a place
that may as well have been the moon, but the rest of it, the present that he was in right
now, that was fun. Real, honest-to-God, smile-because-you’re-happy Fun. No emotional
scars, no past, no future, just the ground, the sky, and him. And Ethel. That shook him a
little from his reverie and he came to an easy mixture of awareness and enjoyment. It was
OK to like hiking, it was not OK to get blissed-out and forget about their predicament.
On and on they trudged, Ethel silent, leading the way, and Jack smiling and
gawking, hustling to keep up. Finally the exertion got to him and Jack called out to
Ethel’s receding back.
“Hey, Ethel!” he called. “How about a rest?”
The shambling, broad figure stopped and looked back, then Ethel smiled and
came walking back to where Jack sat on a fallen log that he’d cleared of snow. When she
sat down next to him, Jack noticed she was breathing hard. Not invincible after all, he
thought to himself.
“Pretty, ain’t it?” she asked, shaking out a crumpled Marlboro. “The snow and all.
Never been up here in winter time before. Huh. Guess I still ain’t been up here in winter,
it bein’ October yet.”
“Yeah,” Jack agreed. He broke out his water bottle and a chocolate bar. Ethel
offered Jack her pack of cigarettes but he shook his head. Snapping off half of the
chocolate, he offered her a piece. She grinned and took it and popped it into her mouth.
“Thanks,” she mouthed. “I was gettin’ a might hungry.” (This came out as
hongry) “We’ll have to take a break for lunch soon, I guess.”
“Yeah,” Jack nodded. “So, are we going to the bridge first or Otis’… canyon?”
“Bridge,” she said. “Thataway, if we get caught by more weather, we’ll have a
place outta the snow.”
“So Otis has a… house? Or something…?” Jack trailed off lamely, but Ethel
didn’t seem to take offense.
“Naw, he lives in an old abandoned mine shaft,” she said, much like how
someone else might relate how their brother lived in a split-level rambler. “Got it fixed up
real good, though, lights and like, furniture and everything.”
“Uh huh,” was all Jack could think to say.
“It ain’t as bad as you might think, Jack.”
“Oh, I’m sure…”
“I’m tellin’ you, it’s… Oh, never mind. You’ll see it for yourself anyhow.”
The two sat for a few minutes, letting their hearts settle to a normal cadence and
their breathing slow. Around them the buried valley whispered with the wind and floating
motes of snow made the air seem alive with tiny sparkling points of white light.
Overhead the sun, a diffuse glow in the clouds, gradually climbed up the sky towards
midday.
“You know what Otis told me once?” Ethel asked, looking down the trail ahead.
“No, what’s that?” Jack said, distracted by the pristine wonders all around.
“He said that he had this theory. That people—human beings, that is—musta
evolved from brain-eatin’ apes.”
“What?” Jack asked, jarred back to reality by the statement.
“Well, see, the way Otis had it figured, all of the really smart apes, the ones that
shoulda evolved into humans, were wiped out by the more aggressive, tough apes. Kinda
like how, nowadays, and like, all through history, the strong always seem to win out over
the smart? So the big dumb tough apes, they killed off the smart ones and ate them big
old brains. Them dumb apes, they probably thought that it was the best part of them smart
ones and ate their brains. So instead of smart, caring people, we ended up with strong,
aggressive people.”
“Huh,” said Jack, inwardly amused. “Sort of makes sense, I guess… But why did
the dumb apes have to eat the smart ones’ brains?”
“Dunno,” Ethel shrugged. “I never really understood that part. Like I said, maybe
they thought the brains were, like, powerful, big medicine, whatever. Otis could explain it
better anyhow…”
“It sounds like Otis is… a thinker,” Jack observed.
“You got that right.”
“Not to be rude or anything,” wondered Jack. “But what’s that got to do with…
well, anything?”
“Nothin’ I guess,” Ethel said. “I was just thinkin’. It’s kinda like us here in this
valley. Some strong ape is out there Jack. Some kinda bad ape that wants us dead, know
what I mean?”
“Yeah…” Jack agreed grimly. “And, all in all, it’s not actually a bad theory, I
guess. It would sure explain a lot of things…”
“Yup. Well, let’s have some lunch and then get movin’. We got no time to waste.”
The two found a sheltered spot behind a huge boulder, what Ethel called an
“erratic”, boiled some water on the camp stove and mixed up some freeze-dried.
Discovering they were ravenous after the morning’s hike, they wolfed it down. Within
twenty minutes they were back on their feet and down the trail.
Some two hours of hard going later, picking their way down the snow-choked
trails, they came to a nondescript spot in the trail. Ethel stopped for a breather and
pointed.
“Up there’s where Otis is at.”
“Man,” said Jack, wiping his brow despite the chill wind. “I don’t think I would
have noticed that without the snow.”
“Yeah,” Ethel said. “He picked a good spot for bein’ alone, that’s for sure. C’mon,
we’re headed thisaway.”
They hiked on for another hour or so and Jack could see that they were nearing
the end of the valley; the high rock walls were narrowing and coming together. He had
taken the lead for this leg of their trek and was getting tired and hungry again when they
had their first mishap. Despite Ethel’s admonitions, he had forgotten to use his pole to
poke the ground ahead and now stepped straight into a snow and ice-covered stream. It
was if the ground just opened up and swallowed his leg, except the ground wasn’t
ground, it was water, ice-cold and moving fast beneath the crust.
“Whoa!” he yelled, pinwheeling his arms for balance. His right leg went instantly
numb as the water soaked quickly into his pants and sloshed down into his boot. Luckily,
Ethel was there at once and grabbed his arm to pull him free. Within a few seconds he
was back on semi-solid ground, panting and scared.
“You’re OK, Jack,” assured Ethel. “We just gotta get your foot dry and warm. You
just stay put and I’ll get a fire goin’. Here, stick your legs in my bag.”
