re-re-reading. That last verse is tricky, isn't it, not as clear as appears on a first reading, devilish if you will. Good work. Interesting. "Prose tempting them to tantric heaven", a few conflicting concepts creating a powerful image, shame on you forcing an old man to THINK at these early hours of the midday.
Some say we would not recognize good without bad, some say the problem is not the bad per se but the lack of balance between the bad and the good. Maybe even angels do need some tempting from time to time, eh? And what was that song from "My Fair Lady". With a little bit of luck, When temptation comes you'll give right in!