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Clarity
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• Sentence Crimes
• Sentence Fragment
• Comma Splice
• Run-on/Fused Sentences
• Dangling Modifier
Sentence Clarity
Why do we need to be
concerned with
sentence clarity?
To communicate effectively
to the reader
To make writing persuasive
To show credibility and
authority as a writer
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Common clarity problems
Sentence
Fragments
Comma splice
Run-on or
Fused Sentence
comma + FANBOYS
semicolon
Misplaced
modifiers
Dangling
modifiers
vs.
-- Groucho Marx
Purdue University Writing Lab
How might you correct the
following sentence?
Jennifer called her adorable
kitten opening the can of
tuna and filled the food bowl.
The End