Use Verbs Instead of Nouns (3)

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1
Original
From viewpoint of manufacturing, time cost in evaluation
of appropriate photo resist and extra production cost
from small amount of stock will be serious barrier for tri-
layer technology applications.
Revised
From a manufacturing perspective, a prohibitively long
evaluation of appropriate photo resist and additional
production costs from a small amount of stock seriously
limit tri-layer technology applications.
2
Original
The Chinese herbal medicine market grows
vigorously in recent years, because of the
toxicity and side effect of the Western medicine,
and takes the resistance to the action of a drug
caused for a long time taking.
Revised
The Chinese herbal medicine market has
burgeoned in recent years owing to the toxic and
adverse effects of Western medicine, as well as
its ability to resist drug effects for an extended
period of use.
3
Original
The committee must make a consideration of the
proposal.

Revised
The committee must consider the proposal.
4
Original
The engineer performed calibration of the
machine.

Revised
The engineer calibrated the machine.
5
Original
The researcher conducted an experiment on the
new material.

Revised
The researcher experimented with the new
material.
6
Original
Simulation of the program is done.

Revised
The program is simulated.
7
Original
Implementation of the program is performed.

Revised
The program is implemented.
8
Original
Optimization of the output is achieved.

Revised
The output is optimized.
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