The story was week dude!! lol Nah serious tho the sort of story you make up when you need to get that little one off to sleep and can't be bothered to read thro the trad one's. it has all the elements of every well known fairy tale so who needs too much detail, they know how it all goes anywayz. Wanka & Booz? would'nt wanna give them any ideas they're likely to come up with anyway, so i'd name change those. You appear to have a fast paced mind buzzing with ideas which you put into action leaving details up to others. Rock on buddy.