hellkor

Projet de fin d étude Draft end of study مشروع نهاية الدراسة Projekt Ende Studie Projekt ko?ca studi?w Burador na dulo ng pag-aaral isitc2008@hotmail.com

hellkor

Projet de fin d étude Draft end of study مشروع نهاية الدراسة Projekt Ende Studie Projekt ko?ca studi?w Burador na dulo ng pag-aaral isitc2008@hotmail.com

earthbounds

nice story ,,thanks

Bintang Akbar

This is nice story Good ... Good ... Good ... Very Good ...

kelly_yuyu

Wow, I couldn't stop reading! :O Congratulations!! :D Love the story :*-*

dulci_fishy

very nice, i wrote to, is interesting how you turn our days in prince with "huge" problems. congratulation

dachica

This i will translate to my son, it is interesting and smart!

syedsharfraz

Fantastic story u realy out done ur self

Donna Huntriss

Hi Trip, I think the names of the charcters are a little too "adult" (like "Booz" and "Wanka"). Cute story otherwise.

Sayema Faruky

Fantastic story. I would like to share it with my Kidz!!

Maarm

Being American is not an acceptable excuse for such appalling grammar. The story reads like it was written by, not for, a child.

mmontanez177

Trip, it was whimsical and seems it would make a great childrens title.

timmytamatem8287

thank you for being my frieds iwant you help me improving my english to understand your story

k.ajax

the story still has a lot of room of imaginary....

dhku06

Good one regards Dharmendra kumar