Year 12 film Pitch feedback sheet

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Who will Produce and distribute this film? What other films does this film draw on and compare to?

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THE FILM ITSELF

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What genre is it? Who/ what is it about? Where is it set? What are the themes? What is the films
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Why would the target audience like it/PaY to see it?

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THE OPENING SEQUENCE

How does it relate to the rest of the film? Does it signify the genre?
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character and setting? What happens? What is the style? What is the mood? How are titles

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integrated? Does it demonstrate skills in use of dialogue,

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continuity princiPles, sound and light? ls it an interesting/engaging idea? Will it achieve anYthing not done before?

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Actors Location Props, costumes, make-uP Technical - sfx, camera, light,

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ls it SMART? ie sPecific,

measurable, attainable, realistic and timelY?

THE PRESENTATION Did everyone contribute successfullY and equallY?

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Was it aPProached as a team? Was the group confident and

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united in their ideas? Did the hand-out match the presentation? Did it Provide a usefulsummary? Did it demonstrate understanding of AS theory form and convention, application of theory, use of
THE FINAL ASSESSMENT Success of Success of

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Does it meet the demands

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the research been thorough enough ls it simple enough? ls it good enough? ls it achievable/ realistic?
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