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Lauren Hill Media Blog Feedback

Lauren Hill Media Blog Feedback

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This is feedback from my Media teacher about the content on my blog.
This is feedback from my Media teacher about the content on my blog.

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Blog Review Monday 20
 th
February 2012Name:___Lauren Hill__________________________________ Group/ Production Company:__________________________________ Film Title:_____________________________________ Research and Planning /20
Evidence of Research and Planning
 There is excellent research into similar products and apotential target audience
y
 
FOUR
analyses for opening title sequences includingSe7en
y
 
Ev
idence of research into the codes and con
v
entions of the horror genre and sub-genres
y
 
Ev
idence of research into Todoro
v
s Narrati
v
e Theory
y
 
A
pplication of preliminary to horror film
y
 
Slideshare/ Di
v
share essay on
O
N
E
whole filmexploring macro and micro analysis
 Y
Moreneeded
 Y
N
  There is excellent organisation of actors, locations, costumesor props
y
 
F
ilming schedule
y
 
L
ocation scout photographs
y
 
C
asting photographs with explanation of casting(use/defy/de
v
elop con
v
entions)
?
?
? There is excellent work on shotlists, layouts, drafting,scripting or storyboarding
y
 
U
pload of Preliminary
y
 
Ev
aluation of Preliminary
y
 
Planning of Story Structure
y
 
Storyboard
y
 
A
nimatic
y
 
Screenplay
y
 
Shotlist
 Y
?
?
?
?
 Y
?
 
 Time management is excellent
y
 
F
ilming schedule
y
 
I
ndependent management of research and planning
?
  There is excellent use of digital technology or
IC
 T in thepresentation
y
 
V
aried use of media forms e.g. embedded clips, ppts,word docs, podcasts,
v
odcasts, images (photos, screengrabs). There should not be lengthy passages of textposted.
N
D
etails of incomplete research and planning- must be completed by Friday24
 th
February for assessment.
y
 
For the horror genre documentary you want to focus on what the task was:to explore horror codes and conventions. Make this clear. You werent reallybeing assessed on your use of iMovie here. Also do a write-up of the codes of and conventions of horror below in addition to the video. Go back to thehandouts and use those to help you.
 
y
 
T
odorovs Narrative
T
heory- title should be
T
odorovs Narrative
T
heoryapplied to Sweeney
T
odd
 
y
 
E
xcellent analysis of Preliminary sequence in
T
he Shining. Make sure this isclear in the title and task explanation- Preliminary Sequence applied to
T
heShining conversation sequence
 
y
 
Shot
T
ypes title should read- Preliminary Sequence Shot
T
ypes and Continuity
 
y
 
Needs evaluation of final preliminary task
 
y
 
T
ry to be even more specific when analysing the use of shot types.
T
he use of the CU shots position you in line with the killer- they seem to be anexternalized thought process of his scheming and planning.
T
hey make theaudience feel almost complicit in the planning, yet because of the CU shotsand anonymity of the killer we are still left uneasy as his identity is concealedsetting up the thriller genre. Must make reference back to how the genre isconstructed.
T
his is excellent however.
 
y
 
D
ead Silence analysis- use appropriate terminology e.g. what kind of shot isthe eye shot- an extreme close-up. What is the effect of using such shots- youneed to consider what comes before and after for this to make sense.
y
 
Sweeney
T
odd analysis- needs to use more specific terminology again. Whatkind of shots are used? Be more precsise when analysing the typography.What kind of font is used?
D
escribe it and analyse it. Avoid phrases like,stands out.
T
his is vague.
E
diting needs to be more precisely explored-pace? Cuts?
T
ransitions?
y
 
I
nspiration for our opening sequence should read Planning of Story Structure
y
 
E
xcellent screenplay
y
 
E
vidence of planning is missing. See ??? above.
y
 
T
oo reliant of the use of ppts at the moment. Use other forms to presentinformation
y
 
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