Quickly she unrolled her sleeping bag and got Jack situated. He gratefully stuffed
his freezing legs into the bag and tried to be patient while Ethel went to work on a fire,
but, despite her haste, he was shivering and worried by the time it was ablaze.
“There, there,” Ethel said confidently. “You’re gonna be OK, just get them pants
and your boot off and we’ll get you fixed up.”
“I’m really… sorry Ethel,” stuttered Jack. “I wasn’t paying attention.”
“Don’t sweat it. Coulda happened to anyone.”
Jack pushed out of the bag, braced himself and, all modesty forgotten, moved as
fast as he could to get his boots and pants off. He was thankful he’d put on a set of
woolen long underwear before leaving camp, as at that moment it was the only thing
between his shivering skin and the howling elements. Trying to keep his feet on the
unrolled sleeping bag, he danced from foot to foot and managed to accomplish the task
with a minimum of contact with the snow, but it wasn’t easy. When he was done and back
inside the bag, he realized how tired he was; three hours of sleep just wasn’t going to cut
it.
Ethel spread the soaked pants over the fire and then relieved him of his wet sock,
putting this also out to dry. Then she hovered over Jack, eyeing him closely, concern
plain in her eyes.
“You OK?” she asked. “Ya’ll look a might done in…”
“Yeah, I’m tired,” he chattered. “But, no, I’ll be all right. Just gotta warm up…”
“I’ll make some coffee, fix you up.”
“Thanks. A lot.”
While Ethel broke out the pot and melted water, Jack, bundled to the eyeballs,
looked around. They were in a shallow depression next to the offending stream, sheltered
somewhat by a thick stand of droopy firs and bracken.
“So, Jack…” said Ethel over her shoulder. “You and Dan. Ya’ll get up this way a
lot?”
“Yeah. Well, no, not this particular area. But we do a hiking trip every other year.
On the off years we go to the Boundary Waters, in Minnesota, for the canoeing.”
“That sounds nice. Never been there myself, but I read about it once. All kinda
lakes and rivers and stuff, right?”
“Oh yeah. Thousands of lakes. And islands, beautiful pine forests…” Jack
suddenly realized what Ethel was doing. She was keeping him talking so she could tell
how he was doing physically, an old but proven trick in this kind of situation. He smiled
and then resumed his description.
“It’s like an enchanted place or something. There are so many lakes, you could
probably never see them all in a lifetime, and each one is prettier than the last. The water
is so clean you can drink right from the lakes, and it’s so clear you can see down to as far
as light will reach. And all rock-bottomed, not sand or mud, so there aren’t a whole lot of
weeds or silt.”
“I guess the canoeing is part of it, too… It’s hard work, and your arms hurt, and
the portages can be a bitch, but it’s also really quiet, serene, gliding along, and it’s sort of
satisfying to get around that way. No motors or fuel or noise…”
“And deep pine forests, like cathedrals of forest, you know? The fallen needles
are like a carpet underneath because the chemicals in them kill any grasses or plants, so
there’s no undergrowth and the lowest branches are ten feet up… It’s pretty cool.”
“Cool animals, too. There are loons, they have this crazy call and they dive for
fish. There are bears, black bears, not grizzlies, that sometimes raid camps for food if
you’re not careful… There are eagles and hawks, big fish like walleye and northern pike,
porcupines, raccoons, rabbits, deer, wolves, all kinds of stuff…”
 Ethel kept up a steady stream of questions whenever Jack paused, and then
brought over a steaming cup of instant coffee which he gratefully cupped in shaking
hands. After he’d sipped down half of the cup, Ethel seemed satisfied that he wasn’t
going to go belly up on her. She stood and looked around.
“Don’t know how to tell you this Jack, but we need to get movin’. We need to
make some time if we’re gonna make it to Otis’s place and back to camp by dark.”
“I know,” he nodded, downing the rest of the coffee in a gulp. “I’m ready when
my pants are…”
“Good man.”
Ethel checked the steaming pants and, pronouncing them dry enough, handed
them over to Jack. He felt better now, warmed by the coffee and less worried. And there
was something else. He felt… something towards Ethel, a warmth, a fondness he hadn’t
felt since, well, since Helen. Despite her rather homely face and lumpish frame, he felt
something. To have a woman, any woman, care for him this way, well, it was something
he found very touching. Or maybe it’s the sleep deprivation, he thought. Now get your
ass up and get moving, lunkhead.
He pulled his pants on inside the bag and, again doing that awkward dance,
jittered out of the bag and into his boots. The one pant-leg was still damp, but it would
have to do. He pulled on his day-pack and picked up his pole.
“OK,” he said. “Let’s go.”
Ethel grinned at him. “Know something, Jack?”
“What?”
“You’re made of tougher stuff than I thought.”
“Gee, thanks. I guess…”
“Don’t mention it.”
They struck off, Ethel once again in the lead, and put some good distance behind
them. The trail here was steep, though, and Ethel had to go carefully so that they didn’t
go sliding off down the incline.
The rock walls were close now, only a quarter-mile or so apart where the valley
funneled down to its narrowest point, and the sun was behind the surrounding peaks. As a
result, it was shadowy and even colder when they finally got to the bridge.
Sure enough, the thing was gone, hanging impotently on the other side of a sixty
or seventy foot chasm. The hurtling river here was far from frozen and made its way
noisily along, about twenty feet below where they stood, tossing up spray and droplets
that froze on the surrounding rocks and foliage, creating an almost surreal tableau. The
bridge had broken on their side and was now encrusted to the far wall of the chasm by the
flying spray.
Ethel stumped over to where the bridge had been attached and knelt by the
weathered posts where coils of thick rope had anchored that end. She studied it carefully
for a while and then looked over at Jack.
“Cut?” he asked, dreading her reply.
“Yup. Clean as a whistle.”
“Shit,” Jack thumped a nearby tree trunk. “You know what that means, right?”
