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domentora

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Highschool student

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Running, reading, friends, (listening to) music, tv, video games, high school newspaper

Lately I've been reading

Hahaha, like I have any real time to read in high school...lolCurrently-&qu ot;Pendragon #4-The Realit... (More)

Lately I've been writing

High school newspaper stories lol

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Hunters

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End It

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I'm Gone (do you care?)

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  • Version: 2
  • Date: November 09, 2009

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  • Date: November 09, 2009

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  • Date: November 09, 2009

12 / 14 / 2009

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kellywa scribbled:

Good job babe, very clear. Might I recommend you make sure the tense is constant? At several points you change from present to past and back. But good!

12 / 15 / 2009

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Hunters

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domentora revised this document

  • Hunters
  • Version: 2
  • Date: November 09, 2009

11 / 09 / 2009

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domentora revised this document

  • Hunters
  • Version: 1
  • Date: November 09, 2009

11 / 09 / 2009

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domentora revised this document

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  • Version: 3
  • Date: November 09, 2009

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kellywa scribbled:

Good job babe, very clear. Might I recommend you make sure the tense is constant? At several points you change from present to past and back. But good!

12 / 15 / 2009

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Hunters

PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS! / Travis is sixteen when his father falls off of his boat while early-morning fishing at the lake. He washes up two days late...

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Category: Creative Writing, Novels

11 / 09 / 2009
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domentora revised this document

  • Hunters
  • Version: 2
  • Date: November 09, 2009

11 / 09 / 2009

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domentora revised this document

  • Hunters
  • Version: 1
  • Date: November 09, 2009

11 / 09 / 2009

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domentora revised this document

  • Hunters
  • Version: 3
  • Date: November 09, 2009

12 / 14 / 2009

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kellywa scribbled:

Good job babe, very clear. Might I recommend you make sure the tense is constant? At several points you change from present to past and back. But good!

12 / 15 / 2009

domentora Scribbled:
For anyone who reads my words or subscribes to me, I would very much appreciate it if you would leave me a comment -scribble- letting me know what you think of it. Length or detail does not matter, I just like a bit of feedback. Thank you!
11 / 08 / 2009
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End It

IF YOU READ ANYTHING OF MINE PLEASE LEAVE ME A COMMENT. This is highly appreciated as 1-I like to know who reads my stuff, and 2-i like to know wha...

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Reads: 42

Category: Creative Writing, Short Stories

11 / 07 / 2009
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I'm Gone (do you care?)

IF YOU READ ANYTHING OF MINE PLEASE LEAVE ME A COMMENT. This is highly appreciated as 1-I like to know who reads my stuff, and 2-i like to know wha...

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Reads: 91

Category: Creative Writing, Poetry

11 / 07 / 2009
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