How To Write A Good Advertisement: A Short Course In Copywriting
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You can learn to write compelling advertisements that will make people notice them, read them, and act upon them. In fact, you can learn to write such powerful advertisements that people actually go out and demand the product advertised and no other. How can you do this? By using the same elements that have made top copywriters like Victor O. Schwab excel at their craft.
How to Write a Good Advertisement is a short course in writing powerful, hard-hitting copy that can help you make your products and services irresistible to potential customers. This remarkable book has turned many novice mail order entrepreneurs into expert copywriters and many experienced copywriters into masters of their trade.
Whether you are new to the craft or have been writing copy for years, your knowledge and practice of advertising fundamentals will determine the extent of your success. How to Write a Good Advertisement presents these fundamentals from the perspective of a 44-year veteran in the copywriting business. Following these proven techniques and tips, anyone can write professional advertisements that create a memorable image, pull in mailboxes full of orders, or attract new customers to their service.
LEARN HOW TO:
Grab reader attention immediately
Write compelling copy that holds attention
Write a call to action that’s difficult to refuse
Design winning layouts
Increase the number of orders
Convert more inquiries to orders
GET ANSWERS TO IMPORTANT TECHNICAL QUESTIONS:
Effective advertisement length...use of color...smart media placement...and much more.
Victor O. Schwab
Victor O. Schwab was the one of most famous direct marketing copywriters of all time. His work for Dale Carnegie’s “How to Win Friends and Influence People” made it a best-selling book in the 1930s.
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How To Write A Good Advertisement - Victor O. Schwab
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HOW TO WRITE A GOOD ADVERTISEMENT:
A SHORT COURSE IN COPYWRITING
BY
VICTOR O. SCHWAB
TABLE OF CONTENTS
Contents
TABLE OF CONTENTS 4
DEDICATION 5
PREFACE 6
INTRODUCTION 7
CHAPTER 1—GET ATTENTION 9
TWO OBSTACLES—BEFORE THE CONTEST EVEN 9
How Important Is the Headline? 10
What Kinds of Rewards Do Good Headlines Promise? 11
100 Good Headlines and Why They Were so Profitable 13
The Attraction of the Specific 15
How Many Words Should a Headline Contain? 17
The Primary Viewpoint—The Point of You
19
Don’t Worry about a Negative
Approach 22
Neophobia?—Americans Don’t Suffer from This Ailment! 26
Stale News to the Advertiser May Be Fresh News to the Reader 27
MAKING YOUR LAYOUT GET ATTENTION 30
Two Ways to Do It 30
The Use of Pictures 31
Show Product in Use 32
What the Illustrations Should (and Should Not) Do 32
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 1 33
THE SO WHAT?
DEPARTMENT 34
CHAPTER 2—SHOW PEOPLE AN ADVANTAGE 36
You’re on Both Sides of the Counter 37
What Do People Want? 37
Psychological Background Behind These Desires 39
New Trends for Old 45
HOW SHALL WE SELECT OUR COPY APPEAL? 46
Judy O’Grady and the Colonel’s Lady 47
Eliminating the Testing of the Obvious
48
IMPORTANCE OF YOUR FIRST PARAGRAPH 49
Two Examples—One Bad 49
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 2 50
TELL ME QUICK AND TELL ME TRUE (OR ELSE, MY LOVE, TO HELL WITH YOU!) 50
CHAPTER 3—PROVE IT 53
Why You Need Facts—and Where 53
Two Forces Are Needed to Pull a Sale 54
Never Forget This Psychological Truth 54
The Heart Dictates to the Head 55
The Kind of Facts to Get 56
The Missing Ingredient in Many an Otherwise Good Advertisement 59
How to Present Your Facts 60
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 3 61
TOO MUCH SAND 62
CHAPTER 4—PERSUADE PEOPLE TO GRASP THIS ADVANTAGE 64
A $600,000,000 Example 64
A Simple Illustration of It in Action 65
How a Salesman Uses This Factor 65
