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Winter

Winter

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Published by Joe Gonnella
From The Green Man Manuscript
From The Green Man Manuscript

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Published by: Joe Gonnella on Oct 03, 2010
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Yesterday it rained and clouded and there was a sweaty chill. Today the sun warms my back and the dogs play like today was spring instead of autumn. Mad weather here. The second stanza is beautifully crafted. The third weaker, "Birds flee to where they're wanted" sounds a little clumsy to my ear, not quite in step with the rest of the poem. The last stanza nicely mixes optimism and pessimism.
Alikat747 added this note
Oh my, Joe.....but perhaps the sun is there afterall, providing the first few cracks in the ice....fractures that the whole back together.
mike carvell added this note
amen my friend its true poetry
Carl F Maulbeck added this note
profound feeling here - "to melt frozen hearts / into compassion" - great stuff, Joe
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