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Name: Liam Cooke

Title: TURBOROCK

Mood Boards Examples of other texts/style models Analysis of magazine covers/film openings 25 word pitch Pitch feedback Mock ups Test shots Colour Palette Audience profile

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General Comment: Good effort Liam to complete all elements further: Cover: y y Add price and date to your cover. The picture is heavy on top with the hair clashing with your title. Either lighten hair slightly / recut so it looks less like a block/ consider changing the colour of your title. Your artist could also do with being moved up slightly. Coverlines look good but the main anchorage is wonky. Reconsider adding effect to black so it detaches from the shirt. Background grey makes whole thing look washed out. perhaps 4 for a colour palette is too many here when the colours are not in complement.

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Contents: y Photo choice of cover star continues to add interest but the other photo does not and is squashed. Sizing of both more thought. Both need to be anchored as not clear what articles they are reflecting. Greater variety of shots would help. Colour palette (black, grey, blue) is uninspiring especially as the black is so heavy with its use of thick lines. Not enough content reflected and too wide gaps between pages. What is happening in between? Title overlarge and subheadings need to be equal font size.

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Better but still a shadow across the photo. Article needs much more depth and detail as is far too short. Proof read to eliminate errors in technical accuracy. Practical Draft Level: 3c

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