“Uh huh. C’mon, let’s go. No way in hell we’re gettin’ out this way.”
They were turning to leave when Jack caught something out of the corner of his
eye. A patch of color, incongruous in the white landscape, some way down the chasm
below. Here the river, bounding through the rocks, passed around a bend and disappeared
down the mountain. Something was stuck on a rock down there, something green and
pink. Bemused, Jack broke out a pair of compact binoculars as Ethel peered at the spot.
“What is it?” she asked.
Jack focused in and then almost dropped the glasses. Bent nearly double across
the rocks was a corpse, a mangled, shredded body with a brown-haired head that bobbed
and lashed in the rushing water. It was partially clad in a green shirt and khaki pants, but
the water had stripped most of the clothes off and the exposed flesh was a ghastly
pinkish-black. Stomach churning, he handed Ethel the binoculars.
“I think,” Jack whispered. “We found the ranger.”

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN

Dan had never been big on solitude. Being alone always seemed to him a waste
somehow, as if, without someone around, the world was incomplete and empty. Being
alone was dull, it was lonely. And right now, huddled under the tarp, he felt very alone,
despite the presence of Jerry not fifteen feet away. This less-than-redoubtable man had
kept to the tent all day so far and, as a result, wasn’t very good company. Dan had tried to
coax him out earlier, but had received only a grunt and a shake of the head for his efforts.
Fine, he’d thought, stay in there. Anyway, it was close and fairly stinky in the tent, and he
had no desire to sit there with Jerry and worry. Better to be out here alone.
It was still cold but the wind seemed to be letting up a little, now abating to
occasional gusts that swept big chunks of snow from the tree branches. Glumly, Dan
poked the small fire and eyed the pile of wood that he was slowly feeding the into the
blaze. That’s not going to last very long, he thought. Need more pretty soon. And,
remembering that there was very little dead-fall around the campsite, he knew that it
would entail a bit of a hike. Well, no time like the present…
“Hey Jerry!” he called at the tent. Nothing. He swore under his breath and went
closer.
“Jerry?” he called again. “Yoo-hoo…”
“What?” came a sharp reply.
“Uh…” Dan said uncertainly. “I’m gonna go get some more wood. I’ll only be
gone a few minutes, but I think you should get out here and watch while I’m gone. Keep
the fire going. OK?”
“Watch for what?” came from through the nylon of the flapping tent.
“For a Search and Rescue chopper… You know? Help?” Jeez, thought Dan,
where has this guy been the last ten hours?
“Oh, uh, yeah,” Jerry said. “I’ll, uh… be right out.”
“Don’t kill yourself, pal…” Dan said under his breath.
There was a rustling in the tent and then Jerry poke his bespectacled face out of
the tent flap, blinking at the freezing wind.
“It’s cold…” he said inanely.
“Yeah, well, that happens in a blizzard I guess.” Dan was starting to think that
maybe being alone wasn’t so bad after all.
Jerry wriggled out of the tent, still in the sleeping bag, looking for all the world
like some sort of weird human larva. He squirmed over and sat hunched in a ball on the
dry ground under the tarp. Dan couldn’t help wince at the damage this was doing to the
expensive sleeping bag, but then gave up on the thought as useless, hefted the hatchet,
and stuck the big cooking knife, safe in it’s sheath, into his belt.
“I’ll be right back. Just keep your eyes and ears open. If a plane or a chopper flies
over, maybe you could, you know, wave at ‘em or something?”
“Sure…” said Jerry listlessly. “Wave. Got it.”
Dan didn’t like the way the guy sounded, all distracted and lifeless.
“You all right?” he asked.
“Sure…” Jerry looked over at Dan. His eyes were big behind the thick glasses and
his lank black hair was plastered to his head like greasy seaweed. “I’m just fine…”
“Well… good,” Dan said, puzzled. Jerry didn’t seem to be in any physical
discomfort or anything… Oh well, he thought, maybe he’s just worried, depressed,
whatever. Who cares?
Taking a cue from Ethel, he’d cut himself a long pole from a nearby green
sapling, and now moved off from the campsite, carefully probing ahead as he went. After
a few hundred yards he found a deep crack, where his pole unexpectedly slid into the
snow to its full length. Impressed by the danger, he gingerly poked around and found a
better route and then moved on. Finally, under a stand of big pines, he found a good-sized
yet transportable dead tree and set about chopping off the longer limbs to make it easier
to move. The work felt good after the morning’s inactivity and he soon fell into an easy
rhythm. Chop, chop, chop.
It was almost an hour later and he was absorbed in the task, thinking about how
the hell they were going to get out of this, when he heard the plane. It was a small noise,
like a lawnmower. He had no idea how long it had been audible.
“Shit!” he swore, looking around wildly. Unfortunately, he could see little more
than the undersides of the trees where he’d found the dead wood, and so sheathed the
hatchet quickly and stumbled through the snow towards a clearer view.
There it was, a relatively small aircraft painted white and red, droning along over
the valley, just below the gray, roiling clouds. As a matter of fact, it was currently passing
directly over their camp.
“Hey!” he yelled impotently at the plane, waving his arms. “Over here!”
The plane was too high and moving too fast; its pilot (or any spotter with him)
couldn’t possibly notice Dan. He looked over, through the trees, to where their camp
would be. No smoke, no yelling, nothing. No smoke? he thought, and swore again,
suddenly seething with anger. Damn Jerry let the fire go out! He was going to kick that
dude’s ass!
Trying his best to be careful, he loped through the snow back towards camp. The
wood would have to wait. The trip was much faster now since he had his own trail to
follow, and in a few minutes he walked up to the tents, ready for some sort of
explanation.
