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Venom

Venom

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Published by: dude90a on Jan 27, 2011
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Phantomimic added this note
This brought back memories! I have also had this venom flowing through my veins so I can relate to your poem. Many would argue that nothing is worse than unrequited love. "I hate to love and love to hate", indeed. : ^ (
Global Villain added this note
I like the substance more than the form of this poem, some of your word choices seem a little heavy handed. I like "when I look at myself through your eyes" but I would like that picture, what are you like exactly through the other's eyes? Sweer poison of love, nice, too true. Cheers. GV
Carl F Maulbeck added this note
poison or antidote the venom is life changing and we are saved or lost - "When I look at myself through your eyes, / I see myself as I never thought I could be" - very good, aman
Shyam Adrift added this note
hmm the venom of un-proclaimed love!
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