Finally getting a chance to read your online novel, Amy! I'm finding the flow from one character to another to be smooth and love your observations and sense of humor. The one thing that caught me as a reader was I felt there needed to be a chapter-closing one sentence paragraph on page 43. Maybe something like, "The house that Lewis now owned as well." Just for one last beat before starting the new chapter. But you go, you brave girl. Love the chances you take and your ease with new technology.