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JURASSIC PARK IVbyDavid J. DarabontBased on Michael Crichton's"Jurassic Park"December 2007Draft
 
EXT. ISLA NUBLAR - DAYA downpour of rain...A military caravan is trekking through the thick foliage ofthe island, when they encounter a T-Rex. It looks at the team of soldiers and twists its head like a curious bird.EDDIE, the man in the clean black suit, steps out of the leadtruck with a high powered rifle. He looks through the scopeand aims carefully at the T-Rex’s eye.EDDIEYou’re a big clumsy creature,that’s why you became extinct. You were wiped out by a meteor for goodreason. Now you will be wiped outby me. You’re the last one, buddy.Eddie pulls the trigger on his rifle. Nothing happens. Hepulls it again. Nothing happens. The T-rex charges toward thecaravan.EDDIE(pounding on rifle)C’mon you piece of crap!The T-rex slams into the lead truck, which crashes into thevehicle directly behind, causing a domino effect. As Eddiefiddles with his rifle, the T-rex goes around picking offsoldiers.INT. TROOP TRUCK - DAYIt forces its head through the side of a troop truck. Thesoldiers scurry back and huddle together. SOLDIER #1 nudgesSOLDIER #2.SOLDIER #1Shoot that goddamnthing!SOLDIER #2I’m outtaammunition!The T-rex roars as its head presses against the canvasceiling.EXT. ISLA NUBLAR - DAYThe T-rex backs up from the troop truck, its mouth stained with blood. It swings back toward, Eddie. Eddie aims hisrifle again and pulls the trigger.
 
A large feathered dart shoots the T-rex in the neck. It fallsdown and splashes in the mud.Eddie walks over to the T-rex. He pulls out the dart andsmirks.EDDIEToo bad you didn’t evolve for animmunity against poison.Eddie throws the dart behind his shoulder. It lands in apuddle of water, which make concentric circles, as the islandreverberates from the clapping thunder.DISSOLVE TO:EXT. UNIVERSAL LOGO - DAYA globe spins against a black background, encapsulated bylarge letters which read, UNIVERSAL.EXT. USC - DAY - ESTABLISHINGThe University of Southern California. Lots of students.INT. LECTURE HALL - DAYThe lecture is seen behind a tall thin man with brown hair,facing out toward a huge crowd of students.GRANT(back facing)Yes, most scientists believe thatthe dinosaurs went extinct becauseof a meteorite. But what mostpeople don’t know it was in factdouble impact...A spirited looking boy raises his hand for a question.GRANTQuestions will be answered afterthe presentation.MAX interrupts anyway.MAXYour meteorites are a fantasy! Thereason the dinos went extinct isbecause of gradual climacticchange.2.(MORE)

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Justin Saumierleft a comment

I do to enjoy reading this, but some parts seem hollow and it does wait to long for the action, as said by Mker21395945. I have thought of numerous ideas to put in the script and different changes to some of the scenes, I like it but it needs to be altered A LOT! justin_saumier@hotmail.com

Brian Cedilloleft a comment

his name is misspelled in one of the pages the name grant is called gracy there

Mker21395945left a comment

I enjoyed reading this Fan-made Screenplay. However, I do see room for improvement. To start with the obvious, the action doesn't start until page 67 out of 93 pages total. That's more than half of the story that focuses on setup and character backround. I realize that both of these points are crucial to prevent creating a hollow story. still, waiting for more than half of the story to bring in the dinosaurs--which is what JP-lovers are reading for--is WAY too long. The Jurassic Park movies usually take 20 minutes (more or less) to start the action. There are also some factual errors present in the script. the most obvious would be the presence of Ray Arnold, who died in the first film (remember the arm Ellie finds in the maintnence shed). Also, it is established that Alan Grant is a single father. At the beginning of the first film, it is clearly stated that he despises kids. Why he'd want one of his own makes no sense whatsoever. he also never mentions being married. The final peice of the puzzle which I find unnecessary is the fact that the author has included famous entities--such as Al Gore and Larry King--in the story. they are not vital to the story, and--in my opinion--somewhat mock the entire JP franchise by implying that JP4 will be its last gasp. Steven Spielberg has even said that while casting the first movie, he kept in mind that he did not want Big-shot Hollywood Icons but actors who could breathe life into their roles. Perhaps a second draft should be considered.