kckatt

I loved your book and am ready to start the next one?? Is there a sequel? I hope so you have the making of a fantastic story line that can continue. I would like to see you develope the characters more in future books. Slow the story down with more details. I am just one of those people who love 500 page books. You are very gifted keep writing. katt

beautyfully

You are a gifted writer creating a totally all cosuming,intriguing world of the novel you write.Please dont torture your readers by taking so long to write the end.

lyredragon

I am smacking myself for not commenting much earlier. This is a good read. The Keela chapter is done in 1st person, but i think it was originally detailed in third. anyways, keep writing^.^ what dark and mysterious things are going to happen to our poor hapless heroine <.< >.>

Tyger Burch

I love vampire stories and actually wrote one myself so Im gonna grab this one but Im nervous because its not finished yet. Get in there and put in some chapters! =)

hotred8

would you please enter the last chapters.i want to know what happens

white_gobbo

briliant, sometimes a bit too fast, but still briliant. though, it is a bit strange that keela imediately believes she is a vamp(not veary realistic. give me more!!!!!!!!!

Azzieh

Ok I'm goint to read this but it's not complete! What happened with chapters 7-12?

Jiorgia

a little editing to be done but other than that brilliant... i would love to continue reading it!