The area under the tarp was empty, the fire was out, and there was no sign of
Jerry. Dan stomped over to the tent and was about to tear open the flap when he stopped
abruptly, unwilling to believe his eyes. The sun had shifted while he was gone and now
filtered through the clouds and onto the tent, causing a sort of shadow-puppet effect. Only
it wasn’t a puppet in the tent, it was Jerry, and, clear as can be, Dan could see that the
man was masturbating, half-standing, pumping madly away like there was no tomorrow.
 “Jesus H. Christ on a crutch…” Dan breathed. He backed slowly away from the
tent and then turned away from the scene, feeling ill and disoriented. He paced a few
steps and then coughed and cleared his throat loudly. From the tent came a series of
grunts and then silence. Dan shuddered and then started to feel angry all over again, at
both the obscenity and lost opportunity. What kind of freak was this guy, anyway?
“Son of a bitch.” he said to himself. “Too fuckin’ much...”
But what really scared Dan was the one intelligible word that he’d caught from
the tent, grunted not in endearment, but in lust: Mother.

CHAPTER NINETEEN

The entrance to Otis’s canyon was very narrow, a spot where the rocks came together and
almost met, and it was nearly indistinguishable from the other cracks and crevasses in the
valley walls. Nonetheless, Ethel unerringly found the place and, parting the thick stand of
pines that veiled the way, led them up and in. To Jack it felt close and ominous, as if the
solid granite ramparts might suddenly snap closed like a gigantic mouth, and he stifled a
pang of claustrophobia. The snow here was deep, having piled up in the narrow spaces to
almost chest height, and even Ethel had a hard time pushing through in spots.
“Looks like no one’s come this way…” Jack offered.
“Yeah,” Ethel grunted. “But they could have before the storm.”
Jack gave up, knowing full well that nothing he said would divert Ethel from this
little mission, and simply followed. After about a hundred yards the snow level decreased
and canyon walls opened up some and then some more, until they faced a wide cul-de-sac
about a half-mile wide, dotted here and there with groups of pines and scrub, with a small
lake in the middle. All was quiet and serene, the wind across the rocks the only noise.
“Tell you what,” Ethel paused, puffing big clouds of exhalation in between words.
“I’ll go up and check on Otis, let him know we’re here. When you hear a whistle, come
on up, past the lake and straight back. OK?”
“Sounds good,” answered Jack. Ethel nodded and moved off.
He couldn’t help wondering what he was getting into here. After all, this Otis was
an escaped mental patient, living alone in a mineshaft in the middle of nowhere. But then
again, Ethel hadn’t steered him wrong so far… Jack resigned himself to whatever was to
come and tried to make himself comfortable on a big rock that he’d cleared of snow.
Time passed very slowly after Ethel left, the wind hissing over the rock and the
occasional plop of a falling clump of snow the only noises. Jack was warm after the hike
and more than a little tired, and he started to nod off. Might as well, he thought. Get a few
winks in… Then he bolted and sat up, fatigue vanishing in the presence of a new and
alarming natural wonder.
From out of a copse of pines there came a cougar, a magnificent cat some six feet
long (not counting the tail) with a shaggy, tawny coat and wide green eyes. It was focused
on Jack but approached casually, pacing along on wide paws with no apparent haste
across the snow. Jack cast about crazily, thinking about all the things he’d read about
what to do when one encountered cougars in the wild. Play dead? No, that’s for bears.
Yell and make noise? For the life of him, he couldn’t remember. The beast was closing
the distance between them, ambling purposefully with its head swinging back and forth,
vertically-slitted eyes pinning Jack to the rock.
 “Oh God,” Jack panted, his heart kicking up to double-time. “Oh shit…”
With badly trembling hands he groped for, found, and withdrew the Colt from
under his jacket. It was still loaded and he clicked off the safety and raised it to a firing
position. Normally, he would hate to shoot the animal, to destroy something this
beautiful, but his mind and body had flipped over into survival mode and the gun was
now just an extension of that primal fear. It’s him or me… With a shaky hand he raised
the pistol and pointed it at the cougar’s head. The cat was no more than twenty feet away
now and Jack could hear its breathing, see every little detail of its muscles and fur, smell
its sharp feline tang.
The cougar stopped, fifteen feet away, and sat on its haunches. It yawned, looking
for all the world like any other fuzzy pussy-cat, except for the fact that it had three inch
long fangs and claws to match. Frozen in utter terror, Jack tried to hold the gun steady,
waiting for the killing pounce that he knew was sure to come.
“Jack, no!” came a voice from somewhere.
Loath to take his eyes from the cougar, Jack risked a lightning-fast glimpse at the
source of the voice and found Ethel standing some yards away, her arms outstretched,
beseeching.
“Don’t shoot!” Ethel called. “He won’t hurt you. Just put the gun down…”
“Are you insane?” Jack bleated. “Hurt me? He doesn’t want to hurt me, he wants
to eat me!”
“Jack, take it easy!” Ethel begged. “This is a… friend of Otis’s. He won’t hurt
you. I promise. Now put the gun down.”
Incredulous, unable to believe what he was doing, Jack lowered the pistol. The
cat, apparently bored with this shivering wreck of a human, padded away like smoke
through the trees, vanishing in seconds.
Like a marionette with its strings cut, Jack slumped back on the rock, gasping for
air. Ethel walked up and laid a hand on his shoulder.
“You OK?” she asked.
“Oh, sure,” replied Jack. “No big deal. Just a goddamn mountain lion, nothing to
worry about. Did I hear you say something about it being Otis’s friend?”
“Well, sorta…” Ethel said. “More like a neighbor, I guess you might say.”
“Christ,” Jack wheezed. “I don’t know how many more things like that I can take.
I mean, the past couple of days? Damn.”
“I hear that,” Ethel nodded. “But really, you’re safe here. Promise. Now c’mon,
Otis is waitin’.”
“Great…” Jack struggled to his feet, more tired than ever, and followed Ethel,
wondering again where all this was going to end.

