Interview

In the recent reading the writer vividly describes the atmosphere of the bowling
alley to set the tone and mood of the setting. We as the readers can tell that can be a
competitive bowling alley with league, but is mostly a family ran atmosphere. She
explains that the parking lot is always full which means a lot of people like this alley and
we can infer the that atmosphere, service, and or food is good here which makes people
come back.
When interviewing bowlers she puts in great detail and great quotes that tell us
about each person she interviews at the bowling alley. An example is when she
interviews a woman and she replies that she is going to make it home just on time to
watch CSI when she gets back home. As readers we can infer that this woman has more
things on her mind than just bowling and really enjoys this hit television series. Another
example is when she interviews a the participant, Lauren, and Lauren tells her if you do
bad on a Thursday night which is the men's league "they will kill you." Clearly during
Thursday nights men take their league very seriously.
In conclusion, the writer does not only interview people, but puts valuable
responses into her essay which tells us about the community at the bowling alley. In order
to do so you must ask good questions that have good responses and intergrate them into a
neatly well-written flow.