ArunaDeepa10

:) creative imagination

choco8vanilla

Nice~ I'm going to upload my story also... but not now... later after i manage to write it in my laptop ^_^

adrichan

cute!!!!

sanyodude14

Nice...but so short :(( I want more :D

omniyet

very cute

vilhelmin

it's nice and although a kind of fairy tale ,still intereting to be read with a smile...

nophus

sweet children story

dla637

aw how cute

babyli0n

cute story! =D i like it, do write more

R117

How creative Trip!! Thanks for all the effort Wish you all the best in your next article (( i will read it to my small sister ))

ndonji

how did manage to write this storie

ndonji

your stories interesting

utilizato

Thanks!

Pamela Jean Hunt

I didnt particualrly care for this,a ten year old boy might..I liked the beginning when Thursday had to be found...but you lost me after that when it turned mediaeval. You could take this and work with it. Sepaerate into two storeis,the finding thursday and then the dragon spiel. Please forgive me for being so forward but you have a sweet countenance and talent as well...

Wakhinuddin S

Great story!!! Goodbless U.