CHAPTER TWENTY

The Animal was almost out. He knew It couldn’t be contained for long now, Its raging
voice was too loud, Its insatiable lust too powerful. It was only a matter of time, and not
much of that.
But still, he was sad, somehow. These people were confounding him, confounding
the Animal. Why did they have to do the things they did? Why didn’t they sense their
danger and just run, far away where the Animal couldn’t follow? He couldn’t understand
it. Then again, he rarely understood anything skin-bags did. Why was this any exception?
Because, said the tiny voice that, like a ray of white light, penetrated the Animal’s
bellows. Because they helped you. They gave you food. They gave you shelter and
warmth when you were in trouble.
Shut up! he mentally screamed. Shut up! They’re no different. Just walking skin-
bags like the rest, waiting to reveal their Secrets, waiting to fall, to bare their soft throats
and bellies, waiting for the Animal’s righteous blade. His righteous blade.
The Release had helped, had quieted the beast for a few minutes, a few hours. But
it couldn’t last; it never did. Jerking off could only do so much. And now he was alone
with one of them, free to obey the Animal. His face contorted into what he thought of as a
smile, what an observer would see as a frightening grimace. Tonight, he thought, when
the night comes with its beautiful, comforting dark. Tonight this one will fall. Laughing
inside, he waited for the night and withdrew into his puzzles, his jangled remembrances.
The shelf in his mind where they were kept was almost empty, but he took one of them
down and assembled the pieces in his mind. After some time (it was a tough puzzle) he
dropped into the recollection.
Killing. Killing and killing and killing. Gun, noose, bludgeon, poison, or blade. It
was easy, once you got the hang of it. Hookers at first, rough boys who were already half
dead from the pipe or the Bug. Then dealers, drug-peddlers whom no one would miss.
The city became too hot, too easy, so he moved on, across the country wherever the whim
took him. Transients, hobos, winos, just plain homeless folks, whatever. Their Secrets
were all his for the taking.
But even this became too easy, too predictable. They always had that dumb look,
the begging , the gurgling, all the same... Then he thought of it as sport. Why not hunt
someone? But for real, like in the wild, out in the woods like a real hunter? This was
appealing, for many reasons, and the Animal was overjoyed.
The recollection led him through the delicious experiences he’d had in the
nation’s parks and wilderness areas. The heady feel of the hunt amid the crisp air and the
beauty and chaos of nature. The glory of the kill and the revelations in the Secret.
He tried to hang on to these triumphs, to keep on reliving them, but the memory-
puzzle frayed at the edges and then swiftly fell apart, collapsing into itself and giving way
to only crimson and black.
Warm and dry in the closeness of the tent, Jerry sighed and tried to be patient,
waiting for the night.

CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE

Jack wasn’t sure what he’d expected of Otis’s place, but he sure as hell hadn’t expected
what he found. The place was a miniature palace, a work of art that doubled as a model of
comfort and efficiency. From the outside, it looked like what it was; an abandoned mine
shaft, just a crudely-hacked rectangle in the granite wall of the canyon. But the inside!
He was struck first by the smell, not at all the expected dankness of a cave, rather
a wonderful mix of sage, pine, and musk, but delicate and subtle, even after the crystal-
clean air outside. Next was the lighting, a very pleasant warm glow from lanterns and
candles, augmented by a clever arrangement of small mirrors that brought in the diffuse
light from without. Then he noticed the wood flooring, rough planks of pine that had
been smoothed and polished to a sheen. The walls were still blasted granite, but they too
had been cleaned and buffed. The furniture, if it could be called that, was all made of
natural materials. There was a large easy-chair type thing, carved, it seemed, from a
single huge block of wood. There was a table made of a sheet of granite supported by
granite boulder legs. Against one wall was a beautifully crafted bookshelf, the uprights
made of polished white birch, the shelves of glossy pine. Otis’s version of a kitchen was
another marvel, constructed of various bones and rock and wood. As he gazed
wonderingly about the place, Jack realized that he couldn’t see a single thing (books
aside) in the cave that wasn’t made of those same three things. Bones, rock, and wood, in
a myriad of shape, size, and form.
In general shape, the place was optimally laid out. There was first a twenty-foot
tunnel, damp underfoot but not dripping, then a thick wooden portal (Jack had trouble
seeing it as a door) that opened on the main room, the site of all these wonderments.
Further down the mine shaft, divided by a wall of timbers, was a bedroom, where a big
pile of fresh pine boughs and a heap of animal pelts served as Otis’s bed. After another
wall, the place ended in a small but luxurious bathroom, an entirely ingenious
arrangement of bone plumbing and granite basins that was perhaps the icing on the cake,
as far as Jack was concerned. Needless to say, the place was a relief after the harsh cold
outside, and Jack could feel his tired muscles relaxing even as he stood gaping.
The undeniable center-piece of this domain was, of course, its lord and creator,
Otis himself. And Otis was a wonder in his own right. At six foot two and about a
hundred and seventy-five pounds, he presented a decidedly gaunt figure, but closer
inspection revealed strong corded muscle under tough leathery skin. His bearded face
was craggy and lined, but, under the beaked nose and above the bushy beard, his smile
was warm and bright, his eyes sparkling with interest and intellect. He wore a very odd
admixture of clothes; a pair of weathered jeans, thick hiking boots, a leather shirt/jerkin
of some kind, an animal-skin (wolf?) coat, all topped of by a Seattle Seahawks baseball
cap, from under which cascaded a mass of black, dread-locked hair.
“Jack, this is Otis,” Ethel introduced. “Otis, Jack..”
“Pleased to meet you, Otis,” said Jack, offering his hand.
Otis said nothing, but bobbed his head and shook hands with Jack with a hand like
carved oak and a grip like a vise. Otis motioned for them to sit, indicating the granite
hearth that took up one wall and Ethel and Jack gratefully stretched out near the
economical fire.