It May Be Negative or Positive 66
The Sixth Prune 66
Aim at the Hardest Target 67
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 4 68
THIRTEEN AGAINST THE GODS 68
CHAPTER 5—ASK FOR ACTION 70
The Gap Between Reading and Acting 71
What Kind of Action Shall We Ask For? 71
Guarantees Get Action 73
Delay Is the Enemy of a Sale
75
The Fallacy of Sometime
75
Not What People Say—but What They Do 76
The Battle for the Bucks 77
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 5 77
THE UNBEATABLE BRIEF CASE 78
CHAPTER 6—HOW LONG SHOULD THE COPY BE? 80
Platitudes Won’t Answer This Question 80
Eight Milestones to a Sale 80
The Qualities of Quantity 81
How Far Will You Carry the Majority? 83
The Vital Key Word 84
The Quantity of Quality 84
22 Ways to Hold Interest Longer 84
How to Make It Look More Inviting 86
The Form vs. Substance Mistake 87
A Condensed Recapitulation 88
HOW TO DECIDE THE BEST COPY LENGTH 88
It’s Easier to Get Attention and Interest than to Hold It 89
The Everlasting Yea and Nay 89
If It Isn’t There It Can’t Do Any Work 90
When Shorter? When Longer? 90
And Now You’re Going to Cut—or to Expand 94
You Need This Additional Guidance 95
THE LOWLY SUBHEAD 95
How to Make Them Do More Work 97
Use Questions—Sequence 97
Let Them Speak Out Strongly 98
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 6 98
AIDA OR EMMA?—WHICH SHALL THE COPYWRITER MARRY? 99
CHAPTER 7—HOW TO GET MORE INQUIRIES 101
Inquiries—the Cornerstone of Many Businesses 101
Ten Ways to Increase Them 101
HOW TO REDUCE THE NUMBER OF INQUIRIES 103
A Delicate Balance 103
What to Decide First 104
How to Decide Whether to Reduce Them 104
Ten Ways to Reduce Them 105
HOW TO MAKE THE INQUIRY COUPON ITSELF DO A BETTER JOB 107
Three Kinds of Prospects 107
Ten Ways to Improve Your Coupon 108
COUPON RIDERS—WORTH MUCH, COST LITTLE OR NOTHING 109
Allow People to Trade Up If They Want to 110
SEVEN OTHER FACTORS WHICH INFLUENCE THE EFFECTIVENESS OF AN ADVERTISEMENT 111
Size of Advertisement 111
The Use of Color 111
When It Appears 111
Position 112
The Effect of Big News Events 113
The Effect of Weather 113
And the Most Important Factor of All 114
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 7 114
YOU CAN PROFIT—AFTER HOURS 115
CHAPTER 8—HOW TO SIZE AN ADVERTISEMENT 117
Your Vision May Be Too Narrow 117
Look Beyond the Nuts and Bolts
118
If You Are Testing a New Product 118
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 8 119
SUBCUTANEOUS ADVERTISING 119
CHAPTER 9—DO COPY APPEALS HAVE A SEX? 121
Longer-Haul
Thinking 121
Shorter-Haul
Thinking 121
Do Your Observations Check with This One? 122
Why It Has Bearing on Your Copy 123
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 9 123
MR. JOHN JACQUES JONATHAN JONES 123
CHAPTER 10—FACTS OR FANCIES—WHICH SHALL YOU FEATURE? 126
The Most Wanted Product in the World
127
Some Ads Don’t Need Much Factual Underpinning 127
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 10 128
ARE YOU AN ADSOMNIAC
? 128
CHAPTER 11—FOURTEEN INTERESTING AND INSTRUCTIVE SPLIT-RUN TESTS 131
Sufficiently Conclusive—if Properly Handled 131
Differences Should Scream
—not Whisper
131
The General Application of Split-Run Experience 132
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 11 138
TO THE JONESES 138
CHAPTER 12—CUMULATIVE EFFECT
—A COMMON ALIBI FOR POOR ADVERTISING 141
Why Multiply Zero? 141
False Reliance upon the Series
Idea 141
What’s Profitable about Procrastination? 142
What’s the Cumulative Cost in Time and Money? 142
You’re Not in an Endurance Contest 143
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 12 143
CHAPTER 13—THE HARD-BOILED ATTITUDE—AND HOW TO ACQUIRE IT 144
What’s Behind This Attitude? 144
But There Are Two Compensations 145
When Is an Ad Good
? 145
More Nays than Yeas 146
The Tougher the Job, the Better the Copy 146
HOW TO ACQUIRE THE HARD-BOILED ATTITUDE 147
Doubt Makes Demands 148
A Hair Shirt Worth Wearing 148
Not What They Think, but What They Do 149
