hkadman

The first read it I was somewhat taken a back by the q horrific scene description - though told with such talent. I read it again and found it fascinating - it's a master piece.

Froggy

Haim, thank you. I intended for it to have a sense of magical enchantment, with a layer of horror just beneath the surface.

Froggy

Ninja, it is a poem written some time ago, which through poetry, expresses a real life terror. And.. a deep seated mistrust about who others really are behind the masks they wear.

ninjapirate007

i don't know why but this scared me

hkadman

Enchanting and so true. Haim

Froggy

Thank you Tony. This is very different than some of my writings. An experiment really in trying to convey the lulling, then ultimately the realization of emptiness/terror experienced by the hapless woman.

ajfejfar

Great! Tony