Otis bustled around in the kitchen area and, in a few moments, produced a pair of
steaming cups of what seemed to be tea. Sniffing his, Jack thought it smelled wonderful,
piney and crisp, but also familiar somehow… It tasted great, one way or another and he
drank the cup off and sighed at the spreading warmth.
Outside of Otis’s mineshaft, it was maybe three hours till full dark, but the
creeping shadows had already enveloped the deep valleys and the wind was picking up,
sweeping down from the heights with icy teeth and pummeling force. Inside, it was toasty
warm and quiet, the only sounds the far-off hiss and moan of the wind. Jack and the
others lolled by the fire as Ethel explained the whole situation to Otis, who listened
carefully but made no comment. She also laid out their wet things to dry.
She was about finished when Jack started to notice an odd feeling stealing over
him. It seemed to flow from the back of his head, down through his spine and out, a sort
of numbness but also a softening, a mellow feeling of ease and mild euphoria… Then he
hit on it. He was stoned, as high as if he’d smoked a joint of high-grade weed, something
he’d done fairly frequently in college.
Momentarily, he was confused. How in the hell? Then he realized that it had been
the tea. That piney smell. He should’ve known that smell. A mix of paranoia and
disorientation swept over him and he jerked to a sitting position, eyeing Ethel and her
brother. Are they trying to drug me? Jack thought. Drug me and kill me? Maybe they are
the killers! But they drank it too…The so-recently inviting surroundings became
suddenly sinister, rough-hewn and forbidding, and his companions seemed likewise
primitive, but also furtive and conspiratorial. Get a grip, he thought desperately, think this
out… But his minded raced in fits and starts, dashing here and there in speculation and
conjecture.
“Uh…” he croaked, his tongue suddenly dry. “About that tea…”
“What’s that?” Ethel looked over at Jack. “Oh hell. Otis. Did you give him your
“special tea”?” The tall man nodded solemnly as Ethel shook her head.
“Now why in all get-out did you do that for? That’s just plain bad, Otis!”
Otis frowned, looking at Jack, and spoke in a voice uncannily like a gravel-slide.
“He needs to see.”
“Needs to see?” said Ethel. “Well sure, Otis, we all need to see, but don’t you
think it woulda been nice to ask the man if he, you know, feels like getting stoned as a
goat? Did you thinka that?”
Otis frowned, looking pained, and turned away. Ethel made to pursue, but Jack
stopped her further remonstration.
“What…” he mouthed. “Was in that?”
“Just pot, Jack, I swear,” Ethel patted his hand. “It’s some of the best in northern
Colorado, sure, but it won’t hurt you none. But you’ll be pretty damned stoned for a
while, that’s for sure…”
“Great…” Jack groaned, trying to maintain. “How long? We gotta… get back to
Dan…”
“Well now,” Ethel said, “I don’t figure you’re goin’ anywhere tonight. Might as
well get a good night’s sleep and head back first thing in the mornin’. Dan and whats-his-
face, they’ll be all right.”
“Jerry,” Jack mumbled. “Name’s… Jerry.”
“Whatever. Look, Jack, let’s get you to bed. We’ll get up before it’s light and see
your brother first thing tomorrow, OK?”
“OK, yeah…” Jack felt like he’d been hit by a truck, like an incipient attack of
flu.
The final straw was when the cat walked in. Just as Ethel was helping Jack up, the
cougar Jack had ran into earlier walked right into the place, looked around, and then lay
down by the fire and began to lick itself on the paws. To the stoned Jack, it looked like it
was twenty feet long and ten feet tall, a savage force of nature that was not meant to share
the same space as people.
“Oh God…” Jack moaned. “I’m so dead…”
“Now, now,” Ethel said, hurrying him into the adjoining chamber. “Don’t you
worry. That’s just a big ol’ pussy-cat, Jack. Wouldn’t hurt you nohow…”
Jack allowed himself to be led into Otis’s bedroom and there gratefully collapsed
on the furs, unable to some much as think as fatigue resoundingly won out over paranoia.
He didn’t even feel it when Ethel undressed him.

CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO

He had no way of knowing how long he’d slept, but when Jack woke up later it was pin-
drop quiet and almost completely dark. The only light was the tiny flicker of a candle
placed on a rock shelf over across the chamber. The furs were heavy and he felt sweaty
and feverish, but simply throwing the heavy pelts off took care of that and then he just lay
there, staring at the light.
The panicky, suspicious feelings of earlier had fled, replaced by a strange calm
and sense of well-being. Jack knew exactly where he was and what sort of situation he
was in, but it just didn’t seem to matter as much. The weed in his system had nearly run
its course and now he felt only calm, rested, and thoughtful.
At first his musing turned to, as usual, his own troubles. The whole thing with
Helen, his loneliness and helplessness, his essential dissatisfaction with life itself. They
crawled out of their respective cubby-holes in his head and trotted through his mind, old
friends by now, and he acknowledged them like the unwelcome yet permanent ills that
they seemed. It was like they formed a ball of snakes; try to untangle one from the ball
and you just ended up grabbing a different snake. It was familiar, it was maddening, it
was a puzzle with no solution, and Jack suddenly hated it. He hated the way he couldn’t
let go, couldn’t put any of it behind him, how he couldn’t pull one damn snake from the
ball. The guilt, the stress and grinding worry, these things were a snake-ball around his
neck, a venomous weight he carried proudly, stoically, like the big chump he was.
Fuck this, he thought, mentally kicking the whole ball of snakes out the window
of his mind. Just get rid of it, kick the fucker. And… it was gone. Well, not totally gone,
but now the ball seemed tiny, a mere golf ball of worries where before it had been like a
hot-air balloon; gigantic, ponderous, and almighty. Everybody had problems, he realized.
