Inversely it almost seems I am better off with trying to make the reader think. Pushing them to read intothe subject and create correlations between the concept presented and other ideas. These are the mainthings that I have noticed in my recent pieces that differ greatly from my standard writing format.As for the actual composition of my w
orks I do not find myself comfortable enough withcommunicating to strive at expressing my notions in any style other than that of a formal essay. While Imight not write in the standard format of Opening paragraph, definable thesis here, three bodyparagraphs, and conclusion I do not stray very far from that formateither. Instead my style doesnt
eventruly define a thesis in the opening paragraph, which I find myself very distressed about. Instead itattempts to open a thought process within the reader in which they might agree with or sympathizewith my thoughts. I then proceed to build paragraphs as you would in any other essay. Each paragraphbeing a definite stand-alone thought process or elaborated thought based off of the conceptspresentedin previous paragraphs.Now in my style of writing there are things which I find quite problematic: namely that I do notdefine a thesis in my opening paragraph andthe ability to keep the readers attention When it comes tothe opening paragraph many readers are looking specificallyfor the thesis statement to understandwhat the paper is about. So understandably they become lostbecause, as I have already stated, I do notdefine one. This has led me to worry that some readers will not know what to expect throughout the
paper. If this happens then the original hook that grabbed their attention quickly wears off and thereader loses interest in the paper. This brings me to my second point as I do not feel I can efficientlykeep the readers attention throughout the entirety of my paper. Some people state that my papers arepresented too scholarly and are hard to follow, and we all know that if your target audience does noteven finish the paper then you have failed completely.
Is this a new para?
Read this aloudAgain, can you give a specific example of howyouve dont this?
Read this aloud to see if itsounds like you want
Ill stop marking these weirdlyshoved together words
Then why not just include athesis statement to guide your reader?