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Write a First Draft
After you have collected and reviewed these materials,it is time to start writing. The following is a list oconcerns that writers should keep in mind when writinga personal statement or application letter.
Answer the Question
A major problem for all writers can be the issue of actually answering the question asked. For example, anapplication might want you to discuss the reason you areapplying to a particular program or company. If youspend your entire essay or letter detailing yourqualifications without mentioning what attracted youto the company or department, your statement probablywill not be successful. To avoid this problem, read thequestion or assignment carefully both as you prepare andagain just prior to writing. Keep the question in front of you as you write, and refer to it often. With applicationletters, the question is implicit: “Who are you, and whyshould you be considered for this job?”.
Consider the “I” Problem
This is a
personal
statement; using the first personpronoun
is acceptable. Writers often feel rather self-conscious about using the first person excessively, either because they are modest or because they have learned toavoid first and second person (
and
 you
) in any kind of formal writing. Yet in this type of writing using firstperson is
essential
 because it makes your prose morelively. Using third person can result in a vague, wordyessay. Don’t start every sentence with
 , but rememberthat you and your experiences are the subject of theessay.
Avoid Unnecessary Duplication
Some writers repeat information in their personalstatements that is already included in other parts of theapplication packet (resume, transcript, applicationform, etc.). However, it isn’t necessary to includespecific information such as your exact GPA in yourpersonal statement. It is more efficient and effective tosimply mention academic progress briefly (“I was on theDean’s List” or “I have taken numerous courses in thefield of nutrition”) and then discuss appropriate work orvolunteer experiences in more detail.
Make Your Statement Distinctive
Many writers want to make their personal statementsunique or distinctive in some way as a means of distinguishing their application from the many othersreceived by the company or program. One way to do thisis to include at least one detailed example or anecdotethat is specific to your own experience—perhaps adescription of an important family member or personalmoment that influenced your decision to pursue aparticular career or degree. This strategy makes yourstatement distinctive and memorable.
Keep it Brief
Personal statements are usually limited to 250–500words or one typed page, so write concisely while still being detailed. Make sure that each paragraph istightly focused on a single idea (one paragraph on thestrengths of the program, one on your researchexperience, for example) to help keep the essay from becoming too long. Also, spend a little time working onword choice using a dictionary and a thesaurus, andinclude adjectives for more vivid and precise writing.
Organize Your Statement
As mentioned before, the requirements for personalstatements differ, but generally a personal statementincludes certain information and can follow this format(see sample below).
Introduction
Many personal statements begin with a catchy opening,often the distinctive personal anecdote mentionedearlier, as a way of gaining the reader’s attention. Fromthere you can connect the example to the actual programor position for which you are applying. Mention thespecific name of the program or company, as well as thetitle of the position or degree you are seeking, in thefirst paragraph.
Detailed supporting paragraphs
Subsequent paragraphs should address any specificquestions from the application, which might deal withthe strengths of the program or position, your ownqualifications, your compatibility with the program orposition, your long-term goals, or some combinationthereof. Each paragraph should be focused and shouldhave a topic sentence that informs the reader of theparagraph’s emphasis. You need to remember, however,that the examples from your experience must be
relevant
and should support your argument about yourqualifications.
Conclusion
Tie together the various issues that you have raised inthe essay, and reiterate your interest in this specificprogram or position. You might also mention in a closingparagraph how this job or degree is a step toward along-term goal.An
 
application letter
 
may contain many of the sameelements as a personal statement, but it is presented in a business letter format and can sometimes be even shorterand more specific than a personal statement. Anapplication letter may not contain the catchy opening of the personal statement but instead includes detailedinformation about the program or position and how youfound out about it. Your application letter usually refersto your resume at some point. Another difference between a personal statement and an application letteris in the conclusion, which in an application letter asksfor an interview.
Allow Time for Revision
Because this piece of writing is designed to get youeither an interview or a place in a graduate schoolprogram, it is
vital
that you allow yourself enough timeto revise it thoroughly. This revision needs to occur on both the content level (did you address the question? isthere enough detail?) and the sentence level (is the

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