PAGE TEN ( panel)Panel 1. Black.NARRATION:One week agoPanel 2. Light rain on a not too cloudy day patters down upon a well-kept graveyard. Families areseen leaving in the background. A couple of workers are filling a grave still bearing fresh flowers.The memorial picture shows a aged and gruff bear dressed in an incredibly expensive suit.
What do the underbosses look like?
You know what they look like, think Triplets of BellevilleUNDERBOSS 1 (FRANKIE):can't believe they did this...UNDERBOSS2 (FREDO):So who did it?
^repetetive and somewhat awkward dialogue,
could try, "can't believe they did this","yeah, well who's this they you're talking 'bout?"
Panel 3. A mansion stands tall in the rain with patrons coming and going for the wake. All issomber and markedly empty with a few cups still strewn about the floor.FRANKIE (UB1):We don't know yet, but it sure wasn't the cops.
"sure wasn't the fuzz"?
Who calls them "fuzz" anymore? UNDERBOSS3 (FRANCIS):I swear to god, if those fuckers even thought about-
"if those assbastards even thought about"?
My comic, my swears! You didn't like "fetid dingo kidneys" FRANKIE (UB1):But they didn't. So shut up and start helping instead of just shouting.