QUIZ ON CHAPTER 13 150
CHAPTER 14—RANDOM OBSERVATIONS 151
REQUEST FROM THE PUBLISHER 170
DEDICATION
To my wife,
VILMA NOBLE SCHWAB,
without whose constant and confounded
I’ve taken the cover off the typewriter; get going
I would never have finished writing this book
PREFACE
This book might well have carried the subtitle Or 44 Years in the Copy Department instead of its present one. Even a copywriter, whose breed is not noteworthy for arithmetical prowess, could not escape arriving at the conclusion that the number of years from 1917 to 1961 totals forty-four. And, Heaven help me!, for that seeming aeon of time the major interest of the author has been advertising copy—good, bad, and indifferent.
That a large measure of this past experience has been associated with a particularly demanding kind of advertising copy may, as will be explained, be an advantageous circumstance for the reader of this book, regardless of what type of copywriting job confronts him.
For the subject of the book is not the writing of mail order copy. Its sole purpose is to lend a hand to any copywriter (or student of copywriting) whose ambition is to create advertisements which are more resultful, no matter what the product is or how and where it is sold.
As to why the author’s background of experience may represent an advantageous circumstance for such copywriters, I will leave to an infinitely more capable pen than mine—that of no less an authority than Claude G. Hopkins, one of the greatest copywriters of general
advertising who ever lived: Mail order advertising is difficult. But it is educational. It keeps one on his mettle. It fixes one’s viewpoint on cost and result. The advertising-writer learns more from mail order advertising than from any other.
Therefore, if you are looking for guidance specifically concerned with the writing of mail order advertising, this is not your book. On the other hand, if in the writing of any type of advertising you want more of your copy to achieve the selling effectiveness imperative for any mail order man who wants to continue eating heartily, this book may prove helpful to you. At any rate, you are the person for whom it was written.
Much of its information will probably recall to your mind the aphorism, We need not so much to be instructed as to be reminded.
And that’s all to the good. Finally, and appertaining to the passages which are reminiscent in nature, the author has tried to avoid any necessity for later having to admit, like Mark Twain, that When I was very young I could remember anything, whether it happened or not. But now I am older and I can only remember the latter.
VICTOR O. SCHWAB
INTRODUCTION
The advertisement itself is the keystone in the arch of sales. Most sales difficulties (for example, problems of dealer distribution, cooperation, and brand switching) actually hark right back to impotent advertisements. They were too easily resistible; simply not good enough to make people see, read, and act upon them: to go out and demand the product advertised and no other.
Poor copy cannot overcome faults or gaps in dealer distribution; it cannot even cash in on the finest dealer setups. But good copy can, and does, surmount many dealer difficulties, making them secondary, and selling in spite of them.
Therefore, since either the blame for failure or the credit for success in many sales campaigns can rightly be laid at the doorstep of the advertisements themselves, the first five chapters of this book concentrate upon certain basic elements of a good advertisement. This is essential, because, as Condé Nast once stated, The more factors we do not know, the more important it is for us to isolate those very few factors which we count on.
What are these fundamentals? Five of them are discussed in our first chapters. They are:
(1) Get Attention;
(2) Show People an Advantage;
(3) Prove It;
(4) Persuade People to Grasp This Advantage;
(5) Ask for Action.
