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O Revisor de Textos e as Novas Tecnologias

O Revisor de Textos e as Novas Tecnologias

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Sabendo-se que o revisor tem de analisar em seu cotidiano de trabalho textos produzidos nas mais diferentes esferas e áreas de conhecimento, o objetivo deste trabalho é discutir sobre as ferramentas que esse profissional utiliza para analisar os aspectos discursivos e linguísticos dos textos. Para tanto, tomamos como base a experiência de três revisores, sob os pseudônimos de Fernando, Lígia e Aurélio, particularmente o posicionamento deles diante dos problemas detectados no texto e sua relação com as novas tecnologias.
Sabendo-se que o revisor tem de analisar em seu cotidiano de trabalho textos produzidos nas mais diferentes esferas e áreas de conhecimento, o objetivo deste trabalho é discutir sobre as ferramentas que esse profissional utiliza para analisar os aspectos discursivos e linguísticos dos textos. Para tanto, tomamos como base a experiência de três revisores, sob os pseudônimos de Fernando, Lígia e Aurélio, particularmente o posicionamento deles diante dos problemas detectados no texto e sua relação com as novas tecnologias.

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ga wshchde`{ xqa ` dbmh~ho gbsawhoalwa é wassh
$ é ys`gqíë` a oa{o` é ksbhíë` hswï{wbkh‟,
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bln`sohíë`
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Wshwh/{a ga qo yasï`g` ohskhg` y`s wshl{n`sohíña{ ch{ahgh{ ao l`~`{ o`g`{ gays`gqzbs a k`l{qobs bln`sohíña{$ a kqjh{ k`l{axqêlkbh{ hblgh lë` y`gao {asw`whdoalwa hlwakbyhgh{,
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W`ohlg` ` ysa{{qy`{w` ga xqa l`~h{ wakl`d`mbh{$ ysblkbyhdoalwa hxqadh{ xqahdh~hlkho ` q{` gh bln`sohíë`$ yasoabho ` k`wbgbhl` ga w`gh h {`kbaghga$k`l{bgasho`{ {qh{ oúdwbydh{ blndqêlkbh{ ao gb~as{`{ khoy`{ gh ~bgh {`kbhd, Qohga{{h{ blndqêlkbh{ blkbga l` khoy` g` wshchde`, [`csa b{{`$ Kh{wadd{ %399>$ y, ;2" hnbsoh
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 [`c a{{h yas{yakwb~h$ l`~h{ wakl`d`mbh{ hwqho gbsawhoalwa {`csa h{ ys`nb{{ña{,Hdmqoh{ gadh{ ga{hyhsakasho, @qwsh{ {qsmbsho ao oab` h`{ l`~`{ kalèsb`{, H ohb`sbhgadh{$ alwsawhlw`$ n`b hk`oawbgh$ ga qo o`g` `q ga `qws`$ y`s qo hdmqo wby` gaoqghlíh hg~blgh g` ga{al~`d~boalw` ga wakl`d`mbh{ gbmbwhb{, Ga{{h n`soh$ gawask`leakboalw`{ a a{whs hyw` h g`oblhs l`~h{ n`soh{ ga ys`ka{{hs bln`sohíña{ yh{{`q h{as k`lgbíë` nqlghoalwhd yhsh ys`nb{{b`lhb{ hwalw`{ é{ oqghlíh{ gh gblãobkh g`oaskhg` ga wshchde` a xqa$ y`s b{{` oa{o`$ cq{kho hwqhdbzhíë` yasohlalwa,
Faboadb`l / sa~b{ë` ga wauw`{ewwy:}}},faboadb`l,k`o,c%;8";377/8371
 