Big problems, way bigger than his, and ones that were really tragic, things that no one
should ever have to face, life-long atrocities that were escaped only in death. And here he
was, healthy, young, (well, at least not too old) and wealthy. What in God’s name was he
worried about? The idea felt awfully good and Jack actually smiled there in the dark. He
laughed silently at the snake-ball and was immensely gratified to see it shrink and recoil
in his minds-eye, unused to mirth or being taken anything less than seriously. Ha! You
bastard! Take that! Jack taunted his worries, bringing them to bay at last, and they
crawled off and hid, back to the dark places in his mind where they belonged.
It was more than a relief when they went, it was a liberation. Jack felt a physical
sense of lightness about himself, not a metaphorical weight being lifted but a real,
tangible, physiological change. His breath came easier, his muscles felt relaxed and fit,
his senses bristled, awake and alert for any incoming stimuli, and his mind flowed with
easy clarity and logic. It was if the guilt and care and worry had been busy all those years,
monopolizing some part of his brain that he needed for this kind of thinking. Now they
were gone, banished, and his mind was free to fire up all the cylinders and roll.
Jack sighed and lay back on the furs. Without knowing why, he let his whole body
relax, head to toe, and willed his mind to go silent. No thinking, no moving, just the
flickering candle and nothing else. And there, in the quiet, empty place that he found at
the bottom of Nothing, he was surprised to find out that he was happy. His existence and
place in the world was clear. He was a tiny piece of an impossibly large whole and
probably not that important a piece, either, and that was how it was and that was good.
Oh, he’d known these things before tonight, sure, but known them intellectually, not
intuitively. He hadn’t really taken them to heart, let them sink into his cells. Now he knew
that he was nothing, come from nothing and was proceeding into nothing. Not a scary,
hoodoo void of nothing, just… non-existence. The bliss of dreamless sleep. The initially
alarming then comforting concept of truly cosmic anonymity. For a mote of dust, he sure
took himself seriously… Smiling at the notion, Jack embraced the Nothing and let it take
him back to sleep.

CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE

Dan contemplated the pan on the camp stove before him and toyed with the idea of
spitting in it. It was Jerry’s food, after all, and he had decided he didn’t like Jerry, not one
bit. In fact, he was beginning to hate him, and that was why he sat there thinking about
such a thing.
Sunset had come and gone with no sign of Ethel and Jack and now it was full
dark, windy and cold. After the highly uncomfortable scene that afternoon, Dan hadn’t
spoken to the man and had kept out of the tent, utterly baffled as to what, if anything, to
do. Should he act like he hadn’t seen anything? Or should he confront the guy, ask him
what the hell he was doing jerking off in their tent when he was supposed to be looking
for a rescue plane? Jerk-Off Jerry, Dan thought and chuckled crazily to himself. Fuckin’
weirdo. Then he decided against the spitting, made up his mind, and called over to the
tent.
“Hey, Jerry!” he fairly shouted. There was a muttered sound of interest from the
tent. “Soup’s on! If you want somethin’ to eat, you better shag your ass out here, ‘cause I
ain’t room service!”
This elicited another odd vocalization and some rustling and then Jerry himself.
The man crawled slowly from the tent, clad now in what Dan recognized with growing
anger as his pants, and looked stupidly around the campsite.
“The others come back?” he asked in a strange, choked voice.
“No,” Dan spat. “Now you want this chow or what?”
“Chow?” Jerry seemed drugged, somehow, and Dan began to wonder if the guy
wasn’t really sick, either in body or mind, somehow.
“Yeah, chow,” said Dan. “You know, food? Eats, vittles, comestibles?”
“Oh, yeah,” Jerry said and sort of lurched over to take the pan of food. “Food’s
good…”
“Uh… yeah,” Dan couldn’t help backing away from the man. Under his breath he
grumbled “Weird-ass son of a…”
The two ate in silence for the most part, Dan eyeing Jerry across the fire and Jerry
seemingly oblivious, slopping up his food noisily, eyes hidden behind the thick glasses.
When he was finished, Jerry simply dropped the pan and fork to the ground, wiped his
hand across his mouth, and belched. Then he just stared into the fire.
“Hey, you’re welcome,” Dan said acidly. “Does this mean I’m supposed to clean
up too?” Jerry said nothing, still staring at the flames.
 “Whatever,” Dan shook his head. “Look, Jerry. Are you OK? I mean, you seem a
little… spacey, you know?”
“Wha?” Jerry managed, slack-jawed. His left hand was in his lap and now it
began to twitch, jerking in little motions like the man was suffering from Parkinson’s. As
if it had a life of its own, the quaking hand slipped to one side and then crept into the
front pocket of Jerry’s (actually Dan’s) pants.
“Hey, Jerry, look,” Dan stood and made a palms-out, waving motion at the man.
“If you wanna play One-Eyed Trouser Mouse, that’s cool, just, you know… Do it
somewhere else!”
This last was shouted angrily yet still brought no immediate response from the
gaping Jerry, who continued groping about in his pants pocket.
“Jesus Christ!” Dan cursed angrily, rising to stand over the fire. “You are some
piece of fucking work, man…”
At wit’s end, Dan turned and walked a few stiff paces away. He turned to try some
more reasoning with this guy and then stopped short, eyes widening in disbelief and
confusion.
Jerry was standing, crouched next to the fire like a martial artist in a ready
position. In one hand was a four-inch lock-blade knife that shone keenly in the firelight.
But it wasn’t the knife that shocked Dan, it was the transformation in Jerry, especially his
face. Contorted as if made from warm clay, it writhed into an ugly grimace/smile and
then into Jerry’s normal bland expression and then back again. A gooey line of drool
dangled from his chin and the thick glasses, reflecting the fire like twin carbuncles, now
seemed malevolent, alien somehow, bug-like and predatory.
Jerry’s face seemed to have come to a decision and now stuck more or less in the
grimace position. With graceful light steps the man walked slowly towards Dan.
“What the fuck?” Dan whispered.
Staring amazedly at him, Dan couldn’t help but think of the comic-book Joker.