Most advertising copywriters know these fundamentals. Many of us practice them. Some of us should get back to them. Whether one is now studying to go into the field of copywriting, whether he is new in the craft, or whether he has been a practitioner in it for years, his knowledge—and practice—of these fundamentals will determine the extent of his success. As Daniel Defoe said, An old and experienced pilot loses a ship by his assurance and over-confidence of his knowledge as effectively as the young pilot does by his ignorance and want of experience.
So this book will strip down to fundamentals, try to forget the furbelows. For, as time goes on, every line of creative work gets cluttered up with impressive jargon and off-the-beam technicalities, with professional palaver that strays far away from the main objective. Someone has said, Whenever people are particularly muddled in their thinking they invent big words to cover their confusion.
Yet, after all, is advertising itself really such a complicated thing? Its basic purpose is simple: to make people buy a product or a service. Not just to make them pause, or admire, or even merely to believe. For advertising is nothing but an expense (not an investment) unless it gets the kind of action desired by the advertiser.
That’s a very clear purpose. But in practice—that’s where the fuzziness comes in. And the result: Beautiful examples of the art of advertising are produced, printed, admired—and, page after page, flipped over by the public.
CHAPTER 1—GET ATTENTION
There are five fundamentals in the writing of a good advertisement:
1. Get Attention
2. Show People an Advantage
3. Prove It
4. Persuade People to Grasp This Advantage
5. Ask for Action
An advertisement cannot stimulate sales if it is not read; it cannot be read if it is not seen; and it will not be seen unless it can Get Attention. That’s the round robin which Daniel Starch must have had in mind when he wrote The attention-value of an advertisement is approximately twice as important as the actual convincingness of the test itself.
YOU—THE UNINVITED GUEST
Do not underestimate the fierce competition you face in getting attention. Nobody in the world (except you) is waiting for your advertisement to appear. Everybody in the world (except you) would much rather read the news, comics, stories, articles, editorials or even the obituaries.
You, the advertiser, are the Uninvited Guest—actually, let’s face it, an intruder. No reader asked you, or paid you, to join the party which he is having with the publication he has bought. You paid to get in.
The reader has bought the publication for news, entertainment, or instruction which is of helpful personal value. So that is what your advertisement also has to provide—if you are to stand any chance of competing with the publication’s editorial matter for the interest of the reader. And then, to make him pay you for your product, you must make it pay him to read about it.
Successful advertisers purposely start from this premise: People don’t want to read advertising—not even mine. Then they work their way around this 8-ball by shooting that much harder for advertisements that, as Arthur Brisbane defined good writing, are easier to read than to skip.
They try to offer so enticing a reward for reading
that people will want to read their advertisements right through—against any competition, editorial or commercial.
TWO OBSTACLES—BEFORE THE CONTEST EVEN BEGINS
Of course, before your advertisement even has an opportunity to compete for attention against a publication’s editorial matter and the other advertisements in it, there are a few other obstacles which have to be met and overcome.
First, the publication (if delivered by mail to a subscriber) must be unwrapped and at least made ready for reading. Actually, many thousands of copies are not opened, more than at first thought you might imagine. The issues come pretty fast, particularly the weeklies, and many people just do not get around
to them. That is why advertising men check carefully on the amount of newsstand circulation of a publication. For this represents circulation to people who have actually gone out and purchased single copies, not copies which come to them
as a result of a subscription ordered previously—perhaps at a cut-price subscription rate so low that the subscriber, having invested so little, can be quite casual about reading them.
Second, the contents of the publication must at least be examined—and the more of the reader’s time which the editorial material in the publication attracts, the better chance your advertisement has of being noticed. Here, however, you again lose a certain additional percentage of potential readership: those who, in spite of how much time they may give to the editorial content of the publication, give very little of it (some readers claim none at all!) to the reading of the advertisements in it.