Hkaskh gh{ oqghlíh{ {`csa h{ ys`nb{{ña{ h yhswbs g` hg~alw` wakl`dûmbk`$Hssha{ %3988" alwsa~b{wh ` ys`na{{`s ga Ak`l`obh gh Qlb~as{bghga Nagashd gaYaslhocqk` %QNYA" J`{â Khsd`{ Kh~hdkhlwb, [amqlg` ` ys`na{{`s$ k`o h{ l`~h{wakl`d`mbh{ {qsmao l`~h{ gaohlgh{ a$ k`l{axqalwaoalwa$ l`~h{ ~hmh{ ga aoysam` xqay`{{ho {qysbs a{{h{ l`~h{ laka{{bghga{,
[a qoh aoysa{h sa{`d~a hqw`ohwbzhs {aq{ lamûkb`{ a boydhlwhs
{`nw}hsa{
sa{y`l{è~ab{ yadh yhswa ohb{ cqs`ksèwbkh{$ hqw`ohwbkhoalwaw`slh/{a laka{{èsbh qoh ya{{`h xqa {ajh khyhz ga hlhdb{hs `{ ghg`{mashg`{ yad` k`oyqwhg`s, @q {ajh$ {amqlg` ` ys`na{{`s$ h{ oèxqblh{lë` s`qchsho ` wshchde` g` e`oao$ hyalh{ nbkhsë` k`o ` wshchde`
—csqwhd‟
alxqhlw` `{ e`oal{ {asë` sa{y`l{è~ab{ yad`hys`nqlgh
oalw`, —
@{ ys`nb{{b`lhb{ ysakb{ho ~`dwhs yhsh h{qlb~as{bghga{ yhsh hysa
lgasao h k`d`khs l`~h{ xqa{wña{‟
$ hnbsoh J`{âKh~hdkhlwb
%HSSHA[$ 3988"
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Ao gb~as{h{ ys`nb{{ña{$ y`gao`{ `c{as~hs h{ oqghlíh{ ao kqs{`, Lhoagbkblh$ l`~`{ axqbyhoalw`{ {ë` ys`gqzbg`{ `q hyasnabí`hg`{ h nbo ga ys`ybkbhsl`~h{ ysèwbkh{ xqa hqubdbho ` gbh h gbh oâgbk` cao k`o` k`lwsbcqbs yhsh gbhmlû{wbk`{ohb{ ysakb{`{ a wshwhoalw`{ ohb{ anbkbalwa{ ga g`alíh{, Lh almalehsbh$ l`~`{
{`nw}hsa{
 {ë` ga{al~`d~bg`{ h khgh gbh k`o ` blwqbw` ga nhkbdbwhs h adhc`shíë` ga ys`jaw`{ a hauakqíë` ga kèdkqd`{, L` j`slhdb{o`$ ys`nb{{b`lhb{ ga{{h èsah hm`sh k`lwho k`o qoy`gas`{` bl{wsqoalwhd yhsh h wshl{ob{{ë` ga bln`sohíña{$ ` xqa k`lwsbcqb{bmlbnbkhwb~hoalwa yhsh `{ ys`ka{{`{ ga hyqshíë`$ k`l{wsqíë` a ~abkqdhíë` gh l`wïkbh$ gao`g` khgh ~az ohb{ èmbd, @{ auaoyd`{ hkboh {ë` hyalh{ bdq{wshwb~`{, K`o` n`k` ga{wahswbm`$ gawao`/l`{ {`csa h blndqêlkbh gh{ l`~h{ wakl`d`mbh{ {`csa ` wshchde` g` sa~b{`sga wauw`, H{{bo k`o` auy`{w`$ l`{{` `dehs a{whsè ~`dwhg` yhsh `{ y`{bkb`lhoalw`{ gasa~b{`sa{ hkaskh g` q{` ga l`~h{ wakl`d`mbh{ l` {aq gbh h gbh ys`nb{{b`lhd,
Sa~b{ë` gh n`soh `q sa~b{ë` g` gb{kqs{`0
Ao qoh yas{yakwb~h wshgbkb`lhd$ h sa~b{ë` â ~b{wh k`o` qoh awhyh {qc{axqalwaé ys`gqíë` a{ksbwh$ ysblkbyhdoalwa ga hdql`{$ k`o ` `cjawb~` ysblkbyhd ga k`ssbmbs `wauw` a gawakwhs ~b`dhíña{ lh{ k`l~alíña{ gh l`soh kqdwh$ yhqwhgh l` {al{` k`oqo gaxqa sa~b{hs sa{qoa/{a h k`ssbmbs `sw`mshnbh$ y`lwqhíë`$ k`lk`sgãlkbh ~aschd a l`oblhd$ga hk`sg` k`o h{ l`soh{ hy`lwhgh{ ao mshoèwbkh{$ gbkb`lèsb`{ a ohlqhb{, La{{hhc`sghmao$ y`swhlw`$ h sa~b{ë` â wshwhgh k`o` qoh gh{ awhyh{ ga saa{ksbwqsh %kn,@DB^ABSH$ 3989"$ {alg` n`khdbzhgh ao {qh mshlga ohb`sbh ao {bwqhíña{ ga {hdh gahqdh$ `q {ajh$ ao k`lwauw`{ a{k`dhsa{$ k`o ` `cjawb~` ga {asao hy`lwhg`{ `{ h{yakw`{a{wsqwqshb{ alk`lwshg`{ l`{ wauw`{$ yad`{ ys`na{{`sa{,Ao qoh yas{yakwb~h gbnasalwa$ y`s da~hsao ao k`lwh `{ ys`nb{{b`lhb{ xqayhswbkbyho g` ys`ka{{` ga sa~b{ë` ao k`lwauw`{ auwsha{k`dhsa{$ ga{whkho`{ h `csh
 Eb{wûsbh g` kask` ga Db{c`h
%[HSHOHM@$ 8225" a ` hswbm` kbalwïnbk`
 H sadhíë`auaoydhs alwsa hqw`s a sa~b{`s %a `qws`{ wshchdehg`sa{ wauwqhb{ {aoadehlwa{" a ` obw`ga Chcad
%HSS@J@$ 399;"$ cao k`o` gqh{ yqcdbkhíña{ xqa aln`kho h sa~b{ë` gawauw`{ {`c h ûwbkh g` sa~b{`s: `
 Ohlqhd ga sa~b{ë`$
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 Ohlqhd g` sa~b{`s 
$ agbwhg` y`s Ohdwh %3999"$ l` a{whg` ga [ë`Yhqd` %kn, @DB^ABSH$ 3989",Yhshdadhoalwa h`{ hk`lwakboalw`{ g` kask` ga Db{c`h$ ` hqw`s y`swqmqê{ J`{â[hshohm` k`lwh h eb{wûsbh ga qo sa~b{`s ga wauw`{$ yas{`lhmao {`dbwèsb` a wïobg`$ xqa
Faboadb`l / sa~b{ë` ga wauw`{ewwy:}}},faboadb`l,k`o,c%;8";377/8371

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