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Brian Heffron:
In her "Class" in tennis she was unbeatable! Totally true image of her.
Brian Heffron:
And thank you so much for your kinds words and thoughts. They are truly appreciated.
fu67:
wow, see i'd be lucky if i could serve the ball within the squares, as u can tell im not a tennis person but i do love to play lol when it's not scored... and that's amazing, from you poem it seems to me that you make her out to be a role model, or better yet a type of superhero, anyone who has abilities like wht your describing is pretty super...but it's sad like a fallen hero at the beginning
fu67:
but you can't focus on the bad...but in reality everyone only focuses on the recent never on the whole life just those last few horrible moments and that's just terrible, they should be ashamed...n like i said before i was in that group, and i am deeply ashamed
The Heretic's Psalm
from sarita brown in Creative Writing, Poetry
After three days dead when you came out of the dark earth, were you blinded by the sunlight? After d
sarita brown:
hey baby .. its ok. stirs stuff up.. read the poem. judas never told jesus ****. he just climbed out of hell. no bargain was made . God is not Love. LOve is God. everyone goes. at least thats my little theological nuggett.
Teilhard de Chardin:
Amen
The woman I love left me and said, " I love you, your all I think of.... but its just not enough" That was an eye opener for an old romantic soul like me. sent me to hell, but I climbed back and yes the light is bright and every time my children leave from visiting me I descend albeit a little less deeper each time.
Brian Heffron:
I write to try and comfort myself and others.
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from fu67 in Creative Writing, Poetry
5/13/09 / psych tip one: repeating it over and over again hardly works, you never retain the information unless you believe it / 2: punishing yourself for not loving yourself doesn't work / 3: positive thoughts don't last long and don't effect your personality / 4: those that think i know what i'm doin...
Kenosis23:
"downsized idea"> this pharse reminds me of the T-shirt slogan "when all else fails, lower your expectations." I would suggest that praise for an idea that hasn't been downsized feels as good, if not better. what do you think?
fu67:
all praise feels good...but praise on something that has been cast aside by others makes you realize that just because one person thinks badly of an idea doesn't mean that that idea is crap and that you should loss all hope...but yes praise upon praise upon praise is wonderful but then you tend to get a big head about you...
Fail
from fu67 in Creative Writing, Poetry
9/9/09 / seems to me that this one day was when i was feeling the lowest i've felt in a while...
fu67:
it seems like you never can write enough, i hate that feeling but i love the fact that i have so much to say....
it shall be truly sad the day when you have nothing left to write, your work is amazing!!!!
Kenosis23:
Thank you gain ... it has been a little bit shattering to discover that I had things to write that others responded to ...
fu67:
i no exactly how you feel....i first put my poems up on scribd cuz i didn't wanna keep my handwritten copies around because certain individuals called them crap and used them for the fire, so when someone actually likes them its that 'omg im floating on air' feeling...it's nice to know that your work is appreciated by someone
Kenosis23:
:D
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Well I'll be...
from June A in Creative Writing, Poetry
A poem about finding a friend/lover/heart of gold beneath layers of crud. However it works for you personally...
Well I'll be...
from June A in Creative Writing, Poetry
A poem about finding a friend/lover/heart of gold beneath layers of crud. However it works for you personally...
June A:
Thanks fu67, not sure about performing it live though.scawy.. maybe from behind a curtain or under the table..!
Miss
from fu67 in Creative Writing, Poetry
9/9/09 / again separation anxiety....seems like i went through a lot of it
Kenosis23:
Yes ... I agree; we need to be reminded ometimes!
It Breaks My Heart
from Linglang
Memory It breaks my heart That I want to run Every time, I see the low bright sun The falling leaves
Linglang:
sending you a hug : )
Time Without Time
from enkidukid in Creative Writing, Poetry
A bit more of the same - saw a short film this morning - an old artist at work in a hut in a forest ... and he said: you can't imagine a time without time ... so this is a kind of homage to him and his work.
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Time Without Time
from enkidukid in Creative Writing, Poetry
A bit more of the same - saw a short film this morning - an old artist at work in a hut in a forest ... and he said: you can't imagine a time without time ... so this is a kind of homage to him and his work.
05/01/09 – 21/03/09
from thomaswingfield in Creative Writing, Poetry
this is my first draft as part of the assignment I'm workin on, a piece to my girlfriend Georgina, my most successful attempt in describing what she means to me. / as far as you guys are concerned, I'm really looking for any criticism of linguistics, does it make sense? does it flow? are there an...
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