One survey indicates that the average person reads only four advertisements in the average magazine. Another investigator, George B. Hotchkiss, in his Advertising Copy, tells us that to read a metropolitan newspaper completely through requires at least fourteen hours—and a study made for the Association of National Advertisers cites a survey demonstrating that over 66 per cent of a large group of business and professional men spent 15 minutes or less in reading daily newspapers.
Only after these two obstacles have been surmounted can your advertisement face the contest of winning the attention of as many as possible of those who do unwrap the publication, who do examine it with some thoroughness, and who do include the advertisements in their examination or reading. And, to capture that attention, you’ve got to earn it—either with your headline or with your layout, and preferably with both.
How Important Is the Headline?
How important a part does the headline alone play in the accomplishment of our first purpose: Get Attention? Perhaps you have read somewhere that 50 per cent of the value of an entire advertisement is represented by the headline itself. Or 70 per cent. Or 80 per cent. The truth is that you cannot possibly evaluate it in percentages.
For example, what percentage better is an automobile that runs beautifully as compared with one that won’t run at all? It’s the same with headlines. One can be almost a total failure in accomplishing even its primary purpose: to induce people to start reading the body matter (the copy) of the advertisement. Another headline can work almost like magic in enticing readers by the thousands into an ad whose copy moves people to action and thus moves products off the shelves.
Yes, there is really that much difference in the power of headlines. It isn’t enough to cram persuasiveness into the body matter. Some of the most tremendous flops among advertisements contain body matter filled with convincing copy. But it just wasn’t capsuled into a good headline. And so the excellent copy did not even get a reading.
For, obviously, it is the headline that gets people into the copy; the copy doesn’t get them into the headline. In other words, the copywriter’s aim in life should be to try to make it harder for people to pass up his advertisement than to read it. And right in his headline he takes the first, and truly giant, step on the road to that goal.
So much for the importance of headlines—and for the staggering waste and loss of effectiveness when expensive advertising space is devoted to displaying poor ones.
THE SOLE PURPOSE OF A HEADLINE
What is the sole purpose of a headline? To make it crystal clear we’ll use a simple and sufficiently accurate analogy.
The headline of an advertisement is like a flag being held up by a flagman alongside a railroad track. He is using it to try to get the immediate attention of the engineer of an approaching train—so that he can give him some kind of message. In the case of advertising, on that flag is printed the headline of an advertisement.
Let’s carry the analogy further. The train consists of a fast-moving modern Diesel engine and one car. The engineer will (most often) be the mother and/or father of a family. The one dependent car contains the rest of the family. They are all speeding along the track of their daily lives—moving fast in accordance with the hectic tempo of today.
The message on that flag (the headline of the advertisement) must be persuasive. Yes, and persuasive enough to compete with all the other distractions of life. It must capture attention. And it must offer a reward for reading.
This reward must be sufficiently attractive to induce the reader to continue reading beyond the headline. (In the case of a negative type of warning
headline we might even draw a further analogy and go so far as to say that it is then more in the nature of a red flag.)
It is obvious, therefore, that there are two principal attributes of good headlines. They select, from the total readership of the publication, those readers who are (or can be induced to be) interested in the subject of the advertisement. And they promise them a worthwhile reward for reading it.
What Kinds of Rewards Do Good Headlines Promise?
In this chapter we are going to concentrate upon one hundred examples of the two types of headlines which in toto unquestionably have the best record of resultfulness, based upon criteria which will soon be described.
Both types promise desirable rewards for reading. One does it through a positive approach, the other through a negative one. Here is how they do it:
1. By managing to convey, in a few words, how the reader can save, gain, or accomplish something through the use of your product—how it will increase this: his mental, physical, financial, social, emotional, or spiritual stimulation, satisfaction, well-being, or security.
2. Or, negatively, by pointing out how the reader can avoid (reduce or eliminate) risks, worries, losses, mistakes, embarrassment, drudgery, or some other undesirable condition through the use of your product—how it will decrease this: his fear of poverty,