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the evacuee

Storyboards

Page Shot 1 Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/3 02:00 Open Establishing shot of station.

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Panel Duration Dialogue: 2/3 02:16 (Train Whistle Blows) Action Notes: Train approaches station.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 3/3 02:22 Train slows into station.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/3 01:15 Title card shown. Mother and Son stand facing the train as it pulls up.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/3 01:18 Train pulls to a stop.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 3/3 00:14 The Mother turns to her son crouches down on one knee.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/2 00:21 Mother kneels down to his level

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/2 01:14 Mother reaches her arm out to the son

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Panel Duration Dialogue: 1/2 02:06 (Out of shot, Conductor Clears throat) Action Notes: Mother gently strokes her sons head. They exchange an attentive stare.

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Panel Duration Dialogue: 2/2 01:12 Mother: "Yes?" Action Notes: The mother?s attention is interrupted, and she looks around.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/3 00:21 The conductor is pointing at the carriage door he's holding open.

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Panel Duration Dialogue: 2/3 00:18 Conductor: "Yes (sympathetically)" Action Notes: Conductor nods.

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Panel Duration 3/3 00:18

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/4 00:09 Cut back to Mother.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/4 02:08 The mothers face changes expression to despair.

Page Shot 6 Panel Duration Action Notes: 3/4 02:00 She leans forward to hug her son.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 4/4 03:19 The mother holds her son in her arms, cradling his head with one hand and holding his body close to hers with the other (tender embrace). The son puts both arms around the mothers neck and squeeze her tightly.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/1 03:18 Long shot of the station. Mother and son begin to weep.

Shot 8

Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/2 00:22 While in hug the conductor walks past behind them.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/2 01:12 Son and Mother look up slightly.

Page Shot 9 Panel Duration Dialogue: 1/1 04:00 Mother; Yes, yes. (Slightly sad)

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Action Notes: The mother releases her son embrace and slowly nods her head.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/3 00:17 Conductor looks down saddened at the goodbye.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/3 01:19 He checks his pocketwatch.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 3/3 00:15 looks back. They don't have long.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/1 01:19 The mother takes her hankie and gently pats the tears on her sons face

Page Shot 12 Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/3 01:01 Mother takes the Son's hand.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/3 01:02 Mother presses hankie into Son's hand.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 3/3 00:22 Son's hand left with hankie poking out.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/2 00:19 Conductor looks down saddened.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/2 00:15 The looks at his watch a second time feeling agitated.

Page Shot 14 Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/3 01:00 Son looks down at the gift.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/3 01:04 Son musters a weak smile on his pained face.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 3/3 01:08 Conductor picks the son up with both of his hands

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/1 03:10 Conductor places Son in the carriage.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/1 03:02 Conductor closes the door and tugs the handle to make sure the door is secure.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/1 01:09 Mother helplessly looks at her Son?s situation

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/3 02:02 The son looks at his mother through the dirty closed carriage window as the train leaves the station. The mother disappears in the distance.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/3 03:18 The train leaves the station

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 3/3 04:11 Train enters tunnel.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 1/1 02:07 The son looks down.

Page Shot 20 Panel Duration 1/3 01:06

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/3 00:16 he opens his hands.

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Panel Duration Action Notes: 3/3 03:06 As he open his hands the hankie unfolds and reveals a message written in lipstick, Love You

Shot 21

Panel Duration Dialogue: 1/1 02:20 Son: No...(Lost and sad) Action Notes: He presses the hankie to his face and breaths in the smell of his mother

Shot 22

Panel Duration Dialogue: 1/2 07:14 (Son whimpers and begins to cry) Action Notes: He lowers his hands slightly to chest height, his eyes never losing focus of his mother?s hankie.

Page 10/10 Shot 22 Panel Duration Action Notes: 2/2 02:07 Fade to Credits.

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