While it's true that comparing our student body's test scores with those of children in other countries' scores puts into perspective how appalling education is here, and I agree with your overall message of criticism, the grammatical errors you have scattered throughout the paper and your unprofessional wording choice takes away from your message.
Reviewing the “Highlights from PISA 2006: Performance of U.S. 15-Year-Old Students in Science and / Mathematics Literacy in an International Context...