There was a definite resemblance, Dan thought giddily. He involuntarily backed away
from this apparition, his mind whirling in manic confusion.
A sound was coming from Jerry, Dan realized, and he could see the man’s mouth
moving. He strained and made out the words:
“Steaming pile of filthy guts carved and chewed and squeezed from your rotten
stinking carcass and the blood and shit and brains all exposed, all open and revealed and
your bones so white under the…” On and on, with no breaks or particular emphasis.
Dan felt his heart jump and kick into high and his breath devolved to short stabs.
Why was this happening? Who was this guy? Could this milquetoast weirdo really be the
one who’d done for the ranger?
“Whoa! Look man,” said Dan in what he hoped was a confident voice. “You
better put that fucking knife away. OK? Just put the thing away and we’ll talk about this.”
Even to his own ears it sounded lame, but Dan was struggling for anything to say
at this point. Nothing came from Jerry except more of the same horrid violent gibberish
and, to Dan’s burgeoning horror, he kept moving forward.
“Fuck!” Dan swore and took another few steps back, babbling. What was he
going to do? Think! Keep talking… “Hey, Jerry, take it easy, all right? No need for this, is
there?”
Then two things happened. The first was that Dan tripped over a hidden root and
fell heavily to his back onto some jagged stones. This was, of course, bad enough, but
then the other thing happened as Jerry let out with a truly fearsome scream and dove like
a shot to the attack, the knife slashing in an arc of reflected light.
Dan swore and rolled aside, back muscles shooting pain, as Jerry pounced at him
like a starving tiger. Dan, fixated on the knife, shot out both hands, catching his foe’s
wrist in a tight grip, the knife an inch away from his fingers. Jerry thrashed like mad,
exhibiting a strength Dan wouldn’t have thought possible, and jerked his arm violently,
trying to free it and bring the knife to bear. Dan held on doggedly but then Jerry seemed
to remember his other hand, swung and planted a firm right cross to Dan’s left cheek.
Wham! Dan’s vision blew up into a cascade of blue stars and streaks and he dropped his
grip on Jerry, rolling in the snow to get away. Jerry, still muttering, crawled lithely in
pursuit.
Crazed with fear, Dan felt about frantically under and in the snow, hoping for any
kind of object that could be used as a weapon. Stick, no good. Leaves, dirt… Then his
hand closed on a brick-sized rock and he jerked it free from the frozen ground and
brought it up and then down onto Jerry. He’d aimed for the man’s head, but Jerry was
quick and ducked just in time to catch it, hard, on his shoulder. There was absolutely no
change in Jerry’s demeanor, but he swayed from the blow and crawled back a few feet.
Dan saw an opening, lunged hard at Jerry and brought the rock down hard on the
man’s left forearm. A squeaky yelp escaped the man and he dropped the knife into the
dirty snow, backing warily away on one hand and knees.
“Hah!” Dan stood up, exulting. “Take that, motherfucker!”
Jerry likewise stood. Dan expected him to be beaten, having lost his weapon, but
was wrong. Jerry dove to the attack all over again, teeth bared and hands clawing.
It was then that Dan remembered the knife in his own belt. It was poking him and
he went to move it, oblivious to the thing from familiarity, when he realized how stupid
he’d been to not think of it sooner.
He managed to sidestep Jerry’s rush and now flailed at the knife’s sheath, finally
producing the blade. If Jerry’s lock-blade had looked big in the firelight, this thing looked
like some sort of sword. Dan had no clue as to how to fight with a knife, but he
brandished the thing menacingly at Jerry and advanced slowly.
“Different ball of wax, eh Jerry?” Dan was feverish with rage, ready to slice this
guy good if need be. “You goddamn loony fucker! What the fuck did we ever do to you,
huh? Can you tell me that?”
With no sign that he was about to do so, Jerry suddenly bolted, tearing off through
the camp and then off into the woods, running like the wind in the snow through the
rocks and trees. His blood boiling in his ears, Dan gave chase, hollering incoherent
threats and trying to keep up.
“Come back here you fuckin’ maniac! Bastard son of a bitch!”
Dan thought maybe he’d lost the guy and was about to stop running and yelling
when he abruptly ran straight off of a six-foot precipice, one of the hundreds of odd rifts
and folds in the rocks of the valley, and fell, one leg under him, one outstretched, onto a
TV-sized boulder. Totally disoriented, he distinctly heard a crack and instantly his leg, the
one under him, the one that had hit first, went numb. Horrible searing pain shot through
his whole body like black jets of acid and his vision threatened to fade to black. I fell, he
thought stupidly. I fell and broke my leg. Shit. Somebody’s gotta call for help…
Somebody help…
Then his brain snapped back into a semblance of cohesion and, realizing his
predicament, he looked wildly around for any sign of Jerry. And there he was, half
walking, half crawling up a slope through the snow, grinning, coming for him. The moon
had come out during their struggle and chase and it now made an opalescent pool through
which the killer oozed, intent on his victim.
Fighting nausea and pain and looming unconsciousness, Dan cast about for his
knife and saw it sitting blade-up in the snow not four feet away. With a lunge that shot a
whole new avalanche of pain through him, he grabbed the thing and swung back to the
approaching Jerry.
“Uh uh.” he rasped, waving the knife. “Back, loony! Back motherfucker!”
Jerry halted, evidently confused, and then backed up, carefully crawl-walking
back down the slope till Dan lost sight of him in the deeply shadowed trees.
The pain crashed over Dan again and he slumped under the assault, gasping in
agony. Oh God, he thought. Now what am I going to do? That loony bastard will just wait
till I pass out and then… Well then, said some part of his mind, you just can’t pass out.
Not until Jack comes back, then you can pass out. Not before. OK, and what if Jerry
comes back and just starts whipping rocks down on me, what then? His subconscious
didn’t offer any answers for that.

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