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 Title:
Left Behind (The Rewrite)
Author: Claire Violet ThorpeGenre: Drama/FamilyPublished: March 30, 2011Summary: This is the rewritten version of the 2009 flop,
Left Behind 
Setting: HogwartsRating: PG-13 for language, domestic violence, and scenes of violenceWarning/Spoilers: none, save for O.o.t.PDisclaimer: I don’t own anything but this story, as
Harry Potter 
is theproperty of J. K. Rowling,
Twilight 
is the property of Stephenie Meyer, andI cannot write as they do.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Concerning
Left Behind 
, or a side-story to
Something Wicked This Way Comes
 (the rewrite)
Hey readers, I’m going to have to come clean with you all about the fanfiction called “Left Behind,” which was the side-story of the Harry Potter/Twilight crossover “Something Wicked This Way Comes.” When I was going over the story one day, I was noticed that it had way too many plot holes and inconsistencies, threw out several unnecessary storylines, and in short, a good story was utterly destroyed. As a writer of fiction, if I were reading this story and if it was written by someone other than me, I would have flamed both writer and story and have him or her banned from writing anything for life.So, for the next few days, I will be rewriting this story and correcting any mistakes that this story might have. I will also be throwing away any storyline that should never have been created and adding more of theoriginal fiction into the story. There will also be new scenes and newcharacters and the ending will be alongside the end of Chapter 17 in
 
“Something Wicked This Way Comes.” If you have the original “Left Behind” in your favorites, just pretend I never wrote it in the first place, and embracethe new and improved version of this story. You’ll thank me someday.What’s going to happen in this new story? I have a list of things that happened in the last story...
1.
 Jacquel’s shocking family secrets2.Ron becoming a vampire and Hermione moving to Australia3.The Order of the Phoenix disbanding
4.
Dumbledore’s wicked deeds being brought to light 5.Jacquel becoming a vampire and her secret abuse is revealed 6.Sean dies killing the Dark Lord and his Knights get Will as their newleader 7.Vernon and Petunia are accused of abusing Harry and sent to jail8.Ginny goes insane and tries to kill Jacquel9.Jacquel and Ron are sent to Rewhart Academy for Vampires10.Jacquel raises an unconventional family Here’s what happens in the new story (in order):1.Harry jumps the veil after Sirius is zapped by Bellatrix 2.Dumbledore announces that Harry is lost and everyone at Hogwartsmourns3.Sean fights Lord Voldemort and kills him, yet he dies of his injuries whilethe Death Eaters fight against the Knights4.Petunia finds out about Harry, Jacquel returns to Mobleyshire and Nichollotells her that Harry and Sirius were found dead 5.Jacquel attends the funerals of Harry and Sirius and Vernon and Petuniaare arrested for killing Harry 6.Will becomes the leader of the Knights, Nichollo calls Dumbledore out onhis crime of killing the Romanov family, and Jacquel is rushed to thehospital after she is found bleeding
 
7.Dumbledore deals with the guilt of killing Irene Romanov, Will makes ahuge discovery, and Jacquel reveals her mysterious pregnancy 
8.
Ron, Hermione, and Jacquel celebrate what would have been Harry’s 16
th
birthday, Dumbledore recalls his crimes, the Knights discover a secret  pact made between Jacquel and a sibling of one of the Knights, and Scrimgeour creates laws that prohibit any interaction between wizardsand muggles9.Jacquel is taken back to the hospital when she develops life-threateningconditions, Mobley admits his past to Will, and Ginny witnessesDumbledore killing several people who claimed that they had seen himkilling Harry and Sirius
10.
 Jacquel is declared dead and the Weasleys mourn her untimely death,Ginny tells Kingsley that she saw Dumbledore killing 18 people and attacking Moody, and Dumbledore finds out about Irene’s younger children11.Jacquel wakes up as a vampire and calls Dumbledore out on hisstupidity, the babies are given to her, and Jacquel finds out about her brother and sister 
12.
Richard and Meena marry, Jacquel is taken to Olive Harlequin’s house torecover, and the kids prepare for another year at Hogwarts
13.
In a borrowed moment from “Something Wicked This Way Comes,” afamily secret is revealed and Dumbledore is brought to his knees14.Jacquel is taken out of Hogwarts and sent back to Olive, the Knightsbegin delving into the identities of the parents of Carlsen and Carla, Jacquel has a frightening encounter with several vampires, Will recalls anincident that she swore to never reveal to anyone, and Ron is attacked while he, Hermione, and Jacquel are out one evening15.A courtroom trial is held and Jacquel must testify against an old friend,not knowing that her carefully coached testimony means certain